VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

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DDDIsReal

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magicuser007 said:

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Ian's new look: Athletics
For his Athletics look Ian will be sporting a tight workout shirt. It might not be the most elegant attire, but it's perfect for showing his gains to the ladies!
I wanted to give him tracksuit-style pants to complete the look, but I stuck with the black jeans, shared with all other four looks. I made this decision to save some time and make it easier for myself when drawing the game's illustrations, since adding all possible outfit variations is really time-consuming and a real burden, also ramping up the number of images per chapter, and making them heavier. And in this new chapter there's quite a few instances where I had to draw every different outfit for Ian, so limiting the variations to his shirt is somewhat helpful
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This clothes are all awful, c'mon give some colors and variety to my boy
 
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BlandChili said:
This is a discussion forum, no one here forces you to read anything.

And your time was delicious.
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You weren't discussing the topic, you were monologuing the whole nine yards. You're right though, what Eva needs to do is to create a shirt with lots of chilli peppers on it to make it really tacky. Everyone then comments on how hot Ian is with a straight face. Could be fun.
 
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slightchance said:
You weren't discussing the topic, you were monologuing the whole nine yards. You're right though, what Eva needs to do is to create a shirt with lots of chilli peppers on it to make it really tacky. Everyone then comments on how hot Ian is with a straight face. Could be fun.
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"Does anyone here have any marvolous idea?"
I go on to explore the topic openly, as per your request
"Bro, who the hell asked you to discuss the topic?"
 
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slightchance said:
You weren't discussing the topic, you were monologuing the whole nine yards. You're right though, what Eva needs to do is to create a shirt with lots of chilli peppers on it to make it really tacky. Everyone then comments on how hot Ian is with a straight face. Could be fun.
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How is giving your personal opinion on the topic everyone is currently discussing not discussing the topic? Weird thing to object to just because you don't like or agree with her comment...
How about, instead of criticizing her opinion for no conceivable reason, you give your own on the topic?
 
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BlandChili said:
"Does anyone here have any marvolous idea?"
I go on to explore the topic openly, as per your request
"Bro, who the hell asked you to discuss the topic?"

All responses to open questions like that are monologues. Get over yourself.
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I said it in jest, not to piss you off or anything. I would have preferred a shorter version though, that's for sure.
"Why waste time say lot word when few word do trick" - Kevin
 
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slightchance said:
I said it in jest, not to piss you off or anything. I would have preferred a shorter version though, that's for sure.
"Why waste time say lot word when few word do trick" - Kevin
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Alright.
I do let it flow out with a lot of text on occasion, I know, something I share with Zedire. But it was an open question inviting free debate. If you want a word limit, like a university assignment, then kindly say so. :ROFLMAO:
 
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DDDIsReal said:
This clothes are all awful, c'mon give some colors and variety to my boy
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I know right? The outfit isn't the worst of the bunch but Ian is not hot enough to pull off that simple of an outfit and in such dull colours. I edited the drawing to see what it would look like more colourful and while I still don't love it, it looks a little better imo. Some accessories might help as well, like a sporty watch or etc.

(I also can't do anything artistic for the life of me, so please go easy on my edit lol)
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I know right? The outfit isn't the worst of the bunch but Ian is not hot enough to pull off that simple of an outfit and in such dull colours. I edited the drawing to see what it would look like more colourful and while I still don't love it, it looks a little better imo. Some accessories might help as well, like a sporty watch or etc.

(I also can't do anything artistic for the life of me, so please go easy on my edit lol)
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This version could very well be his old red t-shirt a little tighter. (and I'm sincerely hoping that we can still use said style since Ian's supposed new version of lust doesn't give me much hope)
 
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Teize said:
I know right? The outfit isn't the worst of the bunch but Ian is not hot enough to pull off that simple of an outfit and in such dull colours. I edited the drawing to see what it would look like more colourful and while I still don't love it, it looks a little better imo. Some accessories might help as well, like a sporty watch or etc.

(I also can't do anything artistic for the life of me, so please go easy on my edit lol)
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It's better than the original
 
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Tbh Ian's outfits are all underwhelming, but the fitness one looks awful. The fact that Eva says she likes it is beyond me.

It's clear that a lot more thought went into Lena's outfits. Her wits, charisma and fitness outfits were all so different.

That said, I do appreciate that Eva has acknowledged that the outfits were designed to save time. At least she's being honest about it.
 
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