VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[desmosome]

Going along with Seymour disposition high turns into kind of a... I dunno. Seymour doesn't have that corruption aura. He just simping on Lena. I mean, holy shit, it started as findom kind of thing, but turned into some old man looking for true love or some shit. I wonder if there is another path if you play hard to get with Seymour?

I am happy that he is calling for Emma though. That was the most promising arc I can see from him. Corrupting Emma with his money and making her betray her values.

Edit: And frankly, Lena's own monologues during that scene was just too far. If Seymour was the only route, I could understand, but she is thinking that Seymour got her completely "mind, body, and soul" but she still got shit going on with Axel, Jeremy and other dudes. Plus, if you turn him down here, Lena doesn't give a satisfactory reason for why she turned him down. Seymour thinks it might be Ian, and she says that's right, but my Lena is all about cheating on Ian lol. I dunno. There wasn't a good path forward for this scene for me. I think the main problem for my playthrough at least was that there was no middle ground. If you reject him, suddenly, Lena is acting completely different than before and it doesn't quite make sense. If you accept him, that whole scene was kinda cringe and I don't want that dynamic between them lol.

 

[ghost_terror]

I can't wait for Alison to return.

 

[BunnyDevil]

Ngl, this update disappointed me even more than the previous one with Seymour. If there is a one thing that makes sex scenes hot, that is a context. When there was a sex, where and why with that person - that all matters, maybe even more than how good was sex itself.

In this update Lena was like “I wanna have sex now, who should I invite?”. Even the wildest orgy with hottest chicks wouldn’t be tempting with such approach.

 

[zappa2005]

Ngl, this update disappointed me even more than the previous one with Seymour. If there is a one thing that makes sex scenes hot, that is a context. When there was a sex, where and why with that person - that all matters, maybe even more than how good was sex itself.

I initially thought the same now that you mention it, it went too quick - but maybe it is because of the ALPHA status and the rest of the story is filled in later?

Then again, also the text also sounded a bit like a LLM, but maybe thats only me.

 

[NewSeal]

A couple folks have mentioned that Eva's current release process of giving us bites of chapters makes the story feel even more disjointed and that's probably true also. I would guess once we eventually have all of chapter 13 there may be more of a flow to it.

It's what everybody is hoping for, but to address the point you made yourself earlier in your comment, Louise throwing herself at Ian out of nowhere makes zero sense if they didn't have a threesome, and that hasn't yet been explained/fixed and I doubt it will be. And the same goes for some scenes with Minerva, some other side characters and at the beach house in the past few chapters. They either happen out of nowhere or the relationship between one MC and a brand new character is completely rushed. And unlike chapter 13, those chapters are already completed, so when will those scenes and relations be properly explained/fleshed out? When the entire game is completed a few years from now?

 

[sliszt2]

Seriously, was it planned for Holly, in love with both Ian and Lena, to after starting off their throuple, go off with Ivy and suck 7+ cocks in a glory hole?

when lena was watching holly's clips on her phone, she said that"Holly had a strange expression, dazed, with dilated pupils and flushed cheeks, and she looked at the camera while wiping some cum from her lips." "It felt like she was under the influence of something, or at least that's how it seemed to me..."

And consider holly's dark eye circles and her distorted face, apparently she was drugged by Ivy, which, I think, may be why she did that without resistance. She can't even think straight (or worse, she just can't think anymore), at that point.

 

[LaVinotinto]

It's kindda funny to see how Lena's update is a bit disappointing, while our IanCHAD is in for a better pov with his top-voted girls in the polls:

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[Xupuzulla]

Is going to be funny when in the next update even Billy taps that Ivy ass before Ian

 

[The Krogan Dude]

Despite my general dissapointment with the drip feed of updates... I am going to defend EK here... These mini-updates weren't created for general population play. They were created for the patreon fans who 'wanted to be part of the games creation.'

It's totally on EK then. Imagine allowing any degenerate real life Stan to be part of the creative process.

 

[NebulousShooter]

So we have reached rock fucking bottom with EK here haven't we? Just a quick only slut up chapter with no story progression what so ever. Yet another random hookup options for a -COUGH COUGH- BLOATED AS FUCK CAST for Lena, AGAIN. Stan the fat bastard incel gets two scenes with Lena while I'm still 5 years deep in blueballdom waiting for Ian and Ivy to pair up. But given how and utter shit this was??? Yeah, its going to go down hill faster than one night in fucking Bangkok hyped up on ever illict drug possible. There is ZERO chance in salvaging this at this point. Just rename it Good Girl Gone Bad 2: With More Kinks! and call it quits.

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Is going to be funny when in the next update even Billy taps that Ivy ass before Ian

I was not memeing when I said that.

I still think Eva's writing is above most, but even I can't defend the fact that the last 5+ updates have been free falling in quality.
Nothing else to add about the retardation of polling for scenes.

 

[Xupuzulla]

I was not memeing when I said that.
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I still think Eva's writing is above most, but even I can't defend the fact that the last 5+ updates have been free falling in quality.
Nothing else to add about the retardation of polling for scenes.

Ivy and Lena in a photoshoot with Billy and other men,probably a black dude too because we all know patreons love BBC,i honestly cannot wait for all the seething here

 

[Nifferman]

Is going to be funny when in the next update even Billy taps that Ivy ass before Ian

Ian don't need that thot, he has Alison or better Lena(wisdom) and Holly(social)

 

[Hungover00]

when lena was watching holly's clips on her phone, she said that"Holly had a strange expression, dazed, with dilated pupils and flushed cheeks, and she looked at the camera while wiping some cum from her lips." "It felt like she was under the influence of something, or at least that's how it seemed to me..."

And consider holly's dark eye circles and her distorted face, apparently she was drugged by Ivy, which, I think, may be why she did that without resistance. She can't even think straight (or worse, she just can't think anymore), at that point.

Even if that's so, Holly would likely be pretty messed up the next time she sees Lena and Ian. Plus, drugs don't usually change someone that dramatically from their core self, they usually up social lubrication and risky behaviour a bit, not straight up betray loving relationships. It makes more sense for a Holly not in a relationship. If she's hooking up, that's an extreme version of hooking up. But if she's telling people she loves them, those actions are on a completely different track (unless that's been established and communicated extremely clearly and fully).

 

[Hungover00]

Ian don't need that thot, he has Alison or better Lena(wisdom) and Holly(social)

Sorry, out of the loop, I have guesses, but what does 'Lena(wisdom) and Holly(social)' mean?

 

[Eonor]

Updated my compressed Android port of Our Red String to v13.2a.

Got some basic gestures loaded in: swipe up for save menu, swipe down to hide UI, swipe left to rollback and swipe right to skip. Save files are now stored in the Documents folder. This sometimes means that you may need to close and re-open the port after installing so the save folder is properly created.

Please let me know if you encounter any issues with the ports and I'll see what I can do to get them sorted.

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[NebulousShooter]

Ian don't need that thot

Ian and Ivy is why I play this game!

Ok, I kinda like Ian x Cindy and Ian x Lena x Holly ...maybe Ian x Emma
...and Lena x Louise, Lena x Holly, Ian x Minerva, Lena x Ivy, Lena x Ivy x Holly, Lena x Emma


OK, OK, I might like more in the game than Ian and Ivy, but lets just say thats just my biggest desire out of the game, been waiting since their first interaction.

 

[demon79yu]

Ian and Ivy is why I play this game!

Ok, I kinda like Ian x Cindy and Ian x Lena x Holly ...maybe Ian x Emma
...and Lena x Louise, Lena x Holly, Ian x Minerva, Lena x Ivy, Lena x Ivy x Holly, Lena x Emma


OK, OK, I might like more in the game than Ian and Ivy, but lets just say thats just my biggest desire out of the game, been waiting since their first interaction.

For me it's Cindy why I play. Too bad she is not a protagonist and was ignored in many updates.

 

[Sterwan83]

Ivy snitches on Ian fucking Cindy and slut Holly - even when she's sexting Ian herself. Jeremy snitches on Lena sleeping around - even when he's cheating on Louise. Damn, these two have no (man)whore solidarity

 

[Kame-Sennin]

Ngl, this update disappointed me even more than the previous one with Seymour. If there is a one thing that makes sex scenes hot, that is a context. When there was a sex, where and why with that person - that all matters, maybe even more than how good was sex itself.

In this update Lena was like “I wanna have sex now, who should I invite?”. Even the wildest orgy with hottest chicks wouldn’t be tempting with such approach.

How come I did not notice your very interesting game man, I just checked and it's been here since 2023 of October, and it's similar to Our Red String huh? that's nice, looks like you are inspired by this game. I'm going to try playing it now.

 

[kalle813]

is there one way to make allison enjoy anal?