VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[MF_DOOM]

So...Eva Kiss is down to a 5 minutes of game time updates instead of making normal-sized chapters?
That's disappointing.

 

[randomguy]

I honestly don't care about the recycled assets in the new scenes if it means faster releases.
I mean how many different drawing do you really need for the same sex positions?

If everyone had to choose between brand new assets in each update vs faster releases, the majority of people would pick faster releases.

If anything I think more devs should use this approach, if done correctly it can vastly speed up development.

Ofcourse there are the obvious lazy ways to do these things which would be immediately noticable IMO.

 

[Rudmi]

So...Eva Kiss is down to a 5 minutes of game time updates instead of making normal-sized chapters?
That's disappointing.

A lot of time was spent on the MMA tournament. Please understand and forgive.

 

[MrAnarchy]

The scenes became shorter with each update.
Unnecessary and useless mma tournament in a porn game.
Eva, you disappoint me.

So...Eva Kiss is down to a 5 minutes of game time updates instead of making normal-sized chapters?
That's disappointing.

For all those who apparently don’t follow the Patreon.

This was a PROLOGUE! Not the full chapter.

Eva has begun breaking the chapters down into 3 parts. Prologue; Main Story; Epilogue.
It’s her way of giving us content without making us wait long periods of time.

Hopefully this clears things up.

 

[mommysboiii]

I was glad to see those options for Ian expressing concern to Cindy about Axel. Lena could try at Blazer in ch11, but realistically there's no way Cindy could be expected to take her warning seriously. Ian might get through to her - or maybe not, depending on how forcefully a player's Ian expresses his misgivings. EK knows her characters well; of course Cindy will overreact to any critical viewpoint someone else has about her, even Ian. It was very telling to me that, in the worst overreaction, she accuses him of treating her like Wade does, which is obviously false. And I think EK has set up some really good options for herself with the story moving forward. If Ian trusts Cindy and doesn't say much of anything, she could possibly be faithful, or cheat and break his heart. If he expresses mild suspicion, she's still left where she's been for two chapters now: unsure of what she wants long-term, not wanting to deal with it, and an increasingly frustrated Ian debating to himself whether to jump ship. And if they get into an argument, she basically kicks him out, the door is wide open for her to pursue Axel (or allow him to pursue her), and Ian pretty much indicates he may be done with her anyway. Even though Cindy is far from my favorite character, I do think the way Eva's been telling her story has been quite strong over the last few chapters.

100% agree the jess part was amazing (if in the future eva build up on that for the romance fans)because pornstarts/onlyfans girls are often hated to have some romantic happy end(if you let her sleep in your room and not have sex with her) is a cool idea I guess


you are right about cindy my problem is that from a narrative point it seem not good at the moment which options do you have?? you 100% trust her and she is probably faithfulmaybe cindy is a bait for the greedy players but I thinks she will be faithful if you 100% trust her

and the other option is she trhows you out?? but than the cheating part is not really cheating if cindy is that angry and never even cares about ian anymore its not really exciting

I mean there is no drama ... or cat and mouse game I was excited about the axel/cindy/ian part because of the cat and mouse game or the possible slow corruption and losing cindy either 100% faithful or throw ian out seems a bit simplistic and boring

imagine the anxiety because of gillian,the jealousy, the competition with axel over the phone (the banter that axel could give to ian over the phone which could lead ian to make decission that will help axel because ians trust issues would be INSANLY hot) with ian seeing her pics and the slow corruption of cindy so many porssibilities for ian I HOPE EVA is cooking

but maybe eva is cooking we will see

 

[MaliPizdek]

Cindy is my main girl and yeah this short update sucks for Ian because girl just can't make up her mind...
he even bought her a necklet... to a girl who has a BF LOL

i went with the "i trust you" option so let's see how this goes...

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but...
her future photoshoot with this attitude and shitload of horny guys on boat... idk how her pussy is gonna survive that without taking damage

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we just have to wait and see... please Cindy don't break Ian's heart
btw cindy/ian scene is a reuse of old renders, right? some of them, not all, strange.
also someone said that Ian can lick her asshole, when was this? new update or older stuff?

 

[MF_DOOM]

I got a little to no free time in the last 2 months due to being a reserve in the IDF and I absolutely got no time to read the whole thread, can someone be a good bro and tell me ho do I get the Jess scene, I guess it's with bad Jess?
I tried it on 2 different saves and failed :\

 

[Sethmsf]

Cindy is my main girl and yeah this short update sucks for Ian because girl just can't make up her mind...
he even bought her a necklet... to a girl who has a BF LOL

i went with the "i trust you" option so let's see how this goes...

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but...
her future photoshoot with this attitude and shitload of horny guys on boat... idk how her pussy is gonna survive that without taking damage

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we just have to wait and see... please Cindy don't break Ian's heart
btw cindy/ian scene is a reuse of old renders, right? some of them, not all, strange.
also someone said that Ian can lick her asshole, when was this? new update or older stuff?

In the previous chapter when she visits Ian's house and Perry almost catches them

 

[Sethmsf]

I got a little to no free time in the last 2 months due to being a reserve in the IDF and I absolutely got no time to read the whole thread, can someone be a good bro and tell me ho do I get the Jess scene, I guess it's with bad Jess?
I tried it on 2 different saves and failed :\

Having the date with her in previous chapters having a beer and ending on good terms without talking about her being a pornstar or anything like that. To get the appointment, do not insist with the text message, send one and wait

 

[MF_DOOM]

Having the date with her in previous chapters having a beer and ending on good terms without talking about her being a pornstar or anything like that. To get the appointment, do not insist with the text message, send one and wait

Strange, I did all that but still I run in to her at the mall and nothing happens.

 

[mommysboiii]

Cindy is my main girl and yeah this short update sucks for Ian because girl just can't make up her mind...
he even bought her a necklet... to a girl who has a BF LOL

i went with the "i trust you" option so let's see how this goes...

my guess is that this will be the vanilla option to trust her (maybe we will have more options over the phone to make things worse or better or however eva will do this)

but...
her future photoshoot with this attitude and shitload of horny guys on boat... idk how her pussy is gonna survive that without taking damage

thats the hot part and the part where a good corruption author like eva could show her skill there are manny possibilities with ian/cindy/axel and prob evil wildcats guys with drugs and high society young naive models life

I really hiope eva plays this out more I am just exited thinking about the possibilities

I mean lena said that axel is trouble and everywhere he is there is drama

we just have to wait and see... please Cindy don't break Ian's heart

well drama can be exiting

 

[Sethmsf]

Strange, I did all that but still I run in to her at the mall and nothing happens.

It happens after the mall, at night he sends you a text asking if he can drop by your house.

It may happen that your version is the one without correcting bugs

 

[Xupuzulla]

A lot of time was spent on the MMA tournament. Please understand and forgive.

I wonder how many people liked the tourney.
For me it was frustating.

 

[Sethmsf]

I liked it a lot and I'm waiting for the rest of the fights, it seems like a success to me

 

[MaliPizdek]

In the previous chapter when she visits Ian's house and Perry almost catches them

Yeah, i went back to see, it was in chapter 10

 

[ffive]

He gave her a black vibrator which puts control in her hands

This is really up to interpretation -- "get yourself off for me with this item" is very much still exercising control over the person and their actions. While one could argue that it gives Lena a choice in the matter, she has the exact same choice in this matter by deciding whether she puts in and then keeps the remote vibrator in her, or call it quits. In fact, the player can even make use of this very agency and tell Seymour to go fuck himself, or not.

 

[ffive]

is there no way to fuck alison without a condom in that new scene?

If Ian has hooked up with Alison late in the game he can cum wherever he wants, and Alison won't ask for a condom at all. She's been thirsting for Ian for months, she ain't going to jeopardize that now

 

[lorkdubo]

If Ian has hooked up with Alison late in the game he can cum wherever he wants, and Alison won't ask for a condom at all. She's been thirsting for Ian for months, she ain't going to jeopardize that now

Bruh... not even for months. She has been thirsty for years. But her game is so whack. Fucking with other people to make Ian jealous is such a bad strategy. I'm not saying she can't sleep around but to purposely show it to the person you want to be is a red flag to any male on the planet.

 

[fatpussy123]

I honestly don't care about the recycled assets in the new scenes if it means faster releases.
I mean how many different drawing do you really need for the same sex positions?

If everyone had to choose between brand new assets in each update vs faster releases, the majority of people would pick faster releases.

I don't mind recycling scenes like EK has done with Mike, Mark, Robert, and Ian where the scenes are mutually exclusive and between different but similar looking people.

I personally don't like the use of reusing scenes for the same character in the same route. It takes me out of the scenes. It can be good where it makes sense like the ass eating with Cindy, but when most major renders are the same as the previous Cindy scenes with minor clothing changes it kills the scene.

I do hope the beach event will have unique pairings and scenes that require new drawings to be made, because I feel every scene this update had reused drawings. (Except Jess scene)

 

[trigun61]

Can someone answer the question that's been asked a few times now by others - how are y'all triggering the Jess scene and the WIP Allison scene? Several have commented that the Jess trigger is bugged and the WIP scene won't play in the gallery.