VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

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Varrilete

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nice update i hope in the future Ian keeps fucking Cindy and maybe she gets pregnant with Ian love cream and Wade thinks he is the father, but Cindy and Ian know the true and they keep fucking once a week in a cheap motel and Cindy submits to Ian and she goes to Jessica and gets a small tatto in the pussy area the tatto would say something like "only for Ian"
 
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tyuiasdf

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BloodyMares said:
I don't know about Ashley from v0.01 but she could totally keep her appearance when she changes her style for the first time with Jessica's help and posts her first picture on Instagram. It would be totally reasonable, yes. In fact, I was extremely disappointed that Good Sexy Ash who is also famous, can't become a porn star, despite having experience with cam shows, simply because she's not a blonde bimbo. There are many pornstars who have a cute/nubile look and who are much more popular than fake plastic dolls. Just look at Lexi Belle and tell me why standard Ash wasn't good enough.
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And yes, plain grey T-shirt and jeans are perfect for a gang Ash. Because guess what, she needs to be one with the crowd, not attracting attention. I can picture a gangster Ash wearing a hoodie with a beanie rather than what she ends up wearing.

Yes, it's a visual novel, not a comic book. This means it doesn't have to be entirely about visuals but can have a deeper story as well.
Yes, I agree that affecting the plot and the characters is great, and what makes EvaKiss stand out among others. But this change could develop in many ways, not all of them have to be about looks. I am all for having some form of customization. But it can be a subtle change or a change that affects their personality that doesn't require drastic style change. No need to turn everyone into a caricature just to show visually that your choice matters for those who apparently can't bother to read and understand the change from the dialogue and the scenes with them. We are not children, we can handle subtle ways. Right?

Characters can change, but not drastically. We all have our limits that we won't go beyond. Why do they need to reconsider exactly? What's the point? How would it serve their character? I might understand Holly, she has ways to go and explore herself, just like Ash in GGGB but Cindy? I really don't see why she has to change visually all that much. She has opportunities to change as a person, and I'd rather read the new dialogue and see the change for myself, instead of seeing her just slap some tattoos and call it a day. Again, I'm not saying there shouldn't be visual change at all, just don't make it mandatory and if there is visual change, make it feel natural, well written and believable - not forced and unrealistic
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Funny to see you chose that example since she recently had a bunch of work done and looks more like the after version of Ashley now. Looks like they are on the same path.
 
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So, I just tried to make memory...
Lena know that Ian follow her stalkfap?
How many time does Ian look at her stalkfap? (I only remember the first and only) :unsure:
 
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BlandChili said:
"Good Lena" will become more interesting I feel, especially with the Seymour developments in this chapter.
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For me so far, the interesting part of corrupted Lena is her inner conflicts between her conscience and her perverted tendencies, that's why that scene from chapter 6, the photoshoot with Lena and Axel together is actually one of my favourites. I guess conflicts between moral decency and sexual desire is a fetish that I enjoy. But Good Lena has the potential to make for an interesting story beyond porn. Either way, for me Eva Kiss has already proven that she can do way more than just the average porn game.

AL.d said:
Because in my view, it's very realistic writing if anything. Just like 99% of players here would like to bang anything on sight when playing a male MC game but will be up in arms if one of the female characters cheats on that MC.
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Well, then I guess I am part of that 1% of players... I tend to enjoy stories with female characters cuckolding their fiances. It's a fun fetish :devilish:
And I don't think low of women who are sexually free.
 
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Varrilete said:
nice update i hope in the future Ian keeps fucking Cindy and maybe she gets pregnant with Ian love cream and Wade thinks he is the father, but Cindy and Ian know the true and they keep fucking once a week in a cheap motel and Cindy submits to Ian and she goes to Jessica and gets a small tatto in the pussy area the tatto would say something like "only for Ian"
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Oddly specific. :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
 
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Massi89 said:
For me so far, the interesting part of corrupted Lena is her inner conflicts between her conscience and her perverted tendencies, that's why that scene from chapter 6, the photoshoot with Lena and Axel together is actually one of my favourites. I guess conflicts between moral decency and sexual desire is a fetish that I enjoy. But Good Lena has the potential to make for an interesting story beyond porn. Either way, for me Eva Kiss has already proven that she can do way more than just the average porn game.
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Sure, sure, I didn't mean to imply that "good Lena" will be a better ending by comparison, what I mean is just that, in GGGB "good Ash" could coast through the story pretty comfortably without incident, unless you choose to cause drama or give in to other character's wishes.

I feel in ORS it might not be as easy for Lena to reach the... the "pure" ending, if you will. In ch. 8 Seymour comes back with a vengance and makes it very clear that he's not done with Lena and she also learns that there is more to Ivy and Axel.

An interesting contrast between the first portion of the chapter and the second; Lena is not as lonely as she thinks, she's made friends. But she's also garnered attention that she might have wished to be without.
 
Canto Forte

Canto Forte

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Well .. in no way is her ex portrayed as anything more than a slave driver to her,
so anyone taking after that asshole is just stepping on her freedom.
Massi89 said:
For me so far, the interesting part of corrupted Lena is her inner conflicts between her conscience and her perverted tendencies, that's why that scene from chapter 6, the photoshoot with Lena and Axel together is actually one of my favourites. I guess conflicts between moral decency and sexual desire is a fetish that I enjoy. But Good Lena has the potential to make for an interesting story beyond porn. Either way, for me Eva Kiss has already proven that she can do way more than just the average porn game.


Well, then I guess I am part of that 1% of players... I tend to enjoy stories with female characters cuckolding their fiances. It's a fun fetish :devilish:
And I don't think low of women who are sexually free.
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Funny how she is on principle opposed to totalitarian assholes,
but players can have her go back to them and ... play sexy pretend.

Only problem is, she will see it as playing into their hand,
so you either make her a worthless sex doll to rich assholes,
or you keep her wits about her and expand on her sexuality as a free woman.
 
Canto Forte

Canto Forte

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Very well .. gamer .. let us elaborate:
A barrista getting bartenders, fellow waiters, customers, bosses, exes coming on to her.
All she needs to do is drop to her knees / drop her dress and sex is served ...
What possible drive is there to bimbo herself?
ding dong said:
it could be a route
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Canto Forte said:
Very well .. gamer .. let us elaborate:
A barrista getting bartenders, fellow waiters, customers, bosses, exes coming on to her.
All she needs to do is drop to her knees / drop her dress and sex is served ...
What possible drive is there to bimbo herself?
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she enjoys the sex and gets 'corrupted'? usually how it works. this isn't a Tolstoy novel
 
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