I want to thank you for this comment because it was a reality check for me. Even though I only do bug-testing and occasional proofreading, I admit that pointing out plot holes is very tempting as well. From there, it's a slippery slope into "I think writing it a bit differently would improve the scene" until you find yourself playing narrative advisor and thinking you could do better. On one hand, you want to improve the end product. On another, you're kinda affecting the game and possibly getting in the way of Eva's original creative idea. And while the critique might improve the quality, it might also disrupt the work process (additions to the original plan, prolonging development time, possible rewrites, general second-guessing). I guess it's important to let go and leave the game be as it is, even if it's not perfect.
To be honest it's a two edged sword. Everything you say it's true, but on the other hand an external feedback can sometimes give you fresh perspective on things, give you new ideas or even help you unblock your creativity on something that you were feeling stuck. Everyone's different, so it really depends on the person, or in this specific case, the creator.
And there's a difference between expressing your view on something that you might think it could work well and telling someone that their work would be better if they followed your view/advice. There's a clear line between a suggestion/feedback and trying to impose your view on others.
Fan feedback can either be great to improve the end result of a product or to help it derail it to oblivion. It takes some thick skin and a strong mentallity to be able to absorb external feedback and see where it can actually help you progress, without losing your own view and perspective. A lot of games in here that showed potential got really derailed by creators listening too much to their fans feedback and trying to please everyone, but there's also examples of those that actually improved.
With this I'm not saying that you or anybody else should or shouldn't give your feedback to Eva or any other creator, that's entirely up to you to decide upon yourself if you feel it's something you should or should not do. On the same way it is up to Eva to decide for herself what kinda of importance to herself and to her work the external feedback can bring to her game(s).
To summarize, I know I played a bit of a devil's advocate here, but I think it's often important to remember people that things are never just black and white, there's several shades of grey that need to be taken into consideration.
