VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.3] [Eva Kiss]

[Nifferman]

Sad to see eva struggling to progress her game

 

[BloodyMares]

Probably even Stan can please Lena better than Robert, let alone Holly or Louise who'd do anything for her once house broken.

To be fair, late in the game Robert can improve with Lena's help and can manage to make her cum even without Lena helping herself. But yeah, he mostly rises to basic Ian's levels (since even cuck Ian still satisfies Lena better, she just enjoys the fantasy).

 

[jimul18]

What upcoming scenes do you guys look forward to the most?

Here is my list in no particular order: anything with Ivy, Seymore, some BDSM stuff (Holly or Louise) and an actual DP

 

[Gicoo]

- Cherry adressing why the hell she hung out with Axel again and progressing with Ian/Perry in their relationship.
- Stan raping Louise before commiting suicide
- Stan taking back his confession and accepting his place as Lena's pay-pet (if she doesn't want it, he commits suicide)
- Stan commiting suicide in general
- Holly still being clueless that Chad Ian is hanging out with several girls and she is just his sidedish
- Chad-Ian rejecting Gillian and leaving her begging
- Loser Ian begging Gillian to try again and ending up as her simp
- Cindy and Ian confessing and Wade/Perry getting angry
- Alison getting pregnant when she isn't Ians main girl (if she is, then it needs to be Jeremey due to Ian underperforming in the threesome)
- Minerva gloating to whatever girl Ian is dating, especially a Lena that insulted her
- Ivy being purified (opposite of corruption) by respectable Ian and wearing normal clothes, not dying her hair, cooking and caring for her soon-to-be husband.
- Axel destroying whoever Lena dates and getting Cindy and Cherry as well.
- Lena chosing Jeremy's dick over everyone (including Axel and good Ian)
- Cindy catfighting whoever Ian dates, especially a Lena that is on bad terms with her
- Mike double cucking Ian by dating both Lena and Gillian
- Ian and Louise finding common ground by being rejected by all of their partners and starting to date each other
- Emma commiting to Ian/Perry

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

- Ivy being purified (opposite of corruption) by respectable Ian and wearing normal clothes, not dying her hair, cooking and caring for her soon-to-be husband.

 

[Gicoo]

Have you seen what happened to Jack and Jessica in GGGB? I believe in Ivy.

 

[ffive]

- Ian and Louise finding common ground by being rejected by all of their partners and starting to date each other

Louise turning into Ian's psycho girlfriend when they seek solace after Lena dumps them both would be too funny.

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Have you seen what happened to Jack and Jessica in GGGB? I believe in Ivy.

Yeah but even then Jessica did not become all homely and Jessica was not on par with Ivy.

 

[balvenie1401]

- Stan commiting suicide in general

Thank you!

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

- Cherry adressing why the hell she hung out with Axel again and progressing with Ian/Perry in their relationship.
- Stan raping Louise before commiting suicide
- Stan taking back his confession and accepting his place as Lena's pay-pet (if she doesn't want it, he commits suicide)
- Stan commiting suicide in general
- Holly still being clueless that Chad Ian is hanging out with several girls and she is just his sidedish
- Chad-Ian rejecting Gillian and leaving her begging
- Loser Ian begging Gillian to try again and ending up as her simp
- Cindy and Ian confessing and Wade/Perry getting angry
- Alison getting pregnant when she isn't Ians main girl (if she is, then it needs to be Jeremey due to Ian underperforming in the threesome)
- Minerva gloating to whatever girl Ian is dating, especially a Lena that insulted her
- Ivy being purified (opposite of corruption) by respectable Ian and wearing normal clothes, not dying her hair, cooking and caring for her soon-to-be husband.
- Axel destroying whoever Lena dates and getting Cindy and Cherry as well.
- Lena chosing Jeremy's dick over everyone (including Axel and good Ian)
- Cindy catfighting whoever Ian dates, especially a Lena that is on bad terms with her
- Mike double cucking Ian by dating both Lena and Gillian
- Ian and Louise finding common ground by being rejected by all of their partners and starting to date each other
- Emma commiting to Ian/Perry

Remind me never to hire you as a marriage councilor or suicide hotline operator.

On another note: "- Lena chosing Jeremy's dick over everyone (including Axel and good Ian)"
Would be great on this path if Lena only referred to "Jeremy's dick" when asked who she's dating. Long romantic walks on the beach, hand on penis. Late night calls: "Oh.. Hey Jeremy. Is your penis there?" Marriage wrap-up at the end of the story, exchanging finger and cock-rings before the "I now declare you Mr and Mrs Jeremy's Penis". A bunch of baby Jeremy's penises bouncing around the house.

Jeremy has no say in the matter.

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Remind me never to hire you as a marriage councilor or suicide hotline operator.

On another note: "- Lena chosing Jeremy's dick over everyone (including Axel and good Ian)"
Would be great on this path if Lena only referred to "Jeremy's dick" when asked who she's dating. Long romantic walks on the beach, hand on penis. Late night calls: "Oh.. Hey Jeremy. Is your penis there?" Marriage wrap-up at the end of the story, exchanging finger and cock-rings before the "I now declare you Mr and Mrs Jeremy's Penis". A bunch of baby Jeremy's penises bouncing around the house.

Jeremy has no say in the matter.
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[kjj308]

What I want to see in future updates? Hm...
-Holly
-More of Holly
-Sex scenes with Holly
-Relationship progress with Holly
-Wholesome scenes with Holly
-Dirty scenes with Holly
-Steamy scenes with Holly

And I don't know, maybe Perry and Emma scenes, Wade with someone good for him, Cindy or not, and uh, Lena with someone good for her that's not psycho Louise, Robert, Axel, Jeremy, or any other cheating A-hole, and uh, perhaps some more scenes with Holly...

 

[zoomzoomzoom]

What I want to see in future updates? Hm...
-Holly
-More of Holly
-Sex scenes with Holly
-Relationship progress with Holly
-Wholesome scenes with Holly
-Dirty scenes with Holly
-Steamy scenes with Holly

And I don't know, maybe Perry and Emma scenes, Wade with someone good for him, Cindy or not, and uh, Lena with someone good for her that's not psycho Louise, Robert, Axel, Jeremy, or any other cheating A-hole, and uh, perhaps some more scenes with Holly...

In Eva's latest post she said that Holly will get the most lewd scenes in the upcoming chapter.

 

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[Moiraine™]

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Here I am with another status report. I've been picking up the writing, slow but steady, and I'm now finishing writing the last scene. Once that's done, I'll make sure everything fits nicely and finish touching up the art. All the illustrations are drawn (though I'd like to add one or two more) and right now the colorist is working on the last batch of illustrations.

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I've shared the process before, but here you can see the 4 different passes each image has: I send the linework to the colorist, and she sends back the colored image. I go over it adjusting colors and adding an additional layer of light, shadow and detail, making the volumes pop and the image look more attractive. Finally, I add the background and ambient light, as well as adding any layered cosmetics like tattoos and piercings.

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Holly fans are in luck, since she's the character who has more lewd scenes this chapter, with 5 total (4 of them being quitev substantial). The chapter will feature 16 lewd scenes total, though I had to cut one planned scene: the scenario provides room for a lot of interesting stuff, and as I developed the chapter new scenes popped into my mind and it wouldn't be a shame to let those opportunities go to waste. That particular scene is already drawn, but I'll add it and at least 2 more after the core chapter 11 has been released. My mental health demands that I publish it as soon as possible, and hopefully I have everything ready in a couple weeks. I can begin to see the light at the end of the tunnel!

I'll keep you posted.

 

[fatpussy123]

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Here I am with another status report. I've been picking up the writing, slow but steady, and I'm now finishing writing the last scene. Once that's done, I'll make sure everything fits nicely and finish touching up the art. All the illustrations are drawn (though I'd like to add one or two more) and right now the colorist is working on the last batch of illustrations.

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I've shared the process before, but here you can see the 4 different passes each image has: I send the linework to the colorist, and she sends back the colored image. I go over it adjusting colors and adding an additional layer of light, shadow and detail, making the volumes pop and the image look more attractive. Finally, I add the background and ambient light, as well as adding any layered cosmetics like tattoos and piercings.

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Holly fans are in luck, since she's the character who has more lewd scenes this chapter, with 5 total (4 of them being quitev substantial). The chapter will feature 16 lewd scenes total, though I had to cut one planned scene: the scenario provides room for a lot of interesting stuff, and as I developed the chapter new scenes popped into my mind and it wouldn't be a shame to let those opportunities go to waste. That particular scene is already drawn, but I'll add it and at least 2 more after the core chapter 11 has been released. My mental health demands that I publish it as soon as possible, and hopefully I have everything ready in a couple weeks. I can begin to see the light at the end of the tunnel!

I'll keep you posted.

So Holly will have 5 out of the 16 total lewd scenes. Safe to say Lena and Ian together will have at least 2 scenes together and Cherry will have at least 1 scene because we see her apartment for the first time. That leaves 8 lewd scenes for other characters.

My guess, assuming everyone gets only 1 scene, Axel because they have a scheduled coffee date, Stan and Mark because of the same reason. Cindy because Ian shows up late to Emma's building thing if he's on Cindy's path. Ivy with Ian, because that what the people want. Robert because he was absent last chapter. Seymour because he also was almost absent from last update. And the last wild card is Gillian, we have no idea how her story will play out so it's hard to say if she'll have new scenes so soon.

 

[bauman]

 

[mommysboiii]

I am going to start crying no cheating allowed cucked by eva

live is so hard I just want the girlfriend (cindy,gillian,alison...) to get corrupted and cheat on my boiiii ian

 

[lucadiadis]

What upcoming scenes do you guys look forward to the most?

Here is my list in no particular order: anything with Ivy, Seymore, some BDSM stuff (Holly or Louise) and an actual DP

Very simple: Lena DPed by Ian and Jeremy (with the latter using the backdoor) in serious relationship mode, ending with Lena squirting on Jeremy's cock and taking his facial.

 

[mommysboiii]

- Stan raping Louise before commiting suicide
- Stan commiting suicide in general

you sir, need jezus in your life

- Loser Ian begging Gillian to try again and ending up as her simp

this would be hot as hell get ian hope up cuddles,dates be happy and than get cheated on again KEKW 11/10 pls do this EVAA PLSSSSSSS

- Alison getting pregnant when she isn't Ians main girl (if she is, then it needs to be Jeremey due to Ian underperforming in the threesome)
- Axel destroying whoever Lena dates and getting Cindy and Cherry as well.
- Lena chosing Jeremy's dick over everyone (including Axel and good Ian)
- Cindy catfighting whoever Ian dates, especially a Lena that is on bad terms with her
- Mike double cucking Ian by dating both Lena and Gillian

this would be hot I mommysboiiiiiiii approve this

- Ivy being purified (opposite of corruption) by respectable Ian and wearing normal clothes, not dying her hair, cooking and caring for her soon-to-be husband.

what would you say about ivy pegging our boiii ian??