VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

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MixQQ said:
nah. Slut Holly was best part of this update. I want to see more of her slutty adventures :love: Ivy is her mentor on this path to total debauchery. You want change something, what is fucking good, only to suit your personal preferences (n)
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"Good Morning" if you understand the reference! Slut Holly is also after Ian as we can see through the game. so what is the problem with a path towards an Ian/slut Holly romance and a path towards Ivyled Holly to debauchery? nobody gets shortchanged.
 
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Turret said:
"Good Morning" if you understand the reference! Slut Holly is also after Ian as we can see through the game. so what is the problem with a path towards an Ian/slut Holly romance and a path towards Ivyled Holly to debauchery? nobody gets shortchanged.
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unnecessary branching on slut route. Game has already plenty of paths and dev should really stop adding new ones and focus on developing what we have already + not many chapters left. Time to slowly wrap things up - all stories and relationship combos
Xupuzulla said:
The next one is basically a Ivy update,im sure shes going to fuck Lena and some men very soon.
Not Ian through,hes not going to the photoshoot,Axel will i think:whistle:
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pussy destroyer King Axel in 3some with Lena and Ivy? There is a chance that nun Ivy will be finally fucked properly? :cool:
 
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ffive said:
So, scratch that, i should've checked the rest of the script. Those conditions in the mod trigger the date ending early.
PilotLara this may be a bug:
Python: 
        if holly_trinity == 2 or lena_holly_dating or (ian_lena_pure and ian_lena_3some == False) or (ian_lena_couple and ian_lena_open != "lena" and ian_lena_open != "ian"):
            jump v13emmadateend
for "pure" Lena/Ian who meet "their" part of the conditions (Lena has agreed to having 3some in a future) the game will still abort Emma date early, because that Lena/Ian arrangement will trigger the next failure test in that line (ian_lena_couple and ian_lena_open != "lena" and ian_lena_open != "ian") since they are also technically ian_lena_couple but haven't opened their relationship since they didn't experience any crisis.
That last or block should include check for and ian_lena_pure == False, so the pure pair doesn't get included and subsequently kicked out here, if they've passed their own part of the check.

edit: and likely a minor bug in earlier chapter that slipped through:
Python: 
                    "It's... uncomfortable":
//...
                            if v12_lena_sunscreen == "wade":
//...
                                if ian_wits > 10:
                                    call xp_up ('wits') from _call_xp_up_1108
//...
                    "I don't like it":
//...
                        if v12_lena_sunscreen == "wade":
//...
                            if ian_wits > 10:
                                call xp_up ('wits') from _call_xp_up_1109
These checks should probably be for ian_wits < 10 since it both makes little sense to only reward Ian with wits of 11+ but it also doesn't safeguard against breaking the 12 point limit.

edit2: one more minor bug in 12c
Python: 
                        i "Please, forgive me, Ian..."
should be
Python: 
                        l "Please, forgive me, Ian..."
because it's Lena, not Ian, asking for forgiveness there.

edit3: aaand one more small inconsistency: if Ian and Lena breakup in CH.12, in Ch.13 Lena's agenda screen still has heart icon for Ian instead of broken heart one. And if Holly Trinity is activated in Ch.12 then Lena who's been friend with Holly still has friend icon for Holly in her agenda, instead of heart one.
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1. Noted
2. Fixed
3. Fixed
4. Noted
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unnecessary branching on slut route. Game has already plenty of paths and dev should really stop adding new ones and focus on developing what we have already + not many chapters left. Time to slowly wrap things up - all stories and relationship combos
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unnecessary? Hardly, just your personal opinion. Especially since there have been many hints throughout the game that slut Holly started down this path with the intention to become more appealing to Ian, in the partly (depending how we play Ian) mistaken belief he prefers slutty girls.
This is reinforced by their talk when sleeping together on the holiday vacation. Now that it happened, there should be the option for slut Holly and Ian to finally come together. The other should be that Ivy leads Holly further astray.
 
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One question for the "we play all routes" players: During the last day of the shown beach holiday Ian can get a hot pic and conversation with Alison, both wanting to be together again. Is this possible to get on a Ian Alison loving couple path? I have a path with Ian and Alison a dedicated couple who had a threesome with Jeremy, but this conversation does not fire on my save. And it is clearly visible by the text that Alison and Ian are a couple when having this sexting.
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Yes, Ian has a flag for love route with Alison. Haven't played it so this will be just a guess (it's best to check walkthrough for details) but it'll probably require Ian to ask Jeremy to stay away from Alison, so no threesome and other eskimo brothers business, etc.
 
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It's possible Axel and Ivy already fucked. Could easily be before he dated Lena, since neither of them had to justify it to Lena, then. They could've fucked after he dated Lena, though this is less likely since Ivy cares for Lena, though she has a different view on relationships, she fucked Mike when he was hounded by Lena without a second thought. Axel and Ivy had shoots in the past and they deal business occasionally. In the deleted scene, Axel complimented her tatoos and how intimitely biased he was for them (though this was also fancy talk, so it could mean nothing).
 
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ffive said:
Yes, Ian has a flag for love route with Alison. Haven't played it so this will be just a guess (it's best to check walkthrough for details) but it'll probably require Ian to ask Jeremy to stay away from Alison, so no threesome and other eskimo brothers business, etc.
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No, the love route with Alison is also reachable if you have threesomes, that is not the problem here, since I have saves for a pure cuddly love route and a hot steamy one with Alison. The problem I have is that Ian can get on the vacation monday a sexting text with a hot pic from Alison. It is clear from the text that Ian and Alison are a couple and Ian finds Alison´s fun alone great, but I got this text not on an Alison route, whyever that was the case. And to round it out, on neither of my Ian/Alison saves this text comes up. :unsure:
 
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The problem I have is that Ian can get on the vacation monday a sexting text with a hot pic from Alison. It is clear from the text that Ian and Alison are a couple and Ian finds Alison´s fun alone great, but I got this text not on an Alison route, whyever that was the case. And to round it out, on neither of my Ian/Alison saves this text comes up. :unsure:
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Can you quote what was written in that text, or maybe have a screenshot? Or at least which chapter it is when it happens? I'd check the conditions, but the game is huge so i can't really find it in the script with just blind poking around.
 
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Can you quote what was written in that text, or maybe have a screenshot? Or at least which chapter it is when it happens? I'd check the conditions, but the game is huge so i can't really find it in the script with just blind poking around.
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Hi!
It is during the vacation in ch.13 on monday, shortly before we switch to Lena´s side. As said I am curious why it popped up in that run, where I am good friends with Alison, but not more. For some reason it does not fire on both the cuddly love and steamy love saves for Alison I have. I would have guessed that it should at least fire on the steamy one where Alison went blond.
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From what I could see, the Emma x Lena scenes in this last chapter can’t happen if the Holly x Ian x Lena trio exists...

THAT MAKES NO SENSE!! Why are some relationships randomly blocked like this? Lena can have relationships with Marcel, Mike, Mark, Robert, Stan, Ivy and Louise, but for some reason, the relationship with Emma is blocked because of the trio? Why weren’t the others blocked too? Some decisions in this game make zero sense!
 
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It is during the vacation in ch.13 on monday, shortly before we switch to Lena´s side. As said I am curious why it popped up in that run, where I am good friends with Alison, but not more. For some reason it does not fire on both the cuddly love and steamy love saves for Alison I have. I would have guessed that it should at least fire on the steamy one where Alison went blond.
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Ahh, that one. The vacation bit confused me, i thought maybe you meant earlier trip with Alison. Ian receives this text if he accepts her offer to come to her place in Ch.11 and has sex with her there. If i'm not mistaken this will only happen if Ian didn't get involved with Alison earlier (it's a bit of a Hail Mary on her part to get Ian interested) which would explain why you got it on the friend route but not the other.

It's kind of funny that you'd think that text indicates Ian/Alison are a couple there, because to me it's very much just a case of Alison quite desperately baiting Ian, "look how much of fun i'm having with another guy, this could be you instead" and Ian is at best politely nodding along but thinking internally "bitch has gone crazy", something he voices after their texting is done:
Python: 
                    i "Sending me something like this... Alison really is crazy."
//...
        i "I wonder when she started to change this much. Or maybe she was always like this, just keeping it hidden."
If Ian and Alison are a couple, he should be getting different text from her at this point:
Python: 
# dating alison
    else:   
        a_p "Good morning {image=emoji_smile.webp} How's it going at the beach house?"
        i_p "Can't complain, though it's pouring today, so not much beach time."
        a_p "Yeah, it's pouring here too… Still, I'm so jealous. I wish I were there with you instead of in this damn office!"
        i_p "It's a shame you couldn't take vacation. I would've loved to have you here too."
        a_p "Yeah… But someone has to work while others are on vacation! If they don't give me a promotion after this, I don't know what else I have to do..."
        if alison_blonde == 0:
            a_p "By the way, I've been thinking about dyeing my hair lately. Do you think blonde would look good on me? It feels more summery..."
            menu:
                "I think you'd look good":
//...
                    i_p "Oh, really? I never imagined you as a blonde... But it might actually look good on you."
                    a_p "You think so too? I might give it a try after all!"

                "I don't think it'd suit you":
//...
                    i_p "Why are you suddenly thinking about dyeing your hair blonde? Honestly, I don't think it would suit you all that well..."
                    a_p "Maybe you're right... Sometimes I just feel like making some changes, but it's probably a stupid idea!"
        a_p "Anyway, when did you say you're coming back? I really want to see you {image=emoji_crazy.webp}" #findme tears eyes emoji
 
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