VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[Flowing Thought]

Finnegan's wake isn't that good. It tries so hard but its execution just doesn't hit the mark.

Feel free to insert whatever book you think is appropriate into this analogy.

I'd rather she was just allowed to be more submissive to Ian or Mike. I really don't like the Axel submission, because there's an element of manipulation and emotional abuse to it all.

Ian gets dom points for two potential actions in sex scenes with Lena, so hopefully that shows this is going to be a thing.

But yeah, Lena and Axel's dom scene is the hottest in the game so far by a fucking mile.

Ian or Mike I just don't feel the dom vibes from. They might try, but they don't have it.

 

[Mr. Muscles]

Almost a month to finish a single scene?

Why not?

 

[mommysboiii]

I'd rather she was just allowed to be more submissive to Ian or Mike. I really don't like the Axel submission, because there's an element of manipulation and emotional abuse to it all.

full corruption game and manipulation no this cant be the case

and get of your horse this are just pixels dont interpret to much into it
just pixels dont worry JUST PIXELS

 

[bitofaperv]

full corruption game and manipulation no this cant be the case

and get of your horse this are just pixels dont interpret to much into it
just pixels dont worry JUST PIXELS

Get out of here with your reductionist bullshit.

 

[mommysboiii]

Get out of here with your reductionist bullshit.

you are the one that interpret things into pixels

 

[IDoAThing]

I am just waiting for 3 Scenes to happen
1) Ian fucking Axel's sister (if he has any)
2) Give viagra to Stan and tie him to a chair then fuck in front of him.
3) Ian dominating Ivy's scene (I doubt if Ivy would let him do that, but from the gym scene it might just happen)

A guy can dream

you think eva is gonna just tease a ivy and ian route? nah they gon be fuckin for sure.

 

[bitofaperv]

Ian or Mike I just don't feel the dom vibes from. They might try, but they don't have it.

I understand your point... buuuut...

... Man, you learn that shit.

No baby came out of the womb knowing how to "choke a bitch."

 

[Flowing Thought]

I understand your point... buuuut...

... Man, you learn that shit.

No baby came out of the womb knowing how to "choke a bitch."

Ian is too much of a dork. Just can't take him serious as a dom. He spends his time writing, living off money from his parents, some routes he delivers fucking pizza. Subs to Lena's Stalkfap and feels jealous about it. I'd let Axel choke me. Ian I'd tell him to stop. Mike I can see growing into the role.

 

[JohnnyKiss]

I understand your point... buuuut...

... Man, you learn that shit.

No baby came out of the womb knowing how to "choke a bitch."

Mike is supposed to fill that "Dom Archetype" in the game (alongside Axel) and Ian can be played as any of the NPC Archetypes in the game (Cuckold = Stan, Dom = Axel, The One Who Cucks = Jeremy and etc) so you are definitely right here.

The only difference between the two and Axel is Axel's godly physique.

Edit: How the fuck did I edit my comment twice and still fucking make the spelling mistakes, lmao.

 

[JohnnyKiss]

Ian is too much of a dork. Just can't take him serious as a dom. He spends his time writing, living off money from his parents, some routes he delivers fucking pizza. Subs to Lena's Stalkfap and feels jealous about it. I'd let Axel choke me. Ian I'd tell him to stop. Mike I can see growing into the role.

I'm not gonna tell you what to enjoy or not but a lot of the stuff you listed here really don't have much to do with "being Dom" or not. Like, Ian being jealous shouldn't be a detraction for him being Dom since Axel is fucking psycho when it comes to jealousy, lmao. Also, doesn't Ian literally train martial arts while Axel does what; photograph models?

Like I said, it's most likely just the physique that sells him harder than the others as he is what, 6 feet 4 (and super muscular) versus Ian's 5 feet 8 and Mike's (I guess) 5 feet 10?

 

[bitofaperv]

Ian is too much of a dork. Just can't take him serious as a dom. He spends his time writing, living off money from his parents, some routes he delivers fucking pizza. Subs to Lena's Stalkfap and feels jealous about it. I'd let Axel choke me. Ian I'd tell him to stop. Mike I can see growing into the role.

You're going to use "spending time writing" as a disqualifier? I'm happy as fuck my sexual partners haven't had the same aversion.

Yeah, your combination of traits don't look promising, but writing is the only one Ian has that's non-negotiable. Let the little caterpillar grow his wings.

 

[SerHawkes]

you think eva is gonna just tease a ivy and ian route? nah they gon be fuckin for sure.

If only that were true...

 

[monk_56]

Ian is too much of a dork. Just can't take him serious as a dom. He spends his time writing, living off money from his parents, some routes he delivers fucking pizza. Subs to Lena's Stalkfap and feels jealous about it. I'd let Axel choke me. Ian I'd tell him to stop. Mike I can see growing into the role.

You have successfully described why I don't like playing as Ian in this game, but from the female POV.

Ian is wimpy compared to the other men in this game- and he always will be. He cannot escape that- its just how he is built.
Perhaps he can change his attitudes- but he can never escape being a manlett. It'd be like getting choked by your kid brother- I think I'd just burst out laughing.

 

[Nifferman]

I'm not gonna tell you what to enjoy or not but a lot of the stuff you listed here really don't have much to do with "being Dom" or not. Like, Ian being jealous shouldn't be a detraction for him being Dom since Axel is fucking psycho when it comes to jealousy, lmao. Also, doesn't Ian literally train martial arts while Axel does what; photograph models?

Like I said, it's most likely just the physique that sells him harder than the others as he is what, 6 feet 4 (and super muscular) versus Ian's 5 feet 8 and Mike's (I guess) 5 feet 10?

Well in terms of height ian is 175, mike is 180 or something and alec is 185 its not that different

 

[bitofaperv]

You have successfully described why I don't like playing as Ian in this game, but from the female POV.

Ian is wimpy compared to the other men in this game- and he always will be. He cannot escape that- its just how he is built.
Perhaps he can change his attitudes- but he can never escape being a manlett. It'd be like getting chocked by your kid brother- I think I'd just burst out laughing.

You know Stan and Robert exist in this game, right?

 

[IkarusWestwood]

Ian is wimpy compared to the other men in this game- and he always will be.

Ian seeing that he is in the same game as Robert, Stan and Perry:

 

[monk_56]

Ya'll are being too literal. Obviously I mean the ones intended to have Dominant qualities like Jeremy, Mike, Axel ect.

Not the cucky shitlords that exist in game just so Ian can have a few people he is physically superior to and so Lena can have corruption routes with people a gal like her would never sleep with except in these suspension of disbelief sort of narrative designed for player wish fulfillment.

Being superior to Stan and Robert is about as impressive as being able to put your pants on in the morning.

* Stan feels like he was cooked up on a 4chan board and sharted into existence by the power of incel angst alone.
* Robert is so painfully slightly below mediocre that the power of mediocrity alone sustains him. He has like 15 scenes and I don't think I've seen a single person say they liked his pathing . ORS has some weird pairings going on.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

You have successfully described why I don't like playing as Ian in this game, but from the female POV.

Ian is wimpy compared to the other men in this game- and he always will be. He cannot escape that- its just how he is built.
Perhaps he can change his attitudes- but he can never escape being a manlett. It'd be like getting chocked by your kid brother- I think I'd just burst out laughing.

Oh no, why is MC a multi-faceted well-written personality, and not a set of muscles with a 10 inch cock in front of which all the chicks automatically take off their panties.

 

[monk_56]

Oh no, why is MC a multi-faceted well-written personality, and not a set of muscles with a 10 inch cock in front of which all the chicks automatically take off their panties.

Ahh- this argument again. Gotta love the hyperbolic straw mans.

You know you can be both a large attractive character AND well written right? Just look at Lena. She's built like a prototypical attractive model. Tall, elegant, thin, stunning. Is it your argument that she is a bad character just b/c of her physical qualities as well?

It is always a binary in ya'lls minds.

Dommy manlets just don't hit the same as the larger characters (for me). I'm sure it works for some ppl and that is great, but in my mind Ian is destined to be the vanilla-lad of the game or a cuck. ;-P

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Ahh- this argument again. Gotta love the hyperbolic straw mans.

You know you can be both a large attractive character AND well written right? Just look at Lena. She's built like a prototypical attractive model
But no, it is always a binary in ya'lls minds.

Dommy manlets just don't hit the same as the larger characters (for me). I'm sure it works for some ppl and that is great, but to me Ian is destined to be the vanilla-lad of the game or a cuck. ;-P

Stan, is that you? STAAAAAAN! I finally found you!