VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.3] [Eva Kiss]

[TamaMountain]

She changed the bouncer? What did he originally look like?

He's got three lines and he's still my favorite male character.

IIRC he was white. Then Eva changed his race to black. Not sure why she did it, she made no comment about it.

The best reason I can think of is that Eva wanted to include a nod to GGGB, since the bouncer there used the same model and was black. So perhaps she changed the skin tone to resemble the dude from GGGB, like a cameo of sorts?

The other reason is that maybe Eva wanted to include the bouncer in future sex scenes. Since the bouncer is clearly interested in Holly, Eva thought that making him black would be more fitting (bbc kink and all that)?

Of course it could be for the sake of representation. But then why him of all ppl ?

 

[WatsonJohn]

IIRC he was white. Then Eva changed his race to black. Not sure why she did it, she made no comment about it.

The best reason I can think of is that Eva wanted to include a nod to GGGB, since the bouncer there used the same model and was black. So perhaps she changed the skin tone to resemble the dude from GGGB, like a cameo of sorts?

The other reason is that maybe Eva wanted to include the bouncer in future sex scenes. Since the bouncer is clearly interested in Holly, Eva thought that making him black would be more fitting (bbc kink and all that)?

Of course it could be for the sake of representation. But then why him of all ppl ?

It's simply for BBC (Black Bouncer COCK).

 

[TamaMountain]

It's simply for BBC (Black Bouncer COCK).

Most probably. Throw in Billy and Jeremy and voila, best update for ORS.

 

[Rickster82]

ORS was great until now... Please no incest, no pregnancies, no cuckolding & no excessive blackmailing !!! There are other games of this kind for that. That just wouldn't fit ORS. Thanks in advance!

 

[WatsonJohn]

ORS was great until now... Please no incest, no pregnancies, no cuckolding & no excessive blackmailing !!! There are other games of this kind for that. That just wouldn't fit ORS. Thanks in advance!

You can avoid those things if you don't want them. What's good about the game is the choices it provides. Like GGGB, you can have a vanilla path or fcked up path and anything in between. Personally I enjoy playing both, maybe leaning more towards corruption and debauchery paths. But I also despise the drug, substance abuse in GGGB but I understand that some people are into that.

 

[DDDIsReal]

More than holly become slut(we know that gonna happen) i want ivy become good

 

[jollyjoker27]

You can avoid those things if you don't want them. What's good about the game is the choices it provides. Like GGGB, you can have a vanilla path or fcked up path and anything in between. Personally I enjoy playing both, maybe leaning more towards corruption and debauchery paths. But I also despise the drug, substance abuse in GGGB but I understand that some people are into that.

Exactly. Fun fact: You can even play through all 8 chapters without a single sex scene if you so choose.

(Yes, it´s true, I tried)

 

[dundun]

You're right about that. But at some point Alison and Lena will have to meet and in some way get to know each other better, and it would be nice with other potential outcomes than having their (kinda one-sided) rivalry going on and on and on. Alison's image of Lena is based on very little information, so it's not entirely impossible that her impression could change. Though I guess Lena still would be a hot model who (in Alison's view, at least) is standing in her way to get to Ian, so maybe it's unlikely. The "woof woof" path could be the most likely way to having her somehow accept Lena's presence, yeah.

Sure, it would be nice something interesting would happen instead of just Ian having to choose. But I just don't see it. Alison isn't interested to 'get to know' Lena, she wants Ian. She can already scare away Cherry and if she sees Ian with another girl she always withdraws.
I see 2 interpretations of her behavior, either she is just an asshole or she is deeply insecure so she always has to affirm herself of Ian's interest. Both scenarios don't lend themselves to her sharing Ian.

I can't remember exactly what she wrote, but early in the development Eva mentioned that a timeskip could happen ...

... Several have speculated about pregnancy, but it seems a bit early to introduce that halfway through the game. So we're basically speculating with very little information available

She wrote in her last QA:
I feel once the main relationships are consolidated ORS will be at it's midpoint, after which there will probably a time skip. And then the plots will begin moving to their resolutions
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I don't get the whole pregnacy thing. At the end of the game, sure. But in the middle? Especially before the time skip. I mean do people realize what pregnacy leads to? So the whole 2. part of the game there will be a baby? If it just sits in its cradle all day, what gives? And if we are going for realistic... a diapher changing mini game? Quicktime events who has to get up at night to calm the baby? Sex scenes interrupted by a crying baby?

 

[BetoMurilo]

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[AnnaGotBlacked]

i want arthur get involved in this game somehow... maybe he is a rich, "art fan" friend of seymour and could attend few times to photoshoots and get interested in lena

 

[kevin.a]

When will there be action between Lena and her boss at the coffee shop?!

 

[Lemix]

When will there be action between Lena and her boss at the coffee shop?!

I doubt there will be, but if it ever happens it will probably be at the endgame since i dont see it making any sense at this point in the story, Lena is not that fucked up to do Molly like that.
Unless she suddenly dies or something i dont see this happening anytime soon.

 

[Deleted member 3064965]

Sure, it would be nice something interesting would happen instead of just Ian having to choose. But I just don't see it. Alison isn't interested to 'get to know' Lena, she wants Ian. She can already scare away Cherry and if she sees Ian with another girl she always withdraws.
I see 2 interpretations of her behavior, either she is just an asshole or she is deeply insecure so she always has to affirm herself of Ian's interest. Both scenarios don't lend themselves to her sharing Ian.

Yeah, I agree. And I definitely think it's the second alternative – she's just insecure. Which is understable to a certain extent, cause she finds herself in a rather vulnerable position with regards to her feelings for Ian. Personally I think I'm either way most interested in her more wholesome route with Ian, but she needs to have some kind of character progression on the other routes as well. And it sounds a bit boring if it's just that she'll gradually get more and more jealous and crazy. Some slightly unexpected, but well written twist would be nice.

She wrote in her last QA:
I feel once the main relationships are consolidated ORS will be at it's midpoint, after which there will probably a time skip. And then the plots will begin moving to their resolutions
(text highlighted by me)

I don't get the whole pregnacy thing. At the end of the game, sure. But in the middle? Especially before the time skip. I mean do people realize what pregnacy leads to? So the whole 2. part of the game there will be a baby? If it just sits in its cradle all day, what gives? And if we are going for realistic... a diapher changing mini game? Quicktime events who has to get up at night to calm the baby? Sex scenes interrupted by a crying baby?

Oh, thanks, that's an important correction. The "main relationships are consolidated" quote is also interesting. I think that's still a bit down the line. Also "midpoint" isn't necessary the same as halfway through, so I guess my post was a bit unprecise overall. Thanks for correcting me.

And yeah, we're definitely not gonna have any babies around until the end of the game, at least. I can imagine how it would play out: Will you choose for Lena to "stay at home and change diapers" or "leave the baby for the night and go to the club and meet that hot guy she's been flirting with lately"? It would basically just be a game for mistreating babies.

I could see a pregnancy happening several episodes earlier, though. I think each episode usually covers about one week, so I don't see it as completely unlikely that a character could get pregnant before or during the time skip, as long as the baby doesn't arrive until way later in the game, at the end.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

I don't get the whole pregnacy thing. At the end of the game, sure. But in the middle? Especially before the time skip. I mean do people realize what pregnacy leads to? So the whole 2. part of the game there will be a baby? If it just sits in its cradle all day, what gives? And if we are going for realistic... a diapher changing mini game? Quicktime events who has to get up at night to calm the baby? Sex scenes interrupted by a crying baby?

Those sound like fun mini games! But seriously no, any actual baby would come during the epilogue possibly. The point is have Alison with a wonderful and sexy baby bump for various kinky scenes, like playing “doggie” or whatever.

 

[Priappus]

I think at some point he should stop writing about Jan to have a relationship with Lena or Allison or Molly or some other girl,Ian probably laughs, Ian has other things on his mind.

 

[Reasoon]

Sure, it would be nice something interesting would happen instead of just Ian having to choose. But I just don't see it. Alison isn't interested to 'get to know' Lena, she wants Ian. She can already scare away Cherry and if she sees Ian with another girl she always withdraws.
I see 2 interpretations of her behavior, either she is just an asshole or she is deeply insecure so she always has to affirm herself of Ian's interest. Both scenarios don't lend themselves to her sharing Ian.

Yeah, I agree. And I definitely think it's the second alternative – she's just insecure. Which is understable to a certain extent, cause she finds herself in a rather vulnerable position with regards to her feelings for Ian. Personally I think I'm either way most interested in her more wholesome route with Ian, but she needs to have some kind of character progression on the other routes as well. And it sounds a bit boring if it's just that she'll gradually get more and more jealous and crazy. Some slightly unexpected, but well written twist would be nice.

Yes I think it's pretty obvious how insecure Alison is inside but she acts completely like the opposite and if you play her full Route you definitely learn more about her Character and why she is not just some "psycho bitch" like many Players think but I also think she is genuinely in love with Ian which makes it so hard for her to keep playing the laid-back-hookup for Ian. I hope she get's the Character depth she needs in future Updates to understand her better and I think espescially Ian needs to see how she feels.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

I also think she is genuinely in love with Ian

It's not just your opinion, she literally screams out "I love you" during a sex scene. Sure, people say all sorts of things during sex, but just something to keep in mind.

 

[Zedire]

Yes I think it's pretty obvious how insecure Alison is inside but she acts completely like the opposite and if you play her full Route you definitely learn more about her Character and why she is not just some "psycho bitch" like many Players think but I also think she is genuinely in love with Ian which makes it so hard for her to keep playing the laid-back-hookup for Ian. I hope she get's the Character depth she needs in future Updates to understand her better and I think espescially Ian needs to see how she feels.

I really love Allison, and I agree that she's not some psycho bitch, BUT I can see how some people might think that - especially if the player isn't especially interested in her while she's pursuing Ian regardless. She's clearly had feelings for Ian for a long time (apparently she liked him since school), and loving someone for a long time, then getting an opportunity to actually be with them -- them both being single -- can naturally make a person a bit desperate to finally see it happen. I think Eva got Allison's desperation pretty spot on to reality - wanting him to pay attention to her first and foremost all the time (how she always butts in so he'll talk to her), how she tries several times to hook up with him even after she's screwing Jeremy, etc.
Regardless of if you like her or not, he's a pretty real character, and you gotta admire her dedication to going after what she wants.
I also hope, like you, that Allison's personality continues to get fleshed out and that she and Ian connect beyond just pure sex - maybe during their holiday together. I'm looking forward to that content.

 

[jduk]

Alison actually wants Ian's baby in her...

 

[medion]

this game need animations badly,it would put it to another level,otherwise great game