VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 13.2 Alpha] [Eva Kiss]

[SpikeZg]

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When I came up with Axel, he seemed like a very interesting character to me. In GGGB we had Jack, who started of being an exaggerated representation of the "player" type of guy, an overly muscled, cocky, successful, apologetically amoral and sexually aggressive character that could tempt the naive Ashley into naughty stuff. Later I tried to give him a bit more depth, showing his personal circumstances and revealing that he could be an OK guy in the right context with the right girl.

Still, there were a lot of aspects I would've liked to play with. Axel is not like Jack, he's not as blatantly cocky and easy-going about his fuckboy lifestyle; he's psychologically more complex and let's just say he doesn't have that same positive attitude towards life. But he plays into the same archetype in many ways, he's charming, successful and well, just look at him...

His role is different too. He's not an enticing and lustful Adonis to the female main character. They already had a relationship, and it didn't turn out so well... And also, this time there's a male playable character, too! In GGGB I always thought about developing a rivalry between Jack and Dave or possibly Eric (you can see a hint of that in the beach scene), but the game worked I couldn't manage to do that.

This time is different, though... Axel and Ian have something in common, something that will make them clash and collide most surely... With a rival like that, what will he do?
I'm excited to write about Axel and his relationship with the two main characters!

 

[Lord Nux]

What Ian and Axel "have in common" is definitely that redhead ex-girlfriend.

 

[Deleted member 69963]

This time is different, though... Axel and Ian have something in common, something that will make them clash and collide most surely

What do they have in common ? Is it their feelings towards Lena ? If it is, then what if we decide not to be interested in Lena ?
I actually cannot wait to see what would happen when Ian and Axel will meet.

 

[Deleted member 69963]

What Ian and Axel "have in common" is definitely that redhead ex-girlfriend.

Oh, I didn't think of that...
Holy shit, you might be right. Imagine if it's actually with Ian's ex GF that Axel was cheating on Lena.
Didn't someone mention that Eva Kiss might bring Ian's GF into the game too ?
So many possibilities, now I'm hyped.

 

[SpikeZg]

What Ian and Axel "have in common" is definitely that redhead ex-girlfriend.

yeah, her or obvious answer Lena
but if Axel is with Gillian, why does he still wants to talk with Lena?
maybe he is banging the redhead but still loves Lena?

What do they have in common ? Is it their feelings towards Lena ? If it is, then what if we decide not to be interested in Lena ?
I actually cannot wait to see what would happen when Ian and Axel will meet.

I also can't wait for Ian to meet Axel

 

[B0SS_LADY]

I bet Axel's dick is at least 2x bigger than Ian's

 

[tehcatsmiaw]

I bet Axel's dick is at least 2x bigger than Ian's

in diameter while wrapped around

 

[scor099]

does she post this monthly?

 

[dav121]

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When I came up with Axel, he seemed like a very interesting character to me. In GGGB we had Jack, who started of being an exaggerated representation of the "player" type of guy, an overly muscled, cocky, successful, apologetically amoral and sexually aggressive character that could tempt the naive Ashley into naughty stuff. Later I tried to give him a bit more depth, showing his personal circumstances and revealing that he could be an OK guy in the right context with the right girl.

Still, there were a lot of aspects I would've liked to play with. Axel is not like Jack, he's not as blatantly cocky and easy-going about his fuckboy lifestyle; he's psychologically more complex and let's just say he doesn't have that same positive attitude towards life. But he plays into the same archetype in many ways, he's charming, successful and well, just look at him...

His role is different too. He's not an enticing and lustful Adonis to the female main character. They already had a relationship, and it didn't turn out so well... And also, this time there's a male playable character, too! In GGGB I always thought about developing a rivalry between Jack and Dave or possibly Eric (you can see a hint of that in the beach scene), but the game worked I couldn't manage to do that.

This time is different, though... Axel and Ian have something in common, something that will make them clash and collide most surely... With a rival like that, what will he do?
I'm excited to write about Axel and his relationship with the two main characters!

Yeah I reckon his steroid use will lead a roid rage moment where after he beats and rapes lena, he chokes the life out of her flat mates.

 

[Fatqat123]

Yeah I reckon his steroid use will lead a roid rage moment where after he beats and rapes lena, he chokes the life out of her flat mates.

let's hope not

 

[Reaurt]

yeah, her or obvious answer Lena
but if Axel is with Gillian, why does he still wants to talk with Lena?
maybe he is banging the redhead but still loves Lena?

I bet Axel and Gillian just banged, no relationship. That would be very interesting though! What if players choose to make Ian go the cocky stud route, and go after Lena just to mess with Axel? Or players keep Ian as a nice lad, but now his head gets screwed up because Axel is going after his new girlfriend? Good stuff, kudos to Evakiss for putting this together. This is the sort of thing people write fanfictions about to explore their headcanons.

Hey guys, what kind of fetishes would you like to see added to the game ? It can be old ones from GGGB, new ones, reworked or expanded, etc you name it.
What I'd really like to see, I'd say (order isn't relevant) :
1. Traps / Sissification that would lead to shemale (But I think none of the current male characters would fit for this)
2. Shemales (Not like Jasmin in GGGB, I didn't like her. I'd say more like Aubrey Kate, Sarina Valentina, Mia Isabella, etc )
3. Incest (Brother/Sister, Mother/son, cousin, uncle, aunt)
4. Bestiality (I'd be surprised if it is added)
5. Bimbofication
6. Interracial (I'd like a more Expanded IR experience rather than just typical bbc or black/white. Like east and south Asians, native Americans, middle east, etc. Yes, Cherry is a hottie <3 )
7. Group sex (Orgies/gangbangs/MMF/FFM/FFMM (I'm pretty sure it's gonna be added like it was in GGGB))
8. Grannies ? (Not sure about this one but I wouldn't mind a GILF)
9. Pregnancy

Out of this list, I'd go for 2 (Trans; agree with earlier poster, shouldn't be a fetish per se), and more of 6 (interracial; also shouldn't be a "fetish") and 7 (Group; same). I assume more of 6 and 7 are coming, given GGGB.

I'd also be interested if Evakiss wrote in some polyamory as well. I'm not sure Ian or Lena are in the right head-space for actual polyamory though, given his reaction to Gillian or her toxic relationship with Axel. But I guess with good writing and player choices, anything is plausible.

 

[dav121]

let's hope not

I think Lena is being set up that nothing but bad will happen to her.

 

[Cazzo_duro]

Gillian did not have any relationship with Axel, as declared by the author.
By the way, chapter 2 final version has been released.

 

[JasDoc]

Gillian did not have any relationship with Axel, as declared by the author.
By the way, chapter 2 final version has been released.

Are there any significant changes?

 

[BloodyMares]

I think Lena is being set up that nothing but bad will happen to her.

Not really. It's just basic tension to get the plot moving. The upcoming storm will present more challenges in life that she'll have to overcome. If she relies on her friends and Ian, she'll get through this and everything's going to be fine in the future. But it's about the journey, not the destination. What kind of journey it's going to be will be determined by our choices.

 

[Cazzo_duro]

Are there any significant changes?

I don't know. But it's better to play the final version anyway in order to have more reliable saves for next versions compared to beta or alpha.

 

[BloodyMares]

I don't know. But it's better to play the final version anyway in order to have more reliable saves for next versions compared to beta or alpha.

Can confirm. 0.2 Alpha saves are not compatible with further updates. Well, to be precise they cause a lot of bugs. Cherry's database, glitched relationship with Perry, some other minor things. Most of it was fixed in 0.2 Beta but you need to start the new game to avoid those bugs.

 

[Vordertur]

When I came up with Axel

Dude cleaned up nice after the events of Streets of Rage.

 

[scor099]

Can confirm. 0.2 Alpha saves are not compatible with further updates. Well, to be precise they cause a lot of bugs. Cherry's database, glitched relationship with Perry, some other minor things. Most of it was fixed in 0.2 Beta but you need to start the new game to avoid those bugs.

is there a way to delete all the saves at once?

 

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