VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[ffive]

Just off the top of my head, the best friend, her boyfriend, and the party girl from the 1st all take a dump on Lena's cast in terms of not existing solely for the porn.

The best friend is, from what i remember, basically a device for a number of porn tropes and her entire presence boils down to who she's fucking at given moment -- her boyfriend, the MC, random assholes, black dudes, etc. Her boyfriend is similarly reduced to being cheated on by his gf, cheating on his gf along with MC, being cheated on by MC and/or being put in a hospital. The "party girl" i don't even know who that is referring to, that's how unique and memorable character she is. Do you mean younger sister of MC's bf who spends the entire game thirsting after a black dick, or the "here's a drug-addicted slutty college alpha bitch with a deep hidden heart of gold", absolutely not a done to death trope by any stretch?

Then there's the boss dude, who although a character introduced later on wasn't just some creepy fuck ala Seymour, and could arguably include even the tattoo guy in there, since altough a dickhead at the very least he was more well rounded and had more of an arc than blond creep or Mike.

Boss is, again, someone who doesn't ring any bells. The tattoo guy has a most basic arc that takes pretty much whole game to happen. While what we've got here is at half point. So comparing him to Axel or Mike is a bit too quick, they have lot of time to show similar level of development.

Hell, sleeziest bastard you can get with in the 1st is some cartel dude you need to get out of your way to even encounter

That's the sleeziest? Arthur sighs with naked relief.

 

[boulimanus]

As it's the final version of the chapter I've finally played through my multiple saves and got a better understanding of Alison now.
My first play is with Alison as a LI and I was confused why all of a sudden she required a condom after seemingly loving creampies so much.
But in my second play with Holly as my LI, I let myself slip and went to bed with Alison, where she wanted repeat creampies (with some recycled pictures but that's fine).
Now it is clear she is just ready to do anything to get the MC, including baby trap him. Well played Alison. Well played Eva.

This really needs to be played multiple times to have the best understanding of the story and characters.

 

[ffive]

Now it is clear she is just ready to do anything to get the MC, including baby trap him. Well played Alison. Well played Eva.

Honestly, i suspect that the whole reason Alison doesn't ask Ian who gets in bed with her late for a condom is that she's so excited he's actually willing to finally put it in she doesn't want to risk scaring him off, and isn't really planning past that.

 

[sametpunisher]

Final android version pls

 

[Alphaeboy]

Honestly, i suspect that the whole reason Alison doesn't ask Ian who gets in bed with her late for a condom is that she's so excited he's actually willing to finally put it in she doesn't want to risk scaring him off, and isn't really planning past that.

I feel like she will get pregnant and it'll cost some real drama when he's dating Lena, Holly, Cherry and Cindy. I can see them being real angry with both of them. I can see all them being heartbroken that he cheated on them more importantly Cindy who ruined her long relationship with Wade to someone who got anther girl pregnant.

I feel Alison would take him because why not.

 

[| Vee |]

Lena by bringing Louise in with Ian pulled same shit that Axel did. So question would be that Lena would've forgiven Ian If he pulled the same shit by bringing in another girl who he was fucking on before while in relationship with Lena and Lena could've been this forgiving as Ian was after his threesome with Louise and Lena?
Notice this situation is different from Axel one as Axel didn't come clean Lena found out BUT If Ian pulled what Lena pulled with Louise and come clean by his own will(which Lena didn't Ian caught her when Louise misspoke) Lena would've forgiven him?

Your thoughts on this scenario.

 

[UpravDom]

Lena can be similar to the author???

 

[boobthief]

Exactly, Ian has easily got a 6-incher and that puts him in the top 5% of all men worldwide

Ian and his Worldwide Top 5% Big Dick Energy. Said no one ever.

 

[desmosome]

Btw, what is the new plot point for Seymour thing in the final version?

 

[Gundamu0079]

Lena can be similar to the author???

damn eva kiss looking kinda a baddie

 

[dolfe67]

Btw, what is the new plot point for Seymour thing in the final version?

At the restaurant, they meet Agnes and the other mayor candidate

 

[Deleted member 6148663]

Lena can be similar to the author???

Where did you get these images from?

 

[| Vee |]

Is EK's real name Joanna Devas

 

[Hryme]

I don't think the two protagonists really adds that much to the game. I would have preferred two seperate games. One for each of them. I don't particularly like controlling both sides of a romance. However I understand that EvaKiss wanted to challenge herself and do something new. Hopefully she sticks to one in her next game.

 

[HUNUTAN]

Crap. I did not even expect that there would be such cool content and there would be so much of it.
It's a pity of course that there are so few scenes mfm. And it is doubly a pity that there is no such hardcore content as such. And so only this was not enough that I could safely call this game ideal for myself.)

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Why Not? At least In that case the updates would be faster

EvaKiss upon reading all these comments: ".....how could I never have thought of this?!?" Proceeds to delete two years worth of content creation involving Ian's playable parts, including scenes (sex & otherwise) and relationship paths Lena's not involved in. Then restructures all Lena content involving Ian so that Lena makes 100% of the choices in their relationship path.

16 months later: "Good news, those of you still playing whose paths I haven't cut yet! After a little more work on the Chapters 1-11 revamp, future updates will take me roughly 5 months now! I had to let a lot of contract staff go due to patreons leaving whose paths were cut. But we're a lot more agile now. Set to complete the full game in 2029! I'd especially like to thank the F95 zone crew for the suggestion!!"

 

[Manuya]

greetings new to this thread and this AVN and need help please!!
for fucks sake every other AVN that i've ever viewed when you hit the right mouse button you will return to the menu screen except for this one you get only Quit!!!?? where the fuck is the menu screen i hit every button on my keyboard and crashed the AVN trying to find it to no avail!!! i want to save but i can't do anything -_- please assist ASAP!

 

[ffive]

i want to save but i can't do anything -_- please assist ASAP!

The save/load options are in the "phone" menu accessible with right mouse button. BUT please keep in mind save/load isn't accessible during the (short) prologue of the game. You'll get access to these functions once Chapter 1 starts.

Spoiler: they'll be here in the game proper

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[dontcarewhateverno]

Going by real world standards he is actually big, not average. Is just in porn that dick sizes are exaggerated.

Agree with this. It's not as evident in the sprites. But in the actual sex scenes, Ian/Mike/Mark (interchangeable) is actually pretty big, going into average porn-star size. (Keep in mind, Eva is using pornstars for reference photos). The game just over-exaggerates some other characters to a greater extent so he seems smaller than average by comparison, what with Jeremy getting a new building permit to house his ever expanding penis each update.

 

[Manuya]

The save/load options are in the "phone" menu accessible with right mouse button. BUT please keep in mind save/load isn't accessible during the (short) prologue of the game. You'll get access to these functions once Chapter 1 starts.

Spoiler: they'll be here in the game proper

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