VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[Mark17]

She is so crazy that she is willing to take dozens of creampies with a delayed morning after pill. I think she even has fantasies of getting pregnant, but the pragmatic side wouldn't let her do it on purpose.

She's mention many times how "her friends already been marriage and have sons" or "how she feel she have little time to do these things" I think it's pretty clear what she wants, and what she hope to accomplished with Ian nut inside of her so many times

 

[desmosome]

She's mention many times how "her friends already been marriage and have sons" or "how she feel she have little time to do these things" I think it's pretty clear what she wants, and what she hope to accomplished with Ian nut inside of her so many times

Yes, and entrapping with a baby would be classic yandere lol. But she is also a character in a more realistic game and is not a caricature of yandere. She has her career and real life implications of a pregnancy to worry about. It's possible that she didn't really take the pill and was just acting on the train ride back. I think it's more likely that she just played it as risky as possible and took the pill as late as it would allow to give herself an out.

 

[walker188]

I'm sorry, but Jennifer is far more attractive.

She used to go to my gym (or maybe she still does) and even now she is quite attractive, but back in the day....wow. Watch the Rocketeer. She's stunning.

 

[whizwart]

Yes, and entrapping with a baby would be classic yandere lol. But she is also a character in a more realistic game and is not a caricature of yandere. She has her career and real life implications of a pregnancy to worry about. It's possible that she didn't really take the pill and was just acting on the train ride back. I think it's more likely that she just played it as risky as possible and took the pill as late as it would allow to give herself an out.

I think they may have her turn out to accidently be pregnant if Ian came in her, or have her get pregnant from the threesome. It would be easy just to write in that the pill didn't work because she delayed.

 

[poncz91]

Link to Beta please?

 

[Ir0n Ma1den]

My walkthrough as Ian summerised in one picture and my walkthrough as Lena

 

[desmosome]

My walkthrough as Ian summerised in one picture View attachment 1756981 and my walkthrough as Lena View attachment 1756982

Now do the opposite

 

[buttgoose]

Now do the opposite

You think we'll get Ian in a sexy nun costume?

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

There is an indication. Ivy is constantly pushing Lena into Axel's arms. She publishes photo from his place without telling Lena that she worked with him (her excuse that she "forgot" to tell i hard to believe). Then she pushes her to work with him. And when she was supposed to accompany her she doesn't arrive for a very long time. The fact that she shares facts from Lena's private life with Axel is also telling.

I'm almost certain that Ivy is in league with Axel.

Have to agree. Ivy is turning up to be a really toxic "friend" to Lena.


By the way, did the beta fixed Minerva's bug?

 

[CoalPhelps]

There is no indication that she missed the photoshoot on purpose after scheming with Axel. Is there a possibility? Yea, but anything not specifically ruled out could be seen as a possibility. You seem to view all the characters through your own worldview, which is fine, but it generally take a bit more nuance than that to analyze a character objectively.

Ivy is certainly not a pure girl. But is she malicious? In her mind (and even in Lena's if you play her that way), she is helping Holly break out of her shell. Being so shy and hung up about sex is not a healthy way to live according to her worldview. There is no indication that she is being manipulative for personal gain. At most, you could argue that she takes "advantage" of Holly's innocence, but it's not even like she is training her to be her sex slave or something. She finds her cute and wants her to grow into a more confident girl. Since sex means nothing to Ivy, it is not a prime motivator to "corrupt" Holly for personal gain. It's just something Holly herself enjoys and Ivy doesn't mind partaking in some Holly action.

She is basically like a girl version of Jeremy in a sense. She is a wingwoman for Lena and gives her good advice on most things (in her sexually liberal kinda way). As long as a character's actions and worldview are within the acceptable spectrum, you gotta look at their motivations to determine their worth as an individual. You hate Jeremy, so you hate Ivy. Makes sense. They are pretty similar. They are bros to Ian and Jeremy respectively, but if you personally are against everything they stand for, you might think they are bad people. Again, neither of them are the typical pure, reserved people with outstanding ethics, but they are written to be good friends.

As for Ivy vs Louise, it is Louise who has an axe to grind against Ivy. Ivy doesn't really care. She finds it funny to rile her up because Louise is incredibly toxic towards her, but it is more of a one way rivalry. As you can see with Stan, Louise isn't the most understanding person. She is quite closed minded and has her own slew of psychological issues which are quite frankly more toxic than Ivy's straightforward nature.

Nah, my analysis is not based on attitude. I don't hate meatheads. I hate Jeremy. For example, Derek from BaDIK - he's just like Jeremy, except he's not an asshole and doesn't do shit to MC and generally the sweet guy behind that image.

Also, my worldview has nothing to do with it because by it Seymour is pretty OK guy.

And I certainly don't hate Ivy or her liberal views on sex. At one time I was one of the few people who liked her.

But where you're right is that I have nothing 100% convincing to back up my insinuations about her motives other than gut feelings and interpreting what I saw. So we'll just have to wait and see which of us was right.

 

[CoalPhelps]

Most characters in ORS have layers to them. No one is totally good or totally bad (except maybe Seymour lol). No one is without shortcomings or personality flaws. That's what makes interesting characters.

Yeah, I know. I'm an aspiring writer and I'm training to be a screenwriter, so I'm pretty immersed in the theory.

 

[BloodyMares]

I still don't understand why the game won't let Lena commit to a relationship if Jeremy fucks her. Isn't that the whole point of cheating?

Yes, but you're forgetting that Jeremy is Ian's bro. It would be like Ian trying to cheat on Lena with Ivy, Louise or Holly (the latter didn't turn out well for him). Eva decided to deny this option and take it easy instead of having to write a separate route where Ian breaks up with Lena and stops being Jeremy's friend, that can in turn screw up their "bro" dynamics with other girls, so Alison and Emma would have to be accounted for in that path as well. That's one of the tradeoffs for writing characters who are more involved into the story and other main characters. You can compare this to Ash trying to seduce Dave in GGGB. She couldn't do that unless she was single and not tied with Eric in any way.

So according to the leaked script the rumors are true then? That Gillian will be back for a foursome scene where she takes 3 dicks at once (Ian, Jeremey, Axel) and then get a golden shower at the end?

I just wonder how many people will be baited by this post lmao

Btw, every time I play this game I like Emma's look more an more. Hope she will get a DP scene further in the game. Her ASS was made for that

So... DAP?

But I think for him it's a pussy scam rather than a money scam because he's a rich daddy's pussy. And that image is more in line with the original Billy, IMO

If I were to guess, Eva probably changed his race so that people would start taking him for what he is -- a spoiled rich kid with daddy's money, which is, let's say, an unlikely scenario in the black community (very hard to advance above middle class by honest means if you're not a celebrity). The amount of theories about him being a drug dealer probably threw Eva off even further.

 

[desmosome]

Yes, but you're forgetting that Jeremy is Ian's bro. It would be like Ian trying to cheat on Lena with Ivy, Louise or Holly (the latter didn't turn out well for him). Eva decided to deny this option and take it easy instead of having to write a separate route where Ian breaks up with Lena and stops being Jeremy's friend, that can in turn screw up their "bro" dynamics with other girls, so Alison and Emma would have to be accounted for in that path as well. That's one of the tradeoffs for writing characters who are more involved into the story and other main characters. You can compare this to Ash trying to seduce Dave in GGGB. She couldn't do that unless she was single and not tied with Eric in any way.

We have to remember that the refusal to commit came from Lena's side because of her guilt. Jeremy has already wronged Ian by engaging in sexting and receiving that BJ (although he had no way to go against a player controlled Lena without cock blocking the player). He gotta take it to the grave or come clean. If he comes clean, yea, the whole story goes into a massive divergence. If he keeps the secret, some conditional texts and minor routing modifications would be enough.

As for Lena's side, it makes sense for her to not want to commit after banging Ian's best friend... kinda. She was banging everything else that moves, so does him being a friend really change things that much? Who knows, but at least we can take it as a justification. However, she should be free to fall to that BBC addiction after committing, just like she can fall to Axel or Seymour. At least that's how I see it. All Lena and Jeremy has to do is keep it a secret for a while until the story makes it far enough for it to diverge with the reveal.

I mean, I'm not saying writing all the conditional text and Jeremy's guilt into the script is an easy task, but it doesn't necessarily have to be a major story shift if they just keep it a secret for a long while.

 

[alexferno]

Now do the opposite

Ian


Lena

 

[hmc15]

Is the beta only posted on patreon? Anyone have link?

 

[CoalPhelps]

If I were to guess, Eva probably changed his race so that people would start taking him for what he is -- a spoiled rich kid with daddy's money, which is, let's say, an unlikely scenario in the black community (very hard to advance above middle class by honest means if you're not a celebrity). The amount of theories about him being a drug dealer probably threw Eva off even further.

Well, yeah, I have to admit, it sounds about right.

 

[CoalPhelps]

She is goal driven.

Yep, and what do we call opportunists who go over their friends' heads in achieving these goals?

 

[Sorrow85]

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[RC-1138 Boss]

Yep, and what do we call opportunists who go over their friends' heads in achieving these goals?

 

[Eye-switcher]

She used to go to my gym (or maybe she still does) and even now she is quite attractive, but back in the day....wow. Watch the Rocketeer. She's stunning.

Yes, one of the most beautiful actresses for sure, did you watch "the hot spot" or "hot spot" with her and Don Johnson?
It lived up to the title to say the least and a quite decent movie otherwise as well.
Requiem for a dream on the other hand...