Valid review. I once did a run in which Ian and Lena always chose the unfriendly option and they were hardly mean (aside from Stan bullying, not that he is a charming individual and you are better off not being too nice to him). The cast is pretty selfish and self-centered, but cynically enough, this makes them more realistic. Ivy is a slut, though I don't see anything wrong with that in a porn game heavily linked with corruption. Stan is a loser virgin incel nerd, kind of mans you find in the dozen in our current age.
Ian's writing just tacked on is a good point, it could have been mentioned more often that he always wrote (and if, what). It still works with his degree, job and even his sidething with the reviews, so I don't find it out of the blue, it just could've been a bit better.
Dunno why reviewer considers the protagonists criminal. Lena steals money, which is clearly portrayed as a bad thing. Seymour is clearly corrupt and clearly rich enough to get away with it.
Would be interested about the alternatives, the other games here are trash and make ORS look like a miracle.