VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.2 Alpha] [Eva Kiss]

[Blurpee69]

A small but nice detail regarding Ian: his sprites change to have more visible muscles and some characters take note of his improved physique if his fitness reaches certain threshold.

Same for Lena and Holly as well. For them it's much more noticeable on their cores, less "fat" more definition. Whereas with Ian it's a whole package deal; can see it in his arms as well as his core. Actually kind of surprising that no one comments on Lena or Holly's butt getting firmer or rounder, and the sprite hasn't changed, considering that's usually such a big focus for women that routinely go to the gym.

 

[ffive]

Actually kind of surprising that no one comments on Lena or Holly's butt getting firmer or rounder, and the sprite hasn't changed, considering that's usually such a big focus for women that routinely go to the gym.

I think there's a handful of situations where people acknowledge Holly is no longer chubby girl that she was, though i can't remember any specific off the bat. Lena was already smoking hot (and attending the gym regularly) so that's probably easier to go under people's radars :v

 

[fatpussy123]

I think there's a handful of situations where people acknowledge Holly is no longer chubby girl that she was, though i can't remember any specific off the bat. Lena was already smoking hot (and attending the gym regularly) so that's probably easier to go under people's radars :v

I believe Ed comments on it after Holly refuses a cake at the cafe.

 

[Blurpee69]

I think there's a handful of situations where people acknowledge Holly is no longer chubby girl that she was, though i can't remember any specific off the bat. Lena was already smoking hot (and attending the gym regularly) so that's probably easier to go under people's radars :v

Yeah, there are several comments about Holly, hers being the most dramatic change of the three. Ivy, Ed, Ian, Lena, Emma, and I believe even Minerva make mention of Holly's change.

Lena changes the least, but she only went when she had time in the past, she makes much effort to start going regularly at the start of the game. But it makes sense that she wouldn't receive as many comments. But still all three of them do change based on fitness level.

 

[SearingFive]

The scene before Ivy/Holly, Ivy/Holly/Lena or Ivy/Lena shower scene. Lena comments in her monologue on Holly's and Minerva's (if she hooked up with Ian) physical changes.

 

[Blurpee69]

The scene before Ivy/Holly, Ivy/Holly/Lena or Ivy/Lena shower scene. Lena comments in her monologue on Holly's and Minerva's (if she hooked up with Ian) physical changes.

I don't remember anyone mentioning Minerva's physical change outside of her haircut. Though I do remember Lena mentioning that Minerva is working harder, almost like she is trying to impress someone.

 

[SearingFive]

I don't remember anyone mentioning Minerva's physical change outside of her haircut. Though I do remember Lena mentioning that Minerva is working harder, almost like she is trying to impress someone.

if ian_minerva_sex:
scene v11_poledance6 with long
pause 1
if v2_berate_minerva:
"Even though I had made fun of Minerva in the past, it was obvious she had gotten better under her guidance. Her movements now exuded a newfound sensuality, not bad for a middle-aged woman..."
else:
"Even though she had made fun of Minerva in the past, it was obvious she had gotten better under her guidance."
"I wouldn't mind looking like her when I got to be her age, sensual and self-assured... She was a sexy woman. "
"Maybe Ivy's lessons had re-awakened the fire of her youthful days. I couldn't help but smile, imagining her husband was probably quite happy about that..."
"Or maybe she had found a new lover that rekindled the flame of her passion. That would explain her confident smile and the new hairstyle."

Yeah my bad, I just checked the lines again.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

Thanks for answering.
I was curious about your opinion about Seymour because like Robert,he forces himself into Lena life.
About your Robert question,is kinda hard to ignore his route when this unpopular mofo has a obscene ammount of sex scenes compared to others

I've never played him past a certain point, and on the relationship paths he's totally not an option, even if Lena cheats. So I don't even know if there is content with him in the later chapters. Looks like he 's going to be palmed off on Holly though, at least as a one-off date.

 

[| Vee |]

I think you guys are forgetting someone! Cindy is also getting "more in shape":



Ian's forearms are also more defined in Ch12!(RIP Axel)

 

[SearingFive]

I think you guys are forgetting someone! Cindy is also getting more in shape:
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Also Ian's forearms are getting more defined in Ch12!(RIP Axel)

Cinders

 

[Blurpee69]

I've never played him past a certain point, and on the relationship paths he's totally not an option, even if Lena cheats. So I don't even know if there is content with him in the later chapters. Looks like he 's going to be palmed off on Holly though, at least as a one-off date.

His content starts to dry up around chapter 7. There are a few more scenes in chapter 8, but for Lena Robert starts to get largely replaced by Mike, Ian, or Seymour. He does get one more fuck in chapter 11 however.

And for the record he is a romancable option. Lena gets plenty of options with the Heart icon to indicate she is doing something out of love for him. He just doesn't start that way, and is intentionally made an unlikeable douche so that most people will drop him in favor of one of the other characters. But it is possible to start having a loving relationship with him.

 

[Blurpee69]

I think you guys are forgetting someone! Cindy is also getting "more in shape":
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Also Ian's forearms are also more defined in Ch12!(RIP Axel)

I remember that message, but as far as her actual appearance change, I couldn't tell a difference. And the original conversation, I believe, was about how their sprites change reflecting their increasing fit stat.

 

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And for the record he is a romancable option. Lena gets plenty of options with the Heart icon to indicate she is doing something out of love for him. He just doesn't start that way, and is intentionally made an unlikeable douche so that most people will drop him in favor of one of the other characters. But it is possible to start having a loving relationship with him.

Imagine, being Lena and settling for Robert.

 

[| Vee |]

I remember that message, but as far as her actual appearance change, I couldn't tell a difference. And the original conversation, I believe, was about how their sprites change reflecting their increasing fit stat.

That scene was pretty much just copy of previous one(Reused) with a few changes so recent changes in her appearance are not be visible but in the images you can clearly see that she is more defined than here previous ones which she sent Ian.

 

[SearingFive]

r "Get out of my face!"
finley "Stop it, Sen! Just let it go."
sen "Let go of me, Finley! I'm gonna kick this dude's ass so hard his kids will need therapy!"
r "Oh, yeah? I'd like to see you try, you fat-headed cunt!"
sen "Have you looked at yourself in the mirror, you skunky-looking dirtbag?!"
$ frobert = "sad"
sen "If mediocrity had a child with disappointment he'd have your face!"
finley "Sen! Cool it down...!"

 

[Leongen43]

I think you guys are forgetting someone! Cindy is also getting "more in shape":sneaksand):
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Also Ian's forearms are also more defined in Ch12!(RIP Axel)

Are you the devil in my and Ian's heads that tempts us to break up friendships, in a future update Cindy's well defined ass too?

 

[Blurpee69]

Imagine, being Lena and settling for Robert.

I have a hard time imagining anyone so pathetic as Robert, let alone settling for that someone.

That scene was pretty much just copy of previous one(Reused) with a few changes so recent changes in her appearance are not be visible but in the images you can clearly see that she is more defined than here previous ones which she sent Ian.

I'll have to go back and look. I've always felt like, outside of Ivy or Cherry, Cindy was honestly the fittest looking of the girls at the start of the game. All her midriff baring outfits seemed to hint at a definition in her core. The only thing that might have "improved" is her butt. However, Emma is the only character that seems to get any amount of focus on her booty as something attractive or desirable by others; so it's hard to tell with regards to Cindy.

 

[| Vee |]

Are you the devil in my and Ian's heads that tempts us to break up friendships, in a future update Cindy's well defined ass too?

I have different saves and don't worry Ivy is still number 1 in list with dedicated save slots to her (If IanxIvy happens) followed by Cindy than Lena and Holly at 3rd. It is shame that you can get with Cindy on just cheating path BUT You've to admit she is

 

[SearingFive]

Don't worry Ivy is still number 1 in list with dedicated save slots to her (If IanxIvy happens) followed by Cindy than Lena and Holly at 3rd. It is sad that you can get with Cindy on just cheating path BUT You've to admit she is
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Even if Cindy/Wade break up on their terms, it will still not be cool to go after her. To get Cindy means closing off the Scooby gang. Either by cheating or fair play. Literal Lord Of Cinder path

 

[Gicoo]

To get Cindy means closing off the Scooby gang.

Wade and Perry are hardly a loss.
It's not clear how Emma would feel about it, since she is open-minded (though not an imbecile). Alison doesn't seem to be a close part of the gang. Jeremy is already on Ians side.