VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[mehGusta]

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Also, there is nothing wrong with this game not being like GGGB. I liked GGGB quite a bit, but I'd say that this game is already better then GGGB - more engaging and better characterization, better graphics, not to mention the artful way in which character's stories intertwine. I'm not sure why we need to have a repeat of GGGB anyway? That story was told, and Eva isn't a one-trick pony - she's probably eager to use her experience from that game to create something better in this one.

IMO, that would be self-plagiarism. Way too similar to GGGB that had too much thug presence. IMO ORS needs to explore storylines that weren't properly developed in GGGB like the sex club that was introduced for one scene and was only brought back in the mother's ending. I wouldn't expect a proper underground like thugs, but if both Ian and Lena become jobless and too broke to afford rent, then they might have to live on the street or ask for help from people they can barely stand (like Seymour or Axel). Also, Lena could steal money from the cafe, and that might lead to more potential thefts and other criminal elements, but nothing as extreme as drug cartels/gangsters.

still there is already a lot of reappearing stuff, like female MC's 2 gal friends who can't stand each other (Eva Jess / Louise Ivy), one is the unhappy girlfriend of someone and the other is the sexually open bitch, which both have an interest in the same guy (Dave / Jeremy). or a guy (Jack / Axel) who wants to appear respectful of others, but ultimately is focused on his own success, while also being a womanizer, yet falls for female MC as she is the girl of his dreams. or the guy (Arthur / Seymour) who loves to be in control, sees young girls as objects to desire and gets what he wants through shady practices.

though, i don't know who is to blame for that. us fans who of course put the two games in comparison, or Evakiss for syphoning off her first success?

anyway this is indeed not an ideal development for the game, but who honestly doesn't see a franchise or a popular artist and hopes the next thing they'll make is similar to the last best thing they have made? (like the next Resident Evil / Marvel movie)
of course obvious copies are bad and i can't say i like seeing them in this game as well, but i think they are marginal when looked at the game as a whole.

generally i would concur on Zedire's sentiment that ORS is better than GGGB in all aspects, except for the sex scenes, with all the gangbangs, moresomes and kinks. but i'm feeling confident, that's only a matter of time. (not to say the sex scenes in ORS aren't great as well)
here is hoping that ORS will delve into all the scenarios that GGGB left missing.

 

[Ninja of Death]

If you don't go for Emma AND Perry goes to Wade's birthday party, they end up together. You can only be with Allison or Emma, not both.

 

[jduk]

I love me some Emma - love her personality and her body! It would be a total waste for her to end up with Perry, that's for sure.
Buuut... for me Cindy is best girl. Still too early to say whether Holly will be second-best girl, but odds are looking good.

Emma going with Perry is bad... Maybe it'll be nice if she makes him a cuck while getting dp with the other boys... And yes Cindy is top notch pussy

 

[BloodyMares]

generally i would concur on Zedire's sentiment that ORS is better than GGGB in all aspects, except for the sex scenes, with all the gangbangs, moresomes and kinks. but i'm feeling confident, that's only a matter of time. (not to say the sex scenes in ORS aren't great as well)

Depends on what you value more in the sex scenes, I guess. I personally love more ORS sex scenes, because it's obvious how Eva is putting more effort into the scenes (poses, facial expressions/chemistry, lighting, different details, etc.).
In GGGB, while it has crazy action (strong domination, gangbangs, rimming, etc), it was obvious that scenes themselves felt rather like a generic porno instead of an intimate/intense sexual experience. For example, most 1-on-1 scenes felt rather bland and didn't convey the romantic energy that Ash was feeling with their partner. In ORS, however, nearly all ORS scenes portray a specific mood that it goes for: With Holly and IanxLena the scenes are very sensual, gentle, and caring, and you can see it in every frame. With Alison, Cherry, Emma and even Axel, you can feel that characters are giving in to their lust and they are very emotional as well. That POV when Ian fucks Alison tits, while she's smiling at him, the shoot with Axel humping Lena and stimulating her with his cock sell the action better than most of the GGGB scenes. And then there are wild scenes with Mike and Ivy that take the cake. That bottle game alone is very hard to compete against, and when you add the threesome with Ivy and Holly... Nothing in GGGB made me feel as hot as when Louise begged Lena to jerk off her boyfriend in front of the girl she couldn't stand or when Holly was so eager to break out from her shell that she willingly submitted herself to Ivy and Lena in her first ever threesome with the girls that she considers to be her best friends.

 

[the3m_dude]

Depends on what you value more in the sex scenes, I guess. I personally love more ORS sex scenes, because it's obvious how Eva is putting more effort into the scenes (poses, facial expressions/chemistry, lighting, different details, etc.).
In GGGB, while it has crazy action (strong domination, gangbangs, rimming, etc), it was obvious that scenes themselves felt rather like a generic porno instead of an intimate/intense sexual experience. For example, most 1-on-1 scenes felt rather bland and didn't convey the romantic energy that Ash was feeling with their partner. In ORS, however, nearly all ORS scenes portray a specific mood that it goes for: With Holly and IanxLena the scenes are very sensual, gentle, and caring, and you can see it in every frame. With Alison, Cherry, Emma and even Axel, you can feel that characters are giving in to their lust and they are very emotional as well. That POV when Ian fucks Alison tits, while she's smiling at him, the shoot with Axel humping Lena and stimulating her with his cock sell the action better than most of the GGGB scenes. And then there are wild scenes with Mike and Ivy that take the cake. That bottle game alone is very hard to compete against, and when you add the threesome with Ivy and Holly... Nothing in GGGB made me feel as hot as when Louise begged Lena to jerk off her boyfriend in front of the girl she couldn't stand or when Holly was so eager to break out from her shell that she willingly submitted herself to Ivy and Lena in her first ever threesome with the girls that she considers to be her best friends.

that bottle game scene is god tier in my opinion...
hope for more similars scenes in the future
games or movies i think spin the bottle or truth or dare scenes are the hottest!

 

[Ashley young]

still there is already a lot of reappearing stuff, like female MC's 2 gal friends who can't stand each other (Eva Jess / Louise Ivy), one is the unhappy girlfriend of someone and the other is the sexually open bitch, which both have an interest in the same guy (Dave / Jeremy). or a guy (Jack / Axel) who wants to appear respectful of others, but ultimately is focused on his own success, while also being a womanizer, yet falls for female MC as she is the girl of his dreams. or the guy (Arthur / Seymour) who loves to be in control, sees young girls as objects to desire and gets what he wants through shady practices.

though, i don't know who is to blame for that. us fans who of course put the two games in comparison, or Evakiss for syphoning off her first success?

anyway this is indeed not an ideal development for the game, but who honestly doesn't see a franchise or a popular artist and hopes the next thing they'll make is similar to the last best thing they have made? (like the next Resident Evil / Marvel movie)
of course obvious copies are bad and i can't say i like seeing them in this game as well, but i think they are marginal when looked at the game as a whole.

generally i would concur on Zedire's sentiment that ORS is better than GGGB in all aspects, except for the sex scenes, with all the gangbangs, moresomes and kinks. but i'm feeling confident, that's only a matter of time. (not to say the sex scenes in ORS aren't great as well)
here is hoping that ORS will delve into all the scenarios that GGGB left missing.

I guess it is kinda hard to write a dual protagonist games. Playing as Ian feels better, because he has choices that actually matter. It is very clear that Ian cannot get every girl in the game. With each update his options keep on narrowing, and balancing multiple girls is difficult, but it feels good when things work out.
Lena's story on the other hand feels like an extension of GGGB, because the game seems to be based around her. Every decision she makes ends up working out, she can fuck anyone and everyone without repercussions. It wont be long before she's having bbc ganbangs while on coke without any other character knowing.

 

[godoff95]

I think Robert is nice. Especially when he bought that sexy bunny costume for Lena... I hope he becomes more aggressive and kinky sexually and corrupts Lena more into fucking her in work, public places, sticking a butt plug in her while she works with his cum in her etc

A reason I kept him.

 

[malla906]

Ian can easily transform into anyone with a hat and/or different haircut/facial hair

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Oi Cindy! Let the tosser run off and come on over 'ere!

lmao he looks like o'track from gomorrah

 

[John Doe Jr.]

but i'm feeling confident, that's only a matter of time

Imagine Holly getting gang banged after following the example of a lustful Lena and Ivy

 

[TamaMountain]

Imagine Holly getting gang banged after following the example of a lustful Lena and Ivy

Oh it will happen. Hopefully she does it with the bouncer, Jeremy and Billy . In fact Eva can just reuse the art for Iris' scene at the pool party from GGGB.

 

[jduk]

I guess it is kinda hard to write a dual protagonist games. Playing as Ian feels better, because he has choices that actually matter. It is very clear that Ian cannot get every girl in the game. With each update his options keep on narrowing, and balancing multiple girls is difficult, but it feels good when things work out.
Lena's story on the other hand feels like an extension of GGGB, because the game seems to be based around her. Every decision she makes ends up working out, she can fuck anyone and everyone without repercussions. It wont be long before she's having bbc ganbangs while on coke without any other character knowing.

As in real life, girls have it a lot easier in being sexually successful

 

[BloodyMares]

As in real life, girls have it a lot easier in being sexually successful

And in real life, they often get judged for slutting it up. But so far everyone's cool with Lena's adventures. I know she's been hiding her adventures successfully, and only Robert and Ian crossed paths, but I wonder what happens when Ian also learns about Mike and Jeremy. Or Robert learns about them (though he's already subdued and is willing to do anything just to keep her).

 

[Ninja of Death]

Ian would be majorly pissed off about Robert I think AND Jeremy. But if he's banging multiple women he has no right to judge. Lena would probably be very pissed off to find he's banging Cherry even if she's with multiple guys.

 

[godoff95]

Ian would be majorly pissed off about Robert I think AND Jeremy. But if he's banging multiple women he has no right to judge. Lena would probably be very pissed off to find he's banging Cherry even if she's with multiple guys.

He was pissed off at Robert.

 

[jduk]

Well Ian's interests is fucking all the girls by himself and not sharing... He can do whatever he wants...

 

[Ninja of Death]

I meant he'd have no right to judge for anyone BUT Robert (as his enemy) or Jeremy (as one of his best friends.) Any other guys would be fair game if he's banging Emma/Allison. Also her if she ever fucks Robert, Jessica is bad Jessica, if not she's good Jessica.

 

[3D Reaver]

Is this game vanilla? I noticed that there is a corruption tag, but most reviews are praising the game for it's writing and that's just not my thing.

the game is good,mostly, but god dam is it hard to avoid corruption. impossible depending on your definition of it

 

[Tallyhoe]

IMO, that would be self-plagiarism.

Seriously?

 

[Bishop Robert]

Wow

Loved GGGB but this I really am interested, and the multiple protagonists of the two sexes really adds to it too.

Very curious how this go down the road.

50 blessings.

 

[NaillMcDracken]

Wow

Loved GGGB but this I really am interested, and the multiple protagonists of the two sexes really adds to it too.

Very curious how this go down the road.

50 blessings.

Blessing for you Badbrother of carity.