Lets see: A set of antagonists that aren't all that thrilling and bland. You have Seymour, who wants to control Lena and make her a sex slave. How is that interesting? You have Axel, who is also obsessed with Lena and can't take a fucking hint and is apparently involved every fucking where. Do we really need Axel to be at a gay bar next? Jeremy is just a BBC kink and has no depth to him at all whatsoeer. Stan is... Stan. And yet the revolving drama each chapter is: Will Lena be able to afford anything while slutting it up or not? Will Ian not get cucked and become the writer he wants to be? Will Stan die in a fiery crash and be replaced?
And sure, I'm bitter and jaded as fuck about Ivy-Ian, yet the writer in me screams 'Eva could do better'. Less kink/fetish crap, more character building. Make Jeremy a decent guy instead of being the Tyrone-lite and wanna be player. Add some depth and delve into characters and their relationships such as Jeremy and Louise and have Lena try to mediate that rathr than gloss over it and reward Jeremy over and over again without little to no punishment.
I like my porn to be on the high-brow side, too, dude, but it's too early to make the judgements you're making. I imagine if your in-game choices put Ian and Lena together on a "pure love" path and then have Lena fuck Jeremy and others, there will be "punishment," or what I prefer to call consequences. Same for Ian and Cindy, etc. But if those consequences come too early in the story, their effects are weakened.
Re the characters, they all are slightly stereotypical, but I don't find any of it unrealistic. Jeremy is a young guy with a big dick. Even if he was a really good guy, it's really hard to turn down super hot pussy when it throws itself at you. I mean, really hard. Axel, meanwhile, is a narcissist and playboy. Part of him genuinely loves Lena, but he's addicted to the game and he clearly has a dom fetish. His behavior is classic abuser. Stan comes off as a bit incel in the latest update, but his frustration is understandable. He's a decent, but very socially awkward, guy living with two hotties, one of whom treats him like shit and the other walks around half naked, lets him photograph her doing kinky shit, and maybe even invites him to jack off on her. If then she later acts like she's not interested in him romantically, he is colossally confused, because in his naive way, he sees sexual attraction and love as inseparable.
