VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

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godoff95

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If it had taken her 2 months for prologue, it could take 2 months for alpha, a month for beta, another for final. So july/Aug if things go well.
 
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godoff95 said:
If it had taken her 2 months for prologue, it could take 2 months for alpha, a month for beta, another for final. So july/Aug if things go well.
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a prologue is incomparable to an entire chapter in terms of content even in its alpha stage... to assume they'd take the same amount of time to finish is unreasonable. But if she already starting working on ch11 parallel with the prologue during these two months (which i doubt) then an alpha release of ch11 in late august is possible, but that's just being hopeful.
 
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JoJoPool said:
a prologue is incomparable to an entire chapter in terms of content even in its alpha stage... to assume they'd take the same amount of time to finish is unreasonable. But if she already starting working on ch11 parallel with the prologue during these two months (which i doubt) then an alpha release of ch11 in late august is possible, but that's just being hopeful.
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my thought, by next xmas maybe we will see chapter 11
 
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4.holly(she fall off hard for me and is boring in a relationship with ian at the moment not corrupted from ivy,no drama,no mark interaction or anything interesting sadly she was on rank one for me :confused: :confused: )
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If Holly is in relationship with Ian but Lena interacts with her a lot (raising her lena_go_holly variable) then during their talk about relationships in Ch.11 prologue Holly shows uncertainty whether she really likes being with Ian, and blushes at Lena a plenty. I'd say there's actually potential for these two to get into something behind Ian's back and quite a bit of drama, yet.
 
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WatsonJohn said:
I don't get why some people are upset with Gillian's return. "Drama for drama's sake" Drama is the point. There are a lot of scenes here that progressed into sex quickly. Would you listen to someone complaining, "Porn for porn's sake"? Unlike other games, ORS actually has good character development and drama. Ian is already recovering, and depending on your choices, could be starting to get into a committed relationship. This will lead to better story arcs. Instead of your typical, "Heartbroken person lost trust but found the right person to love again" trope (more common with female protagonist finding the right man in romance stories), this could lead to more heartaches and send Ian spiralling back, or make proud proclamations of "I have moved on and I am happy" to the person who broke Ian's trust. This could also lead to wild plots like Ian's voyeurism that was explored with Allison or Lena's Stalkfap. Not having Gillian return would be a missed opportunity for the story, especially since this is an interactive fiction where you can choose decisions for characters, and not a novel or TV show.
I will say this though, I wish Gillian's return wasn't so early. There are a lot of subplots where their conflicts are increasing and becoming more tense. Having yet another major conflict introduced so quickly can be disorienting. I wish Ian's relationships were deeper and progressed further before Gillian returned. This way, the "will he or won't he go back" question is much harder to answer.
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I cant say it better my ian will growl back to gillian she completly fucked his mind I am very interested how the story will develop so many interesting opportunities hope she is not a side cheracter :cry:

I am curiouse how her personality is? is she like holly nerdy and shy? or is she nerdy and shy but a freak when ian is gone(she actually really loves him maybe even miss him and think he is sweet but maybe her nymphomaniac instincts that she cant control ?) is she manipulative what is her cheracter??is she the good girl that tries to keep up appearances for everyone else around that she is a good girl but has deep sexual desires??
 
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