VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.1 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[mommysboiii]

Jeremy is a man hoe. That is all I want to say famm...But here's my message to Cindy
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cindy is a hoe but we love it

Gillian can get killed by Harambes big cock smacking her upside the head for all i care fam. Cheating cunt...

Gillian best waifu bruv, maybe cindy/holly depends on the corrupten route if she is together with ian.

 

[alexferno]

Yeah, to be clear I don't think the sending of photos in the two scenes are similar. Rather that the previous encounters between Ian/Cindy and Lena/Jeremy pushed the limits between them under the pretext of being something innocent (professional photoshoot / just a game), and that both Cindy and Jeremy then found an excuse to contact Ian and Lena about the innocent parts of those encounters (Cindy had finally gotten the photos from Axel / Jeremy genuinely wondered if Lena had noticed anything about Louise's behaviour), in return giving them a chance to continue the not so innocent interactions while pretending they're not doing anything wrong. Cindy probably asks Ian about his opinion both because she wants to continue their flirt and because she's genuinely interested in his opinion in a slightly more professional way. At least she and Ian can pretend it's the latter, while the exchange between Lena and Jeremy quickly throw all that subtlety overboard.

I also agree about the improvements you mention. When they're texting, I think they have a whole bunch of details they could've picked up on to heat up the interaction while still playing innocent. Lena: "I'm sorry you ended up being dragged into Ivy's crazy dare… But I really needed that money And I made you cum and you admitted you think I'm the hottest, so I guess maybe you didn't mind " Or, even including the sexting: Jeremy: "So, what are you doing?" Lena: "Uhm… I was just taking some pictures for my Stalkfap, now I'm trying to decide which of them I'm gonna share But I'm new to this and still have no idea what my followers actually want to see Haha, sorry but you asked" Jeremy: "I think I have a pretty clear idea about that Just ask if you need some help " (Lena, lying to herself: Is he asking me to send nudes? Well, the last time he saw me nude, it was totally innocent, and that means it would be innocent this time as well… Besides Ivy told me I'm bad at choosing pictures for Stalkfap, and I'm pretty sure Jeremy knows what guys would want to see of me. This is actually just very helpful, and I'm gonna share the pictures on Stalkfap anyway.) And then afterwards: Lena: "Thanks, that was helpful, in a weird way I guess I own you one… Let me know if you ever need help deciding what kind of dick pics girls like " Crowd goes wild when Lena posts the picture Jeremy suggested -> perfect excuse to send Jeremy nudes every time she's gonna post to Stalkfap.

They would still know that what they're doing is wrong, but it would give them the chance to pretend to themselves and each other that it's not. At least certainly to a bigger extent than with the current "here's a picture deep down my throat, that's where I want your cock to be" tone.

Edit: Yeah, kinda wish I'd instead paraphrased how that scene hypothetically could've played out, because now it seems like I'm some kind of aspirational ORS fan fiction writer. I promise I'm not, it just seemed like the easiest way to illustrate it

I get your point, but that scene couldn't happen if Lena chooses not to create a Stalkfap account.

 

[ename144]

I get your point, but that scene couldn't happen if Lena chooses not to create a Stalkfap account.

That's not necessarily a bad thing. Is a Lena who refuses to create a Stalkfap account despite being desperate for money really the sort of person to pursue Louise's boyfriend? It's certainly debatable, but if one side of that debate leads to a much more coherent presentation of Lena I'd say that's a strong argument in its favor.

 

[reyir]

Is it just me or does anyone else want to slap Jeremy. I just cannot stand him as a friend, I mean it’s bone thing to be a player. I just don’t like that if Ian confides in him about Lena he is still willing to go for it, same with Allison, and Emma. The dude has no respect for anyone but himself. I hope we get to beat him in the eventual tournament and even steal Ivy away.

To be fair, Ian its not that good too if we compare him to jeremy, only Lena that Jeremy bang behind Ian back, for Allison and Emma, he told Ian first is Ian not go after them? so that he can chase after them if its not... at the same time, Ian bang Cindy, that actually Wade girlfriend, his own friend, without even wade knows and their relationship keep getting worse after that. To be fair, i know that Wade kinda has too much ego in himself, but its the same for cindy too, and Ian should just give advice to both of them to fix their nearly broken relationship, not just banging cindy without wade knows

So yeah, you cant get mad at jeremy without getting mad at Ians too, cuz they are the same

 

[Dracodadark]

To be fair, Ian its not that good too if we compare him to jeremy, only Lena that Jeremy bang behind Ian back, for Allison and Emma, he told Ian first is Ian not go after them? so that he can chase after them if its not... at the same time, Ian bang Cindy, that actually Wade girlfriend, his own friend, without even wade knows and their relationship keep getting worse after that. To be fair, i know that Wade kinda has too much ego in himself, but its the same for cindy too, and Ian should just give advice to both of them to fix their nearly broken relationship, not just banging cindy without wade knows

So yeah, you cant get mad at jeremy without getting mad at Ians too, cuz they are the same

Difference is that you can choose to be a good guy or a dick with Ian. You don’t have to pursue Cindy unless you want to, where Jeremy will go after nearly anything with a pulse.

 

[N0nsens3]

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[reyir]

Difference is that you can choose to be a good guy or a dick with Ian. You don’t have to pursue Cindy unless you want to, where Jeremy will go after nearly anything with a pulse.

isnt that how Jeremy character made for? he is free spirited man and doesnt really care about serious relationship, he just wanna having fun and everything is based on your playstyle, if you choose Ian not chasing after Alison, Emma or Lena and only chasing holly, you cant blamed Jeremy if he choose to chase after Alison, Emma or Lena, because you are the one who doesnt let Ian chase after them and that girls its not Ian property, everyone had a chance with them. And jeremy as always, wanna had fun with them and them girls also like it when they had fun with jeremy not some rape type of shit.

And about Jeremy cheating with Lena even though Lena and Ian kinda became couple and Jeremy knows it, you can always stop it from happening by not allowing Lena to participate the truth or dare and not having sex with jeremy in the morning, like how you can prevent Ian chasing after Cindy like you just said, thats why this game had two protagonist you can control both of them.

 

[tronnley]

Can Lena still get into a relationship with Ian in the last episode if she goes into Jeremy in Louise's room or does she have to keep it casual?

 

[Reaurt]

Can Lena still get into a relationship with Ian in the last episode if she goes into Jeremy in Louise's room or does she have to keep it casual?

If you have Lena go in to Louise's room for Jeremy, then she will keep it casual with Ian.

 

[BloodyMares]

Can Lena still get into a relationship with Ian in the last episode if she goes into Jeremy in Louise's room or does she have to keep it casual?

Casual only. If you want a serious relationship with Ian but still keep the Jeremy path open-ended, don't rush things and let Jeremy sleep in peace.

 

[Deleted member 4914405]

People here arguing why Lena would be so interested in Jeremy - we are talking about the universe where black people are either background characters or turn white and blonde after few updates. Jeremy is literally the only option if you have a jungle fever lol. He's the chosen one.

 

[Dracodadark]

isnt that how Jeremy character made for? he is free spirited man and doesnt really care about serious relationship, he just wanna having fun and everything is based on your playstyle, if you choose Ian not chasing after Alison, Emma or Lena and only chasing holly, you cant blamed Jeremy if he choose to chase after Alison, Emma or Lena, because you are the one who doesnt let Ian chase after them and that girls its not Ian property, everyone had a chance with them. And jeremy as always, wanna had fun with them and them girls also like it when they had fun with jeremy not some rape type of shit.

And about Jeremy cheating with Lena even though Lena and Ian kinda became couple and Jeremy knows it, you can always stop it from happening by not allowing Lena to participate the truth or dare and not having sex with jeremy in the morning, like how you can prevent Ian chasing after Cindy like you just said, thats why this game had two protagonist you can control both of them.

mite the willing aspect for me if it’s my friends girl or potential girl, even if the chance presented itself I would say no. You don’t willingly do that to a friend imo. I respect your opinion but mine is that Jeremy is a bad friend who only cares about himself. I like perry, Emma, wade, and even Allison for being better friends. Jeremy I just want a chance to end the friendship or see him shut downwhich is fun with Lena.

 

[Horker14]

Really enjoyed it. One of the best written VNs out there. And it was especially hilarious to NTR everyone when the protag had high charisma.

My favorite character is probably Holly, i just can't resist the cuteness.

The artwork is really good on the eyes too.

 

[atrebor68]

Little poll: Holly corruption YES/NO ;
if yes: up to what grade would you like, from "a little slutness" to "GGGB" ?

 

[Deleted member 4914405]

Little poll: Holly corruption YES/NO ;
if yes: up to what grade would you like, from "a little slutness" to "GGGB" ?

Not just "YES" but "FUCK YES"
Almost GGGB - bleached hair with different style, no glasses, nice fake boobs, arm/leg tattoos, tonned down body with more developed ass, casual drug usage and sex and also very important - life priorities change where she prefers to use her writer status to turn herself into empty celeb thot. Wouldn't go as far as to make her suck drug dealers for the dope or become a porn star, but turning her into Ivy 2.0 would be amazing and make sense. Also - make her fuck the club bouncer and have at least one threesome in each configuration (we already have FFF I guess).

 

[monk_56]

Little poll: Holly corruption YES/NO ;
if yes: up to what grade would you like, from "a little slutness" to "GGGB" ?

No. Holly is perfect the way she at the start of the game. Both in appearance and personality. She perfect for a 'good girl' but kinky with her partner/partners set-up. (Trinity please!)

Any of the corruption that flows from the other girls manipulating her insecurity just makes me sad.

 

[mommysboiii]

Little poll: Holly corruption YES/NO ;
if yes: up to what grade would you like, from "a little slutness" to "GGGB" ?

yeah would love 2 routes with ian one route where holly stays the way she is if ian says i like the way you are and lena stops ivy and stands up for holly and the other route where ian support holly to change and ivy and lena influance her with drugs and party full slut mode poor ian so the vanilla bois have a route and the more kinky guys too

No. Holly is perfect the way she at the start of the game. Both in appearance and personality. She perfect for a 'good girl' but kinky with her partner/partners set-up. (Trinity please!)

Any of the corruption that flows from the other girls manipulating her insecurity just makes me sad.

This makes zero sense so you want holly stays the way she is ?? but than be slutty with ian and accept a thresome ???? lol sorry mate but that makes no sense for a writter like eva that dont writes like other games on this site.

 

[lipe2410]

Little poll: Holly corruption YES/NO ;
if yes: up to what grade would you like, from "a little slutness" to "GGGB" ?

No corruption, but a healthy boost in her confidence and self-stem so she can see herself like the beautifull woman she really is and make her enjoy more her sexuality.

This makes zero sense so you want holly stays the way she is ?? but than be slutty with ian and accept a thresome ???? lol sorry mate but that makes no sense for a writter like eva that dont writes like other games on this site.

This makes sense, people are complex and isn't because a woman is naughty and has her kinks in bed that she is a "slut" 24/7 or she isn't a "good girl". Actually, this thougth that for a woman make and enjoy more kinkier stuff in sex can only happen of she is a complete slut or is "corrupted" is just a common trope in this kind of stories. Makes total sense Holly keep be herself in her work, social and professional life, but when she is in private with Ian or Lena (or with both, hopefully) she let her kinks and naughtyness go freely.

 

[monk_56]

yeah would love 2 routes with ian one route where holly stays the way she is if ian says i like the way you are and lena stops ivy and stands up for holly and the other route where ian support holly to change and ivy and lena influance her with drugs and party full slut mode poor ian so the vanilla bois have a route and the more kinky guys too


This makes zero sense so you want holly stays the way she is ?? but than be slutty with ian and accept a thresome ???? lol sorry mate but that makes no sense for a writter like eva that dont writes like other games on this site.

Apparently your world-view on sex and sexuality is mostly informed by shitty incel hentai

You can totally be slutty in bed with your committed poly partners and not go full corruption with a bunch of random fuckin' people- whilst still maintaining your demure demeanor in public.

In fact- most of the people you know that act very polite in public probably get down to some pretty kinky stuff betwixt the sheets with their partners in bed.

It is far less common for people to just go full corruption slut mode in all walks of life- that is mainly a Hentai trope.