VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[mommysboiii]

Fuck Gillian, she can stay with Mike or whoever her BF is and cheat on them. Once a cheater is always a cheater.

damm you haters have bad woman taste

 

[mommysboiii]

I'm glad there won't be a Gillian route. Even if you have an Ian humiliation fetish like some of the weirdos in this thread I think it'd be absolutely insane for him to give her another chance given what she did.

dude there are litterly path were you cant forget her and also watch the nightmares so she will use that for a gillian route or for cindy/holly cheating route

 

[MF_DOOM]

Stan Would be a Great Chef. I mean the time Lena complimented him for making meatballs and omelets and Impressed Lena. Getting Compliments...He has the potential to cook

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Knowing Stan, that creep would probably ejaculate in everybody's food.

 

[mommysboiii]

Sharing her with Jeremy is so-so. The voyeur and cuck route doesn't really work since Jeremy is too oblivious for it and Alison prefers Ian overall even if he is limp and freezes up.

my guess is that there will be more drama with the ian alison jeremy triangle in the future at the moment it dosent work but I guess it was just the (start)

 

[Xupuzulla]

damm you haters have bad woman taste

Based mommysboiii,imagine not wanting to fuck the shit out of Gillian.

 

[ffive]

Knowing Stan, that creep would probably ejaculate in everybody's food.

Stan, an avid Degrees of Lewdity player.

 

[Ilcoriglianese forte]

The problem with the 2 lost souls finding each other premise is that it's mainly written for Lena and Ian. The problem with this is that there are people who have no interest in Lena being romantically involved with Ian. I thought the dev went too heavy handed in trying to tell the player that they are meant to get together. For example if you don't have Lena kiss Ian on the 2nd date Lena is blocked from being able to open up to Ian about Axel. Another scenario is if Lena tells Ivy that she isn't interested in Ian they automatically start dating after the 3rd date. To me that sort of diminished the story's premise if you don't want them to get together.

Honestly I think the whole heartbreak from cheating angle is also diminished when both mcs can engage in cheating themselves. Personally I feel a more interesting scenario would have been that Ian had proposed to Gillian and right before the wedding she ran off due to cold feet. Not only would it be a fresher premise and increase the weight of Ian being hesitant to enter a new serious relationship it would also help him to not look like such a hypocrite if he does go down the cheating route(s).

I also had an idea about Lena's breakup due to Axel's anger and violence issues but I don't think that's something the dev would want to tackle in this story. I just wish that if Lena warns Cindy about Axel that it was tracked.

Your comment is right, but I have already written several times that the game represents more two separate entities, they are much better as characters, and the further the story goes, the more the theory that they are two souls who will find each other is something more false , to make the clear path Ian-Lena, you practically don't have to play, at the slightest mistake, Lena betrays.

 

[mommysboiii]

It’s not at all clear to me why Eva brought Gillian back into the script. In some AVNs, "getting your ex back" is a popular plot move, and some developers write this line well, making the player feel empathy for their ex, writing out why they broke up, making both of them feel guilty, for example. And then going with good redemption line. And indeed, sometimes exes are made so cool that you start to like them.
In Gillian's case...there is none of this. I was expecting something interesting when she first showed up, but all we got was: "Hi Ian, long time no see, blah blah blah...I was sad without you blah blah blah, I didn't want it to be like this came out." Plus a cuck dream if we haven't deleted the photos. And it's all. Very weak. If Gillian is just a plot device for the cuck Ian path, then that's too bad and her return is a pointless waste of development time. So for now: FUCK YOU, GILLIAN.
I may love redheads, but not to that extent.

damm at this point I believe eva brings her back to trigger all the incels HOPE THE GILLIAN CHEATING content goes BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

 

[Krysis_here]

Knowing Stan, that creep would probably ejaculate in everybody's food.

Do you mean He might have mixed his White Sauce/Mayonnaise in the food and Claiming it as Nice and Organic? Do you think People don't realize it and if they do they might puke there?

 

[MF_DOOM]

 

[Solomon Grundy]

You might've overlooked it, but the event you didn't pick happens in the background a few weeks after the first, featured one. Lena and the cafe owners make a mention of it while discussing things, but it's not shown explicitly. So the life drawing (and Ed getting an eyeful of Lena and re-discovering his passion for drawing) happens either way.

Thanks! Yeah, I confess I tend to speed read through the Molly/Ed scenes as well as Lena's family drama, so I just didn't catch it.

 

[Blurpee69]

Stan Would be a Great Chef. I mean the time Lena complimented him for making meatballs and omelets and Impressed Lena. Getting Compliments...He has the potential to cook

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What are you talking about? It literally says right in the screen capture you posted that his mom made them, he only warmed them up.

 

[Andrea9999]

There is already foreshadowing for Holly with Marcel. She will be throttled by Marcel at some point

I know this sounds a bit Pollyanna....but I think Marcel has already acted too amused and good humored in her direction to pull it off convincingly....perhaps down the line by a less than savory friend of his.

 

[Krysis_here]

What are you talking about? It literally says right in the screen capture you posted that his mom made them, he only warmed them up.

He can cook many things and Besides He visited his mom when not written, He has to cook it again with heating them, Plus he cook food for Lena and Louise

 

[Blurpee69]

I know this sounds a bit Pollyanna....but I think Marcel has already acted too amused and good humored in her direction to pull it off convincingly....perhaps down the line by a less than savory friend of his.

Keep in mind he also acted that way towards Lena. And then... "I heard you like dark meat"

 

[Solomon Grundy]

I seem to have encountered a game breaking bug, but I'm not sure if it's the base game or the JohnDupont mod. I can't remember when exactly this happened, but much earlier in the story Lena had the two links available to shop for dresses and shop for bikini's. I found it odd at the time, because she makes some comment when you go to the buy dresses link about them getting beer spilled on them or whatever. Anyway, they were free, so I went ahead and bought both a dress and bikini.

Fast forward to when you're actually supposed to get those on the mall trip with Emma, and there's nothing I can do. Those links are greyed out, and so the only link available is the regular "Buy Outfits" one, and nothing you do there advances the story.

 

[Blurpee69]

I seem to have encountered a game breaking bug, but I'm not sure if it's the base game or the JohnDupont mod. I can't remember when exactly this happened, but much earlier in the story Lena had the two links available to shop for dresses and shop for bikini's. I found it odd at the time, because she makes some comment when you go to the buy dresses link about them getting beer spilled on them or whatever. Anyway, they were free, so I went ahead and bought both a dress and bikini.

Fast forward to when you're actually supposed to get those on the mall trip with Emma, and there's nothing I can do. Those links are greyed out, and so the only link available is the regular "Buy Outfits" one, and nothing you do there advances the story.

Sounds like a bug introduced by the mod then. You weren't supposed to be able to buy those until late into chapter 11.

 

[Xupuzulla]

damm at this point I believe eva brings her back to trigger all the incels HOPE THE GILLIAN CHEATING content goes BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

The nerds of F95 when they realize this game has cheating between the characters: "OH HECK NO,MY PURE VIRGIN EYES CANT HANDLE THIS MUCH FILTH!"

 

[Krysis_here]

The nerds of F95 when they realize this game has cheating between the characters: "OH HECK NO,MY PURE VIRGIN EYES CANT HANDLE THIS MUCH FILTH!"

I mean in Mind- Cheating means, New Character meeting Unlock resulting in Sex Scenes with New Character- Sounds Hot

Now What Should Ian do in so Much Pressure of Cheating and Handling Relationships? Stop thinking about relationships Stay single and enjoy life, Watch Porn and Jerk Off

 

[Leongen43]

The nerds of F95 when they realize this game has cheating between the characters: "OH HECK NO,MY PURE VIRGIN EYES CANT HANDLE THIS MUCH FILTH!"

And maybe a paper bag if they are very impressed, if they are hyperventilating, if they see a threesome of punishment sex between Ian, Jeremy and Gillian where they spit on her, insult her, spank her ass hard and she screams with pleasure for both of them cocks that make her have an orgasm that makes Gillian faint, will they have fainting from premature ejaculation if they see a scene like that and can it happen again?