VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[Augustus Commodus]

It happens if you seek out Axel as Lena again for a chance with his work, Ivy never shows up when she said she would. Reason why she stayed in contact with Axel was for that same gain.

As of yet, we have no evidence that anything Ivy has done with Lena has been malicious. Apparently, Ivy is scatter-brained enough and has bad enough time management that Lena accepts that as an explanation. On the other hand, Ivy was pushing hard for Lena to contact Axel, and I wouldn't surprise me to find out that getting Lena to contact him and Ivy not showing up for Lena's shoot were conditions Axel set for his help. In that case, it would definitely be selfish and malicious.

She already did you don't remember the drugs she gave him. But now seriously ivy is going to get lena in pretty big trouble eventually.

In a lot of ways, she already has.

As for the Louise-Stan discussion, sadly they'd probably be a very happy couple. Stan is a white knight who wants to give 100% to whomever he's with. Louise is an emotional parasite that demands 100% from whomever she's with. It wouldn't surprise me if they even like the same terrible books. The hardest part would be hooking them up in the first place. It would require Louise to engage Stan in at least a civil manner, and it would require Stan to react with a non-zero amount of charm. That might be an unsurmountable obstacle. If it did somehow happen, they would be a very happy couple. Toxic and codependent, but happy.

 

[yuvce]

all the other characters are fine.

No, most of them are dickweeds.

 

[36 Ninjas]

After a couple of hours tinkering with choices, I've finally got the outcome where the Ian x Lena x Holly path occurs. My only question is if having Emma join in our fun could be a possible path in the future?

Also, I came across a website that catalogue's avns but.... why in the fuck did billy get race swapped?

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More believable Billy imo

 

[Ray_D]

In a lot of ways, she already has.

As for the Louise-Stan discussion, sadly they'd probably be a very happy couple. Stan is a white knight who wants to give 100% to whomever he's with. Louise is an emotional parasite that demands 100% from whomever she's with. It wouldn't surprise me if they even like the same terrible books. The hardest part would be hooking them up in the first place. It would require Louise to engage Stan in at least a civil manner, and it would require Stan to react with a non-zero amount of charm. That might be an unsurmountable obstacle. If it did somehow happen, they would be a very happy couple. Toxic and codependent, but happy.

Jesus Christ man now that I think about it lena's social group is bullshit.

No, most of them are dickweeds.

Most of them don't bother me and the rivals are there for me to compete with and eventually kick their asses if eva decides to be venvolent and include those fights.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Personally I only hate Louise for being a social parasite, all the other characters are fine.

Who are mostly fine: Holly, Cherry, Emma, Wade (have flaws but but evokes empathy towards him), Ivy (but have some controversy)

 

[Andrea9999]

Hate sex?

I find that to be too artificial and contrived to be erotic. Its early introduction in "Nothing is Forever" almost turned me off to that excellent game.

I hople Louise-Stan happens at one point,that bad girl bully needs to be punished for being so mean

I am mixed on this comment. Very mean/bullyish to Stan, but perhaps with an underlying helplessness as its cause.

it would be a long game for sure but i think it could be doable, fuck stan or i'm as your mistress will fuck Jeremy and you will watch. maybe something like that?
yeah bitch needs a lesson, sure Stan is a bit of an odd duck but her having a hate boner for him even more after she walked in on him wanking is on her, she knocked but did not wait for him to say "come in"

I did like that that happened; I think the subsequent Lena/Stan/Stan's Penis threesome photoshoots are the second most erotic theme in the story. (Though I loved ffive 's picturesque criticism of me on this point!) Also, just the idea of Lena, as she is going to sleep, thinks of how Stan is gazing at the pictures of her that he took while stroking his erect penis.

As for the Louise-Stan discussion, sadly they'd probably be a very happy couple. Stan is a white knight who wants to give 100% to whomever he's with. Louise is an emotional parasite that demands 100% from whomever she's with. It wouldn't surprise me if they even like the same terrible books. The hardest part would be hooking them up in the first place. It would require Louise to engage Stan in at least a civil manner, and it would require Stan to react with a non-zero amount of charm. That might be an unsurmountable obstacle. If it did somehow happen, they would be a very happy couple. Toxic and codependent, but happy.

I think this is a very good point. The best set up that I can envision, is one in which Louise gets into some very grave trouble and Stan, disregarding their history helps her out of the trouble at a decent amount of personal sacrifice (physical castr...?)
Well, I do not know. That might be better left for a spin-off series.

So... happy,.. Maviarab?

 

[Leongen43]

Who are mostly fine: Holly, Cherry, Emma, Wade (have flaws but but evokes empathy towards him), Ivy (but have some controversy)

Jokes aside, I have no problems with any of the girls. They have their problems, but nothing that would make me reject them, not even Gillian, who I would like to have hate sex with. For me, Wade, Stan and Perry are a burden that only serve to make Ian look better. The only controversy I see in Ivy is that EK left her on the freezer of heterosexual sex because otherwise she would be just another one and wouldn't stand out as much. The only character that I reject is Axel because of his personality. Otherwise, I recognize that he is at a higher level than the other boys

 

[Ray_D]

Who are mostly fine: Holly, Cherry, Emma, Wade (have flaws but but evokes empathy towards him), Ivy (but have some controversy)

Holly: she is sacred and must be protected from ivy's clutches.

Cherry: I love chocolate, how did you know?

Emma: she loads the assets with emphasis on Ass.

Wade: He is a bro.

Ivy: a snake in the grass if you think that description is accurate.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Jokes aside, I have no problems with any of the girls. They have their problems, but nothing that would make me reject them, not even Gillian, who I would like to have hate sex with. For me, Wade, Stan and Perry are a burden that only serve to make Ian look better. The only controversy I see in Ivy is that EK left her on the freezer of heterosexual sex because otherwise she would be just another one and wouldn't stand out as much. The only character that I reject is Axel because of his personality. Otherwise, I recognize that he is at a higher level than the other boys

Fun, but I accidently step on Gillian path, and decided not to remove that path. Ian and Lena was casual, but break up in the last Ep, have no idea why. Maybe because of Ian still having feelings for Gillian.

Ivy controversy I see that her treatment to Holly is abusive, despite Holly coming out of her shell. And her goals for pushing Lena, specially with Axel is unclear.

Holly: she is sacred and must be protected from ivy's clutches.

Cherry: I love chocolate, how did you know?

Emma: she loads the assets with emphasis on Ass.

Wade: He is a bro.

Ivy: a snake in the grass if you think that description is accurate.

Short and straightforward. What about the others from the crew?

 

[Ray_D]

Short and straightforward. What about the others from the crew?

Perry: he's an indecisive bitch but we live in his house so we tolerate for now.

Cindy: If the dictionary had a picture of what indecisiveness is Cindy would be that picture.

Jeremy: The only thing that makes him stand out is being black and having a third leg all the other aspects of his character are garbage.

Axel: One of the few non-pathetic opponents in the AVN world. He is a real threat that will motivate Ian to improve himself to face him eventually.

Louise: a fucking social parasite with bad literary taste.

Seymour: high class pimp with erectile dysfunction.

Stan: average evakiss donor.

Agnes: axel's sugar mommy.

Billy: Woman trafficker or some fucked up shit.

Boris: nobody asked him but he took care of lena and her family.

Denna: The maternal problems that eva couldn't solve with her own mother.

Ed: you have the love of your life who loves you unconditionally and you're chasing young women what a loser.

Lola: 10/10 the best character in the game.

Mike: the guy who fucked Gillian when she cheated on Ian. he's also a bitch with anger issues.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Perry: he's an indecisive bitch but we live in his house so we tolerate for now.

Cindy: If the dictionary had a picture of what indecisiveness is Cindy would be that picture.

Jeremy: The only thing that makes him stand out is being black and having a third leg all the other aspects of his character are garbage.

Axel: One of the few non-pathetic rivals in the AVN world. He's a real threat that will motivate ian to become better at facing him eventually.

Louise: a fucking social parasite with bad literary taste.

Seymour: high class pimp with erectile dysfunction.

Stan: average evakiss donor.

Agnes: axel's sugar mommy.

Billy: Woman trafficker or some fucked up shit.

Boris: nobody asked him but he took care of lena and her family.

Denna: The maternal problems that eva couldn't solve with her own mother.

Ed: you have the love of your life who loves you unconditionally and you're chasing young women what a loser.

Lola: 10/10 the best character in the game.

Mike: the guy who fucked Gillian when she cheated on Ian. he's also a bitch with anger issues.

Stan. Lmao, accurate Also, average Reddit user.

Mike fucked Jillian, maybe, but anger issues? I think you're talking about Robert.

 

[Ray_D]

Stan. Lmao, accurate Also, average Reddit user.

Mike fucked Jillian, maybe, but anger issues? I think you're talking about Robert.

Nah, mike is easy to provoke, his confrontation with axel proved that. And if you're interested I have more material, just give me the names I'm missing.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Nah, mike is easy to provoke, his confrontation with axel proved that. And if you're interested I have more material, just give me the names I'm missing.

Remember that moment with Axel, more like self-defence, because Axel being a hysterical cunt.

Missed characters: Robert, Marcel, basic Ian/Lena on the game beginning, Gillian, Alison, Natasha (GGGB cameo)

 

[notstaged]

You are forgetting to mention that Louise sexts Ian after just one "I like your style" from him, even if Ian is her best friend's boyfriend. She also behaves like a cruel bitch with Stan and she's paranoidly clingy with Jeremy, Lena and Ian.

The whole lovebombing text exchange doesn't make any sense at all, I'm not building a defense case for an existing character, just saying that she could be somewhat elevated out of the frame of shallow Hot Topic/Tim Burton variety goth girl and possibly balance some of her route out. It is funny that Lena can defend Stan after exchanging two words with him and gain wits points for it and call her a bitch, a girl she went to college with and was acquainted enough to agree to rent a place together.

 

[ffive]

It is funny that Lena can defend Stan after exchanging two words with him and gain wits points for it and call her a bitch, a girl she went to college with and was acquainted enough to agree to rent a place together.

I'd wager a guess Louise is probably someone EK had displeasure of knowing in RL.

 

[Ray_D]

Remember that moment with Axel, more like self-defence, because Axel being a hysterical cunt.

Missed characters: Robert, Marcel, basic Ian/Lena on the game beginning, Gillian, Alison, Natasha (GGGB cameo)

Robert: he's bad at sex, doesn't know how to fight and is one of the reasons why lena got fired from her job at the restaurant.

Marcel: Like Jeremy, his only goal is to be a tall black man with a third leg. At this point I think the real size queens are not the female characters in the game but the eva donors.

Basic Ian: a broken and stagnant man after ending a four year relationship.

Basic lena: A girl with dreams and aspirations who had to give up everything to take care of a mother who loves her brother more and dismisses her efforts.

Gillian: If being a basic bitch was a profession Gillian would be employee of the month for 4 consecutive years.

Alison: it's a fucking trap, that woman wants to get pregnant and trap a man.

Natasha: I want to get my hands on that redhead.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Robert: he's bad at sex, doesn't know how to fight and is one of the reasons why lena got fired from her job at the restaurant.

Should be kicked from the game. Garbage character

Marcel: Like Jeremy, his only goal is to be a tall black man with a third leg. At this point I think the real size queens are not the female characters in the game but the eva donors.

And that's sad Eva doesn't give him a personality, like for Jeremy making only for BBC kinks. That's remind me things with black characters in games who exists only for DEI points.

Basic lena: A girl with dreams and aspirations who had to give up everything to take care of a mother who loves her brother more and dismisses her efforts.

Truth, and honestly she shouldn't give a fuck if mom theats her that way. My Lena gave them the minimum amount of money, knowing where her mother spent it - they won't get another cent. Lena should get on with her life.

Gillian: If being a basic bitch was a profession Gillian would be employee of the month for 4 consecutive years.

Josy of Our Red String (cheater)

Natasha: I want to get my hands on that redhead.

Only one normal natural redhead in the game, can't wait for more content with her. But:

 

[robrize2169]

Lena and Holly are my two LI's. so very happy that there is the throuple in the making after the recent update. really all i care about tbh. my Lena did nothing with any of the guys and only with Ivy and Holly. now she is cuckqueening for chad Ian and i hope this path gets lots of content in future updates.
i like Cindy to be honest. but only her looks. her personality is shit and i don't care if she leaves Wade because he deserves better. i like Allison too and have a save where Ian is exclusively dating her while Lena is staying with the girls and ignoring all the guys. i even like Cherry a bit, but there is not much content with her.
blue balls all around for all them losers.

 

[Ray_D]

Should be kicked from the game. Garbage character


And that's sad Eva doesn't give him a personality, like for Jeremy making only for BBC kinks. That's remind me things with black characters in games who exists only for DEI points.


Truth, and honestly she shouldn't give a fuck if mom theats her that way. My Lena gave them the minimum amount of money, knowing where her mother spent it - they won't get another cent. Lena should get on with her life.


Josy of Our Red String (cheater)


Only one normal natural redhead in the game, can't wait for more content with her. But:

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Well, the next updates will be exclusively for lena so you know what that means.

 

[Andrea9999]

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The glutton on the left will be a perfect customer when Lena is farmed out.