VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

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Andrea9999

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Sethmsf said:
Well, if you play the Seymour plot a little and you get along badly with him but you end up giving in to the blackmail, he ends up taking you to dinner and you meet the mayoral candidate who is having dinner with Agnes; He immediately notices Lena and that she is very beautiful, Seymour very kindly tells hom that if he needs it, he can lend Lena for him.
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Lena does not have to "get along badly" with Seymour for this to happen. It occurs on their dinner date before Lena "plays with her reflection" with the Lovense Egg again. Aso, Seymour does not offer to lend Lena to the mayoral candidate. He offers to lend Lena to Agnes. Agnes will be Lena's next step into the darkness....then Agnes will probably allow the mayoral candidate to enjoy Lena since he "glanced at her"...perhaps he is the one with connections to the Emirs in Dubai.
 
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Andrea9999 said:
Lena does not have to "get along badly" with Seymour for this to happen. It occurs on their dinner date before Lena "plays with her reflection" with the Lovense Egg again. Aso, Seymour does not offer to lend Lena to the mayoral candidate. He offers to lend Lena to Agnes. Agnes will be Lena's next step into the darkness....then Agnes will probably allow the mayoral candidate to enjoy Lena since he "glanced at her"...perhaps he is the one with connections to the Emirs in Dubai.
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when did seymour offer to lend lena to agnes again?
 
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yuvce said:
"If I play." Yeah, I won't. In fact, you gave me more reasons not to play his path while simultaneously proving why it's the absolute worst path for Lena.
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I think the same, although I don't know if it will be worse than what Billy can bring, as I already said, it is not my main route but I like to see everything that the VN can offer
 
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camube said:
i remember meeting the mayor. I actually don't remember meeting Agnes.

Was Agnes there with the mayor or is it a different branch?
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No, no, Mayor Vermeer its a good boy, Perry father, Lena meets him normally working. Who we are talking about is her rival in the next election who is having dinner with Agnes
 
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BlandChili said:
On the Ian route there are clearly tender feelings involved. Even if it doesn't work out or you don't commit to exclusivity, it's not strictly a sexual relationship.
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we can pretty much avoid this by not clicking the heart options for Ian and lena in their path. That way its just casual sex.
 
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I saw a route with a forced Axel/Lena photo shoot directed by Agnes and shot by Seymour. This was not my preferred route; I used the skip function to get through it and abandoned it. I do not know what would go on later. (Any use of the term "babygirl" makes my skin crawl and throws all arousal out the window.)
In the "Lena likes Seymour" route (even "heart Seymours") at the second meeting at the restaurant, prior to Lena playing with her chiral counterpart, Agnes and the mayoral candidate (Perry's father's rival) are met. There, Agnes refers to Lena as a beauty (whereas she was disdainful of Lena at the Axel photoshoot) and Seymour offers to lend Lena to her. Lena does notice the mayoral candidate to glance at her; implying he has an ppetite for her.
 
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Andrea9999 said:
I saw a route with a forced Axel/Lena photo shoot directed by Agnes and shot by Seymour. This was not my preferred route; I used the skip function to get through it and abandoned it. I do not know what would go on later. (Any use of the term "babygirl" makes my skin crawl and throws all arousal out the window.)
In the "Lena likes Seymour" route (even "heart Seymours") at the second meeting at the restaurant, prior to Lena playing with her chiral counterpart, Agnes and the mayoral candidate (Perry's father's rival) are met. There, Agnes refers to Lena as a beauty (whereas she was disdainful of Lena at the Axel photoshoot) and Seymour offers to lend Lena to her. Lena does notice the mayoral candidate to glance at her; implying he has an ppetite for her.
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Wow these routes really do seem to split more than I thought/have different interpretation depending on how you play. I just checked and the mayor candidate doesn't seem to have much of an "appetite" for Lena he was just checking who Seymour was with and going by how surprised Agnes was to see that Seymour was still hanging around him she picks up that Lena has left an impression on him. Seymour also doesn't say that he'd lend Lena to anyone when I played Agnes just complemented Lena's beauty.

After talking to him about his work/family and hearing him lament on not having an heir or someone to share what he built with I really feel that based on affection Seymour will either think of taking Lena/Ian under his wing or he will find them as nothing more than useful tools to grow his empire.
 
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Yes, when Ian and Seymour have an informal meeting in a cafeteria, he hints that if he wins the literary contest he might be interested in being his patron as he is Lena's; also that he is sure that he will rise very quickly in the publishing house. (If Lena has signed the contract with Seymour)

If Lena has refused, Seymour tells Ian that he has to be smart, take advantage of opportunities and so on not like his friend Lena and that he will be attentive to why she is looking for notable people to patronize; that he strives to ascend in the company
 
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Andrea9999 said:
I saw a route with a forced Axel/Lena photo shoot directed by Agnes and shot by Seymour. This was not my preferred route; I used the skip function to get through it and abandoned it. I do not know what would go on later. (Any use of the term "babygirl" makes my skin crawl and throws all arousal out the window.)
In the "Lena likes Seymour" route (even "heart Seymours") at the second meeting at the restaurant, prior to Lena playing with her chiral counterpart, Agnes and the mayoral candidate (Perry's father's rival) are met. There, Agnes refers to Lena as a beauty (whereas she was disdainful of Lena at the Axel photoshoot) and Seymour offers to lend Lena to her. Lena does notice the mayoral candidate to glance at her; implying he has an ppetite for her.
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That happens when Lena agrees to see Axel to give him closure. She later goes to Seymour's photo shoot and it turns out that Axel is Mr. Ward's photography mentor; If you agree to work with Axel there, the second part of the Shoot is when Agnes intervenes, turning the session into something much more erotic. Throughout it you can see how Agnes only has eyes for Axel and in a shameless way (Maybe that's why on my path it is the politician who he tells that he will lend him Lena, because Agnes already knows her and is not surprised)
 
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Sethmsf said:
That happens when Lena agrees to see Axel to give him closure. She later goes to Seymour's photo shoot and it turns out that Axel is Mr. Ward's photography mentor; If you agree to work with Axel there, the second part of the Shoot is when Agnes intervenes, turning the session into something much more erotic. Throughout it you can see how Agnes only has eyes for Axel and in a shameless way (Maybe that's why on my path it is the politician who he tells that he will lend him Lena, because Agnes already knows her and is not surprised)
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I know about the first part...I saw the photo shoot where Agnes was interested in Axel and not Lena. I did not continue that thread so I didn't see the politician get the offer. Many nuances...it is easy for us to talk past each other in confusion. The thread I abandoned might have interesting aspects when the updates come out.
 
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I agree, she herself has also commented that Mass Effect or Dragon Age are her favorite games, one a space opera and the other dark fantasy
 
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Andrea9999 said:
I know about the first part...I saw the photo shoot where Agnes was interested in Axel and not Lena. I did not continue that thread so I didn't see the politician get the offer. Many nuances...it is easy for us to talk past each other in confusion. The thread I abandoned might have interesting aspects when the updates come out.
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Well, if at no time do you accept Seymour's first proposal or do not contact him,someone hire Lena for a photo shoot that is precisely that part of Agnes and Axel, but without Seymour with the camera, of course.

And you are absolutely right, there are many nuances, some almost imperceptible, that can change the dialogue of the scenes or the scenes themselves, it is magical.
 
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Keep on mind, the offer to "lend Lena" only happens if Lena hadn't already have a photo session where Agnes was involved. Otherwise, there's zero suggestion that there'd be more of that.

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    if v6_axel_pose == 0 and v6_agnes_shoot == False:
        ag "Who's this beauty? I don't believe we've been introduced..."
        s "This is Lena, a model I've been working with. If you're ever in need of one, I can lend her to you. She's exceptional."
        man "She has to be, if she managed to capture your attention..."
    elif v6_axel_pose == 1:
        ag "So you're still indulging the girl, I see. You must really like the rebellious types..."
        s "Lena has a mind of her own; that's what I like about her. She's quite exceptional, actually..."
        man "She has to be, if she managed to capture your attention..."
    else:
        ag "Oh, I remember you... What was your name again, dear?"
        l "I'm Lena."
        ag "Of course. I see you're still indulging her, Seymour... She must be quite exceptional."
        man "She has to be, if she managed to capture Seymour's attention..."
        s "She is, indeed."
 
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I think it is better for Seymour to control Lena remotely through the Lovense Egg. The action should intensify gradually and new controllers introduced at each stepping up. Agnes would be an incremental step. The mayoral candidate perhaps another. Eventually the real action would be overseas in Dubai from which it would be too late for Lena to withdraw....and any protection Seymour could offer would be neutralized. That is where the contrast between elegance and filth would be truly accentuated.
 
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