VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.6] [Eva Kiss]

[Ray_D]

Remember that moment with Axel, more like self-defence, because Axel being a hysterical cunt.

Missed characters: Robert, Marcel, basic Ian/Lena on the game beginning, Gillian, Alison, Natasha (GGGB cameo)

Robert: he's bad at sex, doesn't know how to fight and is one of the reasons why lena got fired from her job at the restaurant.

Marcel: Like Jeremy, his only goal is to be a tall black man with a third leg. At this point I think the real size queens are not the female characters in the game but the eva donors.

Basic Ian: a broken and stagnant man after ending a four year relationship.

Basic lena: A girl with dreams and aspirations who had to give up everything to take care of a mother who loves her brother more and dismisses her efforts.

Gillian: If being a basic bitch was a profession Gillian would be employee of the month for 4 consecutive years.

Alison: it's a fucking trap, that woman wants to get pregnant and trap a man.

Natasha: I want to get my hands on that redhead.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Robert: he's bad at sex, doesn't know how to fight and is one of the reasons why lena got fired from her job at the restaurant.

Should be kicked from the game. Garbage character

Marcel: Like Jeremy, his only goal is to be a tall black man with a third leg. At this point I think the real size queens are not the female characters in the game but the eva donors.

And that's sad Eva doesn't give him a personality, like for Jeremy making only for BBC kinks. That's remind me things with black characters in games who exists only for DEI points.

Basic lena: A girl with dreams and aspirations who had to give up everything to take care of a mother who loves her brother more and dismisses her efforts.

Truth, and honestly she shouldn't give a fuck if mom theats her that way. My Lena gave them the minimum amount of money, knowing where her mother spent it - they won't get another cent. Lena should get on with her life.

Gillian: If being a basic bitch was a profession Gillian would be employee of the month for 4 consecutive years.

Josy of Our Red String (cheater)

Natasha: I want to get my hands on that redhead.

Only one normal natural redhead in the game, can't wait for more content with her. But:

 

[robrize2169]

Lena and Holly are my two LI's. so very happy that there is the throuple in the making after the recent update. really all i care about tbh. my Lena did nothing with any of the guys and only with Ivy and Holly. now she is cuckqueening for chad Ian and i hope this path gets lots of content in future updates.
i like Cindy to be honest. but only her looks. her personality is shit and i don't care if she leaves Wade because he deserves better. i like Allison too and have a save where Ian is exclusively dating her while Lena is staying with the girls and ignoring all the guys. i even like Cherry a bit, but there is not much content with her.
blue balls all around for all them losers.

 

[Ray_D]

Should be kicked from the game. Garbage character


And that's sad Eva doesn't give him a personality, like for Jeremy making only for BBC kinks. That's remind me things with black characters in games who exists only for DEI points.


Truth, and honestly she shouldn't give a fuck if mom theats her that way. My Lena gave them the minimum amount of money, knowing where her mother spent it - they won't get another cent. Lena should get on with her life.


Josy of Our Red String (cheater)


Only one normal natural redhead in the game, can't wait for more content with her. But:

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Well, the next updates will be exclusively for lena so you know what that means.

 

[Andrea9999]

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The glutton on the left will be a perfect customer when Lena is farmed out.

 

[NewSeal]

Only one normal natural redhead in the game, can't wait for more content with her. But:

I know this is wishful thinking, but I'm really hoping Ian can have a Nat route, she's one of my favorites from GGGB. And generally, bringing back characters who didn't get much screen time/weren't explored more in the first game is a really good idea.

 

[Augustus Commodus]

Personally I only hate Louise for being a social parasite, all the other characters are fine.

Short and straightforward. What about the others from the crew?

I did a quick breakdown of my views of the characters in my first post in this thread. Some of whom I've discussed ad nauseum since, but I'll do a more detailed breakdown. Given that I’ve already written most of this recently, I apologize to anyone that’s already sick of it.

Spoilers for length.

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I apologize for the length. I know it wasn’t the comedy gold that Ray_D provided. I’ll shut up now.

 

[Xupuzulla]

Imagine Louise sucking Alison big titties while Lena watches from the cuck chair

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

I did a quick breakdown of my views of the characters in my first post in this thread. Some of whom I've discussed ad nauseum since, but I'll do a more detailed breakdown. Given that I’ve already written most of this recently, I apologize to anyone that’s already sick of it.

Spoilers for length.

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I apologize for the length. I know it wasn’t the comedy gold that Ray_D provided. I’ll shut up now.

This is incredible work. I can't write a detailed opinion on each character on this (don't have a couple of extra hours). Amazing review and I see a lot of work with the psychology of the characters. I will make comments about Jeremy, he is not always supportive. On the contrary, he is a rat. Ready to steal a girl from Ian (if your Ian is not decisive enough), then tries to score with Emma at the expense of your success. Also, if Lena has a high lust , he will not mind to have a blowjob from her, knowing that Ian has feelings for her. Jeremy is a bad friend, but you are right that he doesn't reach the chad-status. He tries to get away from his past, where he was shy and unattractive to girls, but he does it dirty.

 

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Imagine Louise sucking Alison big titties while Lena watches from the cuck chair

 

[Darth Nelson]

Wasn't there a mod available at some point, or is it being updated?

 

[JuanCarlosdeAvila]

This is the best game ever done. Art is awesome.

 

[JoSolo]

Is there a way you can prevent Ian and Lena from breaking up without them both being a saint and only fucking each other? Or is the breakup always happening if they both fuck around?

 

[Augustus Commodus]

This is incredible work. I can't write a detailed opinion on each character on this (don't have a couple of extra hours). Amazing review and I see a lot of work with the psychology of the characters. I will make comments about Jeremy, he is not always supportive. On the contrary, he is a rat. Ready to steal a girl from Ian (if your Ian is not decisive enough), then tries to score with Emma at the expense of your success. Also, if Lena has a high lust , he will not mind to have a blowjob from her, knowing that Ian has feelings for her. Jeremy is a bad friend, but you are right that he doesn't reach the chad-status. He tries to get away from his past, where he was shy and unattractive to girls, but he does it dirty.

In regards to Jeremy, it takes a lot of work for him to betray Ian. I actually wanted one playthrough where Ian loved Lena, they were dating, and Lena was fooling around with Jeremy. After many, many tries, I never got it to work, which isn't to say it isn't possible. If Ian tells Jeremy that he really likes Lena, Lena needs to have a big cock fetish, take Molly, and chose to suck off Jeremy after the club to make it happen; even in that case, Jeremy protests and is against it although he does give in. If Lena has more than that one encounter with Jeremy, she will refuse to become a couple with Ian. If she doesn't do anything else, nothing more with Jeremy will occur. Similarly with Alison and Emma. Jeremy will only pursue Alison if Ian tells him he can try, at least until Ian dumps her. He'll only try with Emma if Ian tells him he should. Of course, if Ian has a no-strings-attached or casual relationship with Lena, Jeremy will consider her fair game. That's one reason I referred to him as a "friendly rival." He is only a rival if the player choses to make him one. He more fits the sharing or eskimo-brother role than the stealing-your-girl role. On the other hand, my perspective is limited by my experiences. It is possible there is another side to Jeremy I've never seen, and I don't know because I've never seen it.

Is there a way you can prevent Ian and Lena from breaking up without them both being a saint and only fucking each other? Or is the breakup always happening if they both fuck around?

There are four possible outcomes. Ian can ignore it, they can break up, they can enter an open relationship, or Ian can forgive Lena. The first option is easy, just have Ian not confront Lena about her cheating. The break up option is also pretty easy—I believe it is always available. As for the other two, I don't know for certain why they may not be appearing for you. I believe one of the requirements for them is that Ian cannot still be hung up on Gillian. If you are getting the Gillian dream the morning before the confrontation, you'll need to spend a willpower to get over it. Also, for the open relationship, Lena either needed to decide that she planned on continuing to cheat, or Ian needs to be cheating himself. Hope this helps.

 

[ffive]

Is there a way you can prevent Ian and Lena from breaking up without them both being a saint and only fucking each other? Or is the breakup always happening if they both fuck around?

It's up to the player. You can either decide for one of them (or both) to break up, or to stop (or keep) cheating. If Ian is informed by Jeremy that Lena has been cheating on him, he can choose to confront her about it or stay quiet. If you confront Lena, you have option to turn their relationship into fully open arrangement where they both can fuck other people, but stay together. Alternatively, if Ian got over Gillian he can also simply forgive Lena.

 

[jjhcars]

is the game completed? or its just the chapter that is completed?

 

[Erectosaurus]

I still feel like Marcel is a meme character. He only exists in the case that Lena is dating Ian because on that route she refuses to mess around with Jeremy so Evakiss needed an alternate BBC fetish character.

 

[Andrea9999]

is the game completed? or its just the chapter that is completed?

Chapter 13 is coming...then 14...and then six more chapters, but they will be in Arabic. I suggest you start brushing up now.

 

[Andrea9999]

I still feel like Marcel is a meme character. He only exists in the case that Lena is dating Ian because on that route she refuses to mess around with Jeremy so Evakiss needed an alternate BBC fetish character.

I think there is a decent chance EK will develop the option for a genuine loving relationship between Marcel and Holly.

 

[Augustus Commodus]

He tries to get away from his past, where he was shy and unattractive to girls, but he does it dirty.

I forgot to mention, but I strongly agree with this part. Jeremy is definitely overcompensating and trying to get away from his nerdy past. Also, thank you for the praise.

is the game completed? or its just the chapter that is completed?

It is just through chapter 12 that is complete. It has been reported that the dev has gone back on forth on the planned length of the game, either 16 or 20 chapters. That means the game is either 3/4 or 3/5 of the way done.

I still feel like Marcel is a meme character. He only exists in the case that Lena is dating Ian because on that route she refuses to mess around with Jeremy so Evakiss needed an alternate BBC fetish character.

I can't say you're entirely wrong. At least so far.

I think there is a decent chance EK will develop the option for a genuine loving relationship between Marcel and Holly.

That would be cute. While Holly is my favorite, and most of my playthroughs involve her with Ian in some regard—Holly only, rebound after break up with Lena, Holly Trinity, etc.—I'd probably do one playthrough to see it if it happens.