VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[MF_DOOM]

Maybe is just me, but I am not too excited about the beach house update. So we have Ian, Wade, Perry, Emma, Holly and later Lena.

• Perry might make a move on Emma - but at most we get the continuation of the after drugs scene.
• Wade is still technically in a relationship with Cindy, so I doubt that he will do anything.
• Emma might get a scene with Ian that will create some tension with Perry.
• Emma might get a scene with Lena that won't create any tension if Lena's single.
• There will be a "you've been cheating on me conversation" between Ian and Lena - this was set up previously by Ivy - telling her about Cindy (though this is just one path, you can still be with Cindy without anyone knowing or even suspecting it) and by Jeremy who heard rumors.
• Last but not least - Holly - but I don't care about her, if she drowns, she won't be missed
• Everything else that you pointed out might happen, but I don't think that this conversations can really push the story too much.

Why just this 6?

• Allison said she won't be there and she already got a scene in this update.
• Same for Cindy and Cherry.
• Jeremy wasn't invited - but I guess we'll see him with Ivy and or Lena, either on Friday or Saturday, before she leaves the city.
• Louise is invisible for the group, which is a pity - she might get a scene with Lena on Friday or Saturday.
• Nobody knows that Stan exists - I mean they do, but he's just that one dude that we've seen once at a concert.
• Mike/Mark/Marcel/Robert/Seymour - could get a scene on Friday or Saturday.

Basically, this will be just a normal update. With only those 6 involved, the beach house could have been another night spent in the Fortress. Ian has his group and will spend most of his time alone with them (Friday, Saturday) and Lena has hers and she'll do the same thing.

What this party needs is to mix up the groups more and just like someone else pointed out, re do the truth or dare game. Ivy trying to get some sort of revenge on Cindy either by forcing her into admission that she cheated or by doing stuff with Wade/Ian. Ian helping out Perry with Emma or doing the opposite. Jeremy pushing Lena to show her true colors in order to prove to Ian that he wasn't talking shit for no reason and so on.

Ian might meet some new girl there for a one-night stand or something, same goes for Lena.
I actually believe EK will include something like that for Ian or Lena or both, especially if Lena and Ian are experimenting together it might provide opportunities for a threesome with some new random character or with Emma/Holly.

 

[_Zebra_]

Ian might meet some new girl there for a one-night stand or something, same goes for Lena.
I actually believe EK will include something like that for Ian or Lena or both, especially if Lena and Ian are experimenting together it might provide opportunities for a threesome with some new random character or with Emma/Holly.

Maybe, I mean, we already got some scenes that appeared out of the blue, without too much build up, so it could happen.

• Jack: "So, I have money, muscles, a big dick and I think you don't look too bad, do you want to fuck?"
• Lena - in a perfect good relationship with Ian: "I have a boyfriend"
• Jack: "You do, but are you brave enough to go for what you want?"
• Lena: "Oh my god, I am so wet now. You convinced me, let's do it"

• Marcel: "So I've heard that you like the British Broadcasting Corporation, would you like to have some fun?"
• Lena: "Where have you heard that? Anyway, yes I do, but I have a boyfriend"
• Marcel: "Interesting - but are you good girl, or a naughty one?"
• Lena: "Oh my god, I am so naughty - you convinced me"
• ...Some time later...
• Marcel - after find out that Lena is in the bathroom with Axel: "You can't do this in the club Lena, unless you do it with me "

And yes, I know that you can pick a different option, but still, this two scenes were way too random. I just hope that if Lena and Ian decide to do something with an unknown person, they'll do a better job of convincing that person.

 

[mommysboiii]

What this party needs is to mix up the groups more and just like someone else pointed out, re do the truth or dare game. Ivy trying to get some sort of revenge on Cindy either by forcing her into admission that she cheated or by doing stuff with Wade/Ian. Ian helping out Perry with Emma or doing the opposite. Jeremy pushing Lena to show her true colors in order to prove to Ian that he wasn't talking shit for no reason and so on.

that would be hot I am in for cindy/ivy drama hope cindy /ivy drama exlodes this 2 divas will never wanna be the number 2 too much potential and with axel being on the yacht there is 100% chance ivy is trying to push ian/wade depends who cindy is dating guess ivy will find out and than send it to cindy or rub it under cindy noise and cindy doing the same as revenge I can imagin fits her cheracter

the drama posibilities are endless Ian cant get away always and ivy LOVES THE DRAMA

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

The thing is, YOU got nothing to be dissatisfied about.
If I was her patron I probably would be, but since you are NOT, why the fuck do you care about how often she writes status updates?
All this crying and bitching about "how dare she" is pointless.

And just like I said, she will not abandon the game all of a sudden because she is making 20K or probably more a month. It's not impossible for her to do it but she will probably provide updated and excuses as much as possible to milk the money for as long as possible for no work.

I know what you mean. We're not patrons, we're pirates and we get the game for free, so we can't complain. But still, we have the right to share opinions about the game and the development process here. Although I understand that this will not lead to results, the only way to get something done is to subscribe to Patreon and post your ideas there. But there is some censorship there - for example, the mods on her Discord were unhappy that some people were complaining about Eva’s silence. Also, one of my friends was banned there for criticism.
I don't think Eva is doing deliberate milking - it's the overly branched structure that makes Eva have writing problems that she finds difficult to cope with. All her previous delays were related specifically to writing - she solved other problems by hiring an outsourced artist, unloading her work.
It is clear that she is trying to meet the fans halfway, breaking the entire episode into prologue/Ian/Lena parts in order to deliver at least some content in adequate periods of time. However, this decision doesn't benefit the game with two characters; moreover, Eva has to separately polish each small release from alpha to final, which adds even more time.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

For grappler Ian, he needs level 5 Jiu Jitsu and high athletics. You can beat the opponent at 2.30 in R2. Other than grappling his low score in kickboxing hinders him a lot. I hope we get to balance it out later in the game. Otherwise, we'll be like Jeremy 2.0 in the grappling department as Jeremy is to kickboxing.

I did manage to finish him with an epic faceslam to the mat. Can't believe he wasn't knocked out after that, blud was tough.

 

[Krysis_here]

Wade getting angry with Ian while Cindy is getting fucked in a yatch

If they want to Cindy back both Ian and Wade should work on their Bodies, Ian should focus on Building muscles than Injecting Steroids and making his dick Shrink like a Leech shaped one and Wade should leave his grumpy lil Goblin face outside work on Jiggling Belly , Axel maybe Toxic but his that I can't comment on. Cindy will go a hundred times in Yatch if Axel has that body

Spoiler: Ian x Wade Fitness time

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[MF_DOOM]

I know what you mean. We're not patrons, we're pirates and we get the game for free, so we can't complain. But still, we have the right to share opinions about the game and the development process here.

I get it, but most of your post in the last week got the r/BeggingChoosers subreddit to them.

 

[Blurpee69]

Maybe is just me, but I am not too excited about the beach house update. So we have Ian, Wade, Perry, Emma, Holly and later Lena.

• Perry might make a move on Emma - but at most we get the continuation of the after drugs scene.
• Wade is still technically in a relationship with Cindy, so I doubt that he will do anything.
• Emma might get a scene with Ian that will create some tension with Perry.
• Emma might get a scene with Lena that won't create any tension if Lena's single.
• There will be a "you've been cheating on me conversation" between Ian and Lena - this was set up previously by Ivy - telling her about Cindy (though this is just one path, you can still be with Cindy without anyone knowing or even suspecting it) and by Jeremy who heard rumors.
• Last but not least - Holly - but I don't care about her, if she drowns, she won't be missed
• Everything else that you pointed out might happen, but I don't think that this conversations can really push the story too much.

Why just this 6?

• Allison said she won't be there and she already got a scene in this update.
• Same for Cindy and Cherry.
• Jeremy wasn't invited - but I guess we'll see him with Ivy and or Lena, either on Friday or Saturday, before she leaves the city.
• Louise is invisible for the group, which is a pity - she might get a scene with Lena on Friday or Saturday.
• Nobody knows that Stan exists - I mean they do, but he's just that one dude that we've seen once at a concert.
• Mike/Mark/Marcel/Robert/Seymour - could get a scene on Friday or Saturday.

Basically, this will be just a normal update. With only those 6 involved, the beach house could have been another night spent in the Fortress. Ian has his group and will spend most of his time alone with them (Friday, Saturday) and Lena has hers and she'll do the same thing.

What this party needs is to mix up the groups more and just like someone else pointed out, re do the truth or dare game. Ivy trying to get some sort of revenge on Cindy either by forcing her into admission that she cheated or by doing stuff with Wade/Ian. Ian helping out Perry with Emma or doing the opposite. Jeremy pushing Lena to show her true colors in order to prove to Ian that he wasn't talking shit for no reason and so on.

What do you mean only those six scenes? Are you talking about only sex scenes?

For example, Wade finally having proper introductions with Lena and Holly can mean a lot, especially Lena. Lena can talk to Wade about who and what Axel is, and can help motivate him to action, or can hide who Axel is causing that his relationship with Cindy to suffer more. Lena also has the possibility of knowing about Ian and Cindy, combined with Perry's suspicions could lead to a huge blow up. There doesn't have to be a sex scene here for there to be a major development for Wade's story. Or imagine a Holly under the influence of Ivy unknowingly flirting with Wade, because she doesn't know about his relationship with Cindy. No sex, but Wade can be a measuring stick for how much Holly is being influenced by Ivy here.

Emma being there opens up the possibility of threesomes with the Lena / Ian pairing or the Lena / Holly pairing. I hesitate to say the Ian / Holly pairing, but I won't write it off entirely. Throwing Perry into the mix, not as a potential sex partner, but as someone that can catch Emma with Ian, Lena, is also a huge potential interaction that can do a lot to ruin his friendship with them. But if Emma is single, Perry could solidify his relation with her here. If Lena is in good relations with Seymour, that could also lead to a lot of drama between her and Emma, again not a sex scene, but a potential huge plot point and a reset of that relationship.

I don't understand your point about this event could take place at The Fortress. Almost this entire game could take place in the fortress and the story wouldn't change much, the point of them relocating is to keep the scenery fresh. We'll have several fresh pairings here, away from the influence of other cast members.

 

[MF_DOOM]

Maybe, I mean, we already got some scenes that appeared out of the blue, without too much build up, so it could happen.

• Jack: "So, I have money, muscles, a big dick and I think you don't look too bad, do you want to fuck?"
• Lena - in a perfect good relationship with Ian: "I have a boyfriend"
• Jack: "You do, but are you brave enough to go for what you want?"
• Lena: "Oh my god, I am so wet now. You convinced me, let's do it"

• Marcel: "So I've heard that you like the British Broadcasting Corporation, would you like to have some fun?"
• Lena: "Where have you heard that? Anyway, yes I do, but I have a boyfriend"
• Marcel: "Interesting - but are you good girl, or a naughty one?"
• Lena: "Oh my god, I am so naughty - you convinced me"
• ...Some time later...
• Marcel - after find out that Lena is in the bathroom with Axel: "You can't do this in the club Lena, unless you do it with me "

And yes, I know that you can pick a different option, but still, this two scenes were way too random. I just hope that if Lena and Ian decide to do something with an unknown person, they'll do a better job of convincing that person.

Also, how can we forget EKs love for coincidences and drama. She will probably go with "Ian's Ex is vacationing nearby and there will be drama" or "Mike is on vacation there too", so it will create tension between Lena and Ian or produce another potential sex scene etc.

 

[BlandChili]

Also, how can we forget EKs love for coincidences and drama. She will probably go with "Ian's Ex is vacationing nearby and there will be drama" or "Mike is on vacation there too", so it will create tension between Lena and Ian or produce another potential sex scene etc.

All of a sudden Ian's dad shows up and cucks Ian regardless of player input.

 

[Leongen43]

Also, how can we forget EKs love for coincidences and drama. She will probably go with "Ian's Ex is vacationing nearby and there will be drama" or "Mike is on vacation there too", so it will create tension between Lena and Ian or produce another potential sex scene etc.

Interesting, it could be like a romantic comedy where Gillian appears hand in hand with her boyfriend (you bet who will be her boyfriend in the end) and Emma, seeing that sad moment for Ian, pretends to be the girlfriend to protect Ian, we could see a romance with Emma or a voyeuristic loser Ian next to Perry spying on Gillian and a cousin of Perry's who looks like him who falls in love with Ian?

 

[bonerland]

She did it to keep her patrons engaged so they stay subbed for the next month, She wouldn't want to lose money because of the radio silence now would she. Funny how it works.... look at how happy her patrons are lol

She did it to keep her patrons engaged so they stay subbed for the next month, She wouldn't want to lose money because of the radio silence now would she. Funny how it works.... look at how happy her patrons are lol

Pretty sure 90% of her patrons are in the lowest tier possible, so a couple of bucks is no skin off their nose. And not being an ingrate is not the same as being a slobbering fanboy.

 

[Xupuzulla]

All of a sudden Ian's dad shows up and cucks Ian regardless of player input.

Ian dad fucking Ivy before his cuck son,DO IT,EVAKISS!!

 

[SearingFive]

Most of the patrons either stop till the new update is released or switch to the lower tier if they want to keep supporting. The high-tier supporters are on another level of power-tripping and having parasocial relationships with the dev. Which is no surprise in today's clown society. If you give a small constructive criticism towards the dev they'll seethe and you can feel their breaths down your neck *shudders*.

 

[Leongen43]

Ian dad fucking Ivy before his cuck son,DO IT,EVAKISS!!

But would that be a slap in the face for Ian or for the fanboys in love with Ivy?
I like your new avatar image

 

[Krysis_here]

Ian dad fucking Ivy before his cuck son,DO IT,EVAKISS!!

His Dad Might Show Ian how to Fuck a Lady, What will his Dad say? Look My Fool Son Ian This is How we fuck a Lady in our Days not like you injecting tons of Steroids and making the Dick look like a Clown? Do you think Ian will take the advice or He will be Horny enough to look at his Dad in Action?

 

[mommysboiii]

All of a sudden Ian's dad shows up and cucks Ian regardless of player input.

fuck there is nothing more embarrassing than getting cucked by jordan cuckerson talking about lobsters, the holy trinity and how to clean your room in 12 steps hell no I will take perry over that one let the professionals like axel,mike,jeremy do the cucking thanks

 

[Xupuzulla]

But would that be a slap in the face for Ian or for the fanboys in love with Ivy?

Both and thats why it needs to happen ASAP!

 

[mommysboiii]

a voyeuristic loser Ian next to Perry spying on Gillian and a cousin of Perry's who looks like him who falls in love with Ian?

there is nothing better than a kinky camping trip with the boisss

 

[| Vee |]

I think sexting from Alison or Cindy or even Minevra may happen too.

That gave me an idea. Wade/Lena/Perry may or may not read/catch Ian sexting Cindy/others.
Just Saying!