VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[Gicoo]

I'd argue if he actually did tell Wade, then people would be raging on him for being disloyal to his friend Ian and not choosing them over Wade (with the actual reason for hate being the fact his actions affected them negatively)

As of now, I don't see the purpose of having Jeremy discovering Ian and Cindy. He may be loyal to Ian by some weird definition I don't share, but he is scum to Wade. It may be plausible if he isn't close with Wade, but he got along very well with him when they hung out. If Ians friendship level is low, he doesn't share pics of Louise with him, but says Wade that he will tell him about that later (IIRC), so Wade is on a certain level of thrust.
It can only get a payoff if he finally tells Wade, but there is no implication that he does it. Even Ian ending his relationship with him in chapter 12 doesn't seem to provoke Jeremy. He is just getting out and leaves Ian to stew.

(Ivy discovering it has a payoff in chapter 11, when she tells Lena. Plus she is very liberal about relationships and fucking, so she may not find it outrageous enough, also she has no comparable relationship to Ian, Cindy and Wade.)

 

[ffive]

As of now, I don't see the purpose of having Jeremy discovering Ian and Cindy.

It's possible that he might reveal it eventually if Ian decides to keep the affair ongoing. Or it's just something as simple as EK needed excuse for Ivy to show up in that alley, so having her go there with Jeremy who is established to try and score with her was reasonable.

 

[Xupuzulla]

I believe Jeremy was supposed to be a friendly fuckboi or womanizer but EK didn't want him to overshadow Ethan so it led to his character being deficient.

I mean inst this obvious?
The npcs cant outshine the MCs,Evakiss cant make the self-inserters mad.
Jeremy destiny is to be always behind Ian,it is what it is.

 

[camube]

I wish some of EK's patreons suggested her to release an update every time a full day is complete for Lena and Ian. Yes updates would be much shorter, but more frequent too.

some people don't have time to play alpha and then beta and then final. i think there's an intersection between those who have less time and those who pay regularly. And her subscribers did vote to not split the chapter.

 

[camube]

But, if there's anything we can learn from GGGB, the developer really likes tacky things

this is it! This is the word I've been looking for forever to describe how I feel about GGGB. It's really tacky.
Early ORS was not like that.

To add to your excellent post, I get the sense, as a player and also reading her patreon post that EK probably bit more than she can chew, and that leads to here.

Man, the number of permutation that is possible for all the choices we as a player made is crazy. I kinda feel bad for her tbh. Like it must have been really hard to develop all the possibilities going forward, and more than that, we as a player doesn't get much progress per chapter because ORS is so wide, it takes longer and longer for each development cycle for it to go deep.

EK has the exact same problem DPC has, the game has too wide of a possibility and now the development time spirals out of control.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

This is actually foreshadowing of where Ivy's training of Holly is heading. Instead of raising a bimbo and a direct competition she's instead training an obedient little loli.

What you talking about? Naughty Holly will eventually replace Ivy as the Queen of Blazer. You'll see, big breast implants, lip injections, platinum blonde hair, Marcel's big black cock and making Ian her cuck, and she'll soon be ruling the roost.

 

[dolfe67]

The npcs cant outshine the MCs,Evakiss cant make the self-inserters mad.

There has been enough self-inserters getting mad when Jeremy got Allison even though they didn't pay attention to her

EK has the exact same problem DPC has, the game has too wide of a possibility and now the development time spirals out of control.

DPC has somehow corrected this by having to choose a girlfriend path so the variation stay manageable

 

[Zara Scarlet]

I mean inst this obvious?
The npcs cant outshine the MCs,Evakiss cant make the self-inserters mad.
Jeremy destiny is to be always behind Ian,it is what it is.

You're forgetting Cuck Ian. Everyone's in front of him ( except maybe Perry).

 

[Priappus]

You're forgetting Cuck Ian. Everyone's in front of him ( except maybe Perry).

He's not only a Cuck(Ian),he's also a gay.

 

[Xupuzulla]

You're forgetting Cuck Ian. Everyone's in front of him ( except maybe Perry).

You are actually right,i forgot that path.
Still in that path you can completely ignore Jeremy and cockblocking all you want with both MCs.
Jeremy fate is always tied to your choices.

 

[≋T≋h≋e≋H≋u≋n≋t≋e≋r≋]

Can you be someones Mistress (The Dominant Partner Not The Side Piece Mistress type FYI)
IF you can then who

 

[Maviarab]

Can you be someones Mistress (The Dominant Partner Not The Side Piece Mistress type FYI)
IF you can then who

Yes, Louise.

 

[≋T≋h≋e≋H≋u≋n≋t≋e≋r≋]

Is it self explanatory choices that leads to that or is more difficult to get it?

 

[dolfe67]

Is it self explanatory choices that leads to that or is more difficult to get it?

It's pretty explicit, but you have to make her break-up with Jeremy

 

[BlandChili]

Is it self explanatory choices that leads to that or is more difficult to get it?

I think it does depend on Lena's lust stat, so you may want to emphasise that, and you may have to buy the collar and leash when Lena goes to the sex shop.

It's pretty explicit, but you have to make her break-up with Jeremy

Yeah, also this of course.

 

[≋T≋h≋e≋H≋u≋n≋t≋e≋r≋]

I think it does depend on Lena's lust stat, so you may want to emphasise that, and you may have to buy the collar and leash when Lena goes to the sex shop.

Yeah, also this of course.

Ok Thx will play it through once more but now I know what to keep an eye out for

 

[Mtgwo]

Maaaaaaan i wanna corrupt the shit out of Holly. Goddman, she needs more content, this is easily one of the best corruption paths i've seen.

 

[markel1000]

Can you be someones Mistress (The Dominant Partner Not The Side Piece Mistress type FYI)
IF you can then who

Louise

 

[markel1000]

Maaaaaaan i wanna corrupt the shit out of Holly. Goddman, she needs more content, this is easily one of the best corruption paths i've seen.

I agree i forgot how fun the scenes are did it on my ian Allison and ian lena run

 

[ffive]

and you may have to buy the collar and leash when Lena goes to the sex shop.

This is optional -- if Lena hasn't bought the collar already then the game will add it to her inventory for the scene with Louise. So, an opportunity to save some money for the poor Lenas out there.