VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[ffive]

That is intriguing indeed since Lena doesn't have to compromise any of her relationships (unless they include Ian).
She can commit 100% to Holly, Axel, Seymour, Stan, Robert, Mike, Jeremy/Louise and Ivy on one run. Sooner or later this has to be adressed.

Lena: "the real harem was all the people i fucked along the way."
Ian: "..."

 

[Warscared]

I'm sure there will be something for us too.

Inch'Allah, as they say in Dubai.

that actually has 2 meanings due to how the words sound...
it might mean God willing, but also stuff her up like a christmas turkey!
i believe that also works for Spanish and Portuguese and not just Arabic!
it can also be translated as inflate her or another translation would be get her pregnant!
i mean... God willing i hope this reply was usefull!

Spanish and Portuguese, just No...Just in European countries it resonates due to the mass number of Muslim immigrants (not critical here, just stating a fact).
One meaning you could have mentioned but did not, is that any non-Arabic who have worked in the Middle-East - I am one of them - will tell you that if they ask a subordinate to do sth under a certain deadline, and that this surbodinate replies that yes he will do it within the deadline...Inch'Allah....You know that this task will never ever gonna get done on time.

its old Saudi Joke actually!
if you say god willing the excuse is that got did not will it!

the most recent version i heard was a dude that received a piece of desert as an inheritance!
he worked hard dug chanells all the shebang to get the land productive!
one day an Iman stoped by and said that god´s work is beautiful, thanks to god!
and the farmer just replyed!
yes, indeed, but you should have seen how this shit looked when god was the only one doing the work!

as for spanish and Portuguese its because several words in arabic are also part of the Iberian vocabulary!
Inchala (stuff her up) or Oxala (god willing) are 2 of the words
that are either descendents or transliterations of the god will it from the arabs!
which was why i made such a joke due to how it could be interpreted by people who understand the language!

its pretty common as name places such as Guadalquivir which means the river dal qui vir.
or smaller names like Ode which means stream, like Odemira or the looking stream (stream mira) in english!

 

[Socrambus]

- long story short ( lot of branches)
- where it all began ( promising future)
- home prisoner ( drama/ sad but good story telling in sad way)
.....

Not more games come to my mind that are not harem logic or quick fap material

Exited dor this 3 storys to unfold

I like Long story short but how is it not harem logic?. MC can fuck every girl without any problem (so far) and his possible girlfriend even encourages him to do it in one case and kind of in another.

 

[Xupuzulla]

Nah axel would have her on leash....


Like cindy is getting it doggy at this moment like right know on yacht by axel

Poor ian

Not long until axel has like a collar for cindy aswell

Poor Ian indeed,you just know Cindy is getting her ass cheeks clapped by Axel,how can you compete with that?

 

[lucadiadis]

that actually has 2 meanings due to how the words sound...
it might mean God willing, but also stuff her up like a christmas turkey!
i believe that also works for Spanish and Portuguese and not just Arabic!
it can also be translated as inflate her or another translation would be get her pregnant!
i mean... God willing i hope this reply was usefull!

Spanish and Portuguese, just No...Just in European countries it resonates due to the mass number of Muslim immigrants (not critical here, just stating a fact).
One meaning you could have mentioned but did not, is that any non-Arabic who have worked in the Middle-East - I am one of them - will tell you that if they ask a subordinate to do sth under a certain deadline, and that this surbodinate replies that yes he will do it within the deadline...Inch'Allah....You know that this task will never ever gonna get done on time.

 

[mommysboiii]

That is intriguing indeed since Lena doesn't have to compromise any of her relationships (unless they include Ian).
She can commit 100% to Holly, Axel, Seymour, Stan, Robert, Mike, Jeremy/Louise and Ivy on one run. Sooner or later this has to be adressed.

Meanwhile, if Ian tries to fuck everyone, he breaks up, the girls aren't having it being shared or the relationship status is lowered to casual.

It has to do that Ian actually commits while with Lena, almost every relationship she has is casual and only in its early stages.

Just another reason why I prefer the Ian section over the Lena ones. he has to compromise and restrict himself. With Lena, there are barely consequences in fucking everyone (aside Ian mainly).

Dont touch slut lena

If she wants to have 10 bf she get 10 bf

 

[mommysboiii]

Lena: "the real harem was all the people i fucked along the way."
Ian: "..."

Lena is CHAD CHAD

Lana supremacy

 

[Andrea9999]

Hey everyone sorry to break your flow and ask this stupid question but it's bothering me so much and trust me from itch devlog to patreon notes to reddit posts i didn't find it anywhere and I was wondering is there a estimated timeline of when the game will be finished? Like released in final version?

I believe your question is answered about three quarters of the way through the Book of Ezekiel.

 

[Roderick2]

Changing a little the common subject... does anybody made a "lawful good" rout with Ian and Lena?

 

[Dromedari]

It's one of my favorite routes: Lena and Ian supporting each other and growing together as a couple, standing up to the old bullying oligarch, helping the small business prosper, helping their friends grow and succeed in their lives.

It really is a very wholesome route.

 

[Geigi]

I'm sorry but since good girl gone thread is almost dead, and this game far from finished, I know I feel stupid asking this and maybe this is not a thread to ask it but I would really appreciate if you guys know any similar games to this of gggb of ors where there's is branching storylines and your choices matter, you can be a good person or straight up evil please answer if you played a game that's this good cause after playing Eva kiss I'm really struggling to play any game as this set the bar way to high

Try this, but it's so difficult to find an actual fmc game and from a woman dev that's good aside from otome games, yuri and josei which have their target audience, respectively. https://f95zone.to/threads/newlife-v0-8-8b-splendid-ostrich.293/

 

[noturiah]

Hmm the only art style that sort of gives me a revulsion is the one with insanely overblown body proportions (and even then i'll still play Superhuman, literally for the plot) so i don't get this mentality pretty much at all.

Discarding any game with anime/manga style, that's probably missing out on half of the porn games out there if not more, right from the start. Which i suppose could also explain why you don't know any games better than EK's.

You might be surprised, but I actually agree with most of what you've written. My aesthetic mentality is specific and yes I know that I discard not half but pretty much 90% for the porn production. I take ownership of this fact. I am just not into this, I came onto that forum pretty much for EK and becaus of Covid. You can say it: I am not a porn game fan, just an EK fan.

It's interesting, I'm similar to both of you in some ways. I've never been into manga and my anime knowledge begins and ends with Akira and Cowboy Bebop, so that limits the games I'll look at. Outlandish body proportions also turn me off, and as the graphics for "regular" games get better all the time, I even find myself not bothering with games using Daz, unless it's someone who really knows what they're doing. That limits me to what, drawn and Unreal productions? Pretty much.

I started exploring porn games during Covid and found three I really liked and was impressed with: Our Red String, Areas of Grey, and Jessica O'Neil's Hard News. I kept looking around and followed maybe half a dozen seriously for a while, things that finished like Melody, Pine Falls, and City of Broken Dreamers (which just finished a few months ago), Dr. Amana, and Seeds of Chaos. AoG and Amana got abandoned by their devs, JOHN might as well be abandoned by how little its dev has released in recent years, and I faded away from Dreamers a few years ago but now that it's done it's been on my list to get back to - but I still haven't done it yet. SoC is an utter mess with some great art and writing underneath, but is so bogged down with an overstuffed story and clunky game mechanics, I find it unplayable now.

How often do you get someone who can write interesting characters in interesting sexual situations AND have strong visual design and game design skills (or at least unique ones) AND maintain at least a semi-reasonable production schedule while working a real job as well? It's pretty rare, and even more rare to be able to maintain it over the often several years it will take to deliver a completed game. I feel like we all see the same things on this site time and again. A new hotshot with good skills and a great idea, and they fizzle out after a year or so. Or worse, they get popular on Patreon and they bottleneck, milking subscribers and releasing content only drop by drop. Or someone with a mediocre idea and skills that churns out content on a regular schedule, but it's all half-baked and they're spinning their wheels without the game ever getting better.

I'm not the first to say it and won't be the last: Eva's a bit of a unicorn around here. She threads the needle pretty well overall, and sure we all probably have a gripe or two, but they're small complaints compared to what we've endured (or decided not to endure) from other devs. I used to be more of a porn game fan, but now I'm also only on this forum because of EK and ORS.

 

[lucadiadis]

Not more games come to my mind that are not harem logic

I hope you did not choke yourself while playing them

 

[Dp-gangbang]

- long story short ( lot of branches)
- seeds of chaos( a lot of branches/ corruption)
- where it all began ( promising future)
- home prisoner ( drama/ sad but good story telling in sad way)

.....

Not more games come to my mind that are not harem logic or quick fap material

Exited dor this 4 storys to unfold

Thanks man I will check it out

 

[Dp-gangbang]

Try this, but it's so difficult to find an actual fmc game and from a woman dev that's good aside from otome games, yuri and josei which have their target audience, respectively. https://f95zone.to/threads/newlife-v0-8-8b-splendid-ostrich.293/

Thanks man appreciate it

 

[lucadiadis]

Someone mentioned Katie's Corruption as the game that made EK think about developing porn games. I have just downloaded it, and it seems the path to corruption is...a very sick parent that forces Katie to drop college and find alternate sources of income. Rings a bell to anyone ?

 

[Yuna0069]

Nice

 

[DeemLeem12]

I tried Ian and Lena having low relationship points (reaching red angry emoji in stats). It didn't affect the story much. While relationship stat on other characters remain reflective on the story, Ian and Lena still remained good friends despite the stat not reflecting this. This seems an oversight that could be fixed. While it's hard to expect that EK is going to fix this, it really wouldn't affect the other paths should this be given attention. In a fixed path where Ian and Lena have a bad relationship, there should be different dialogue reflecting their bad blood and less scenes where Ian and Lena are talking. A potential for this is Lena can cuck Ian with Holly earlier, not caring that Ian is dating her and only wants Holly for herself. The scene where Lena kisses Holly in her room while Holly is dating Ian would actually make sense.

 

[Xupuzulla]

I tried Ian and Lena having low relationship points (reaching red angry emoji in stats). It didn't affect the story much. While relationship stat on other characters remain reflective on the story, Ian and Lena still remained good friends despite the stat not reflecting this. This seems an oversight that could be fixed. While it's hard to expect that EK is going to fix this, it really wouldn't affect the other paths should this be given attention. In a fixed path where Ian and Lena have a bad relationship, there should be different dialogue reflecting their bad blood and less scenes where Ian and Lena are talking. A potential for this is Lena can cuck Ian with Holly earlier, not caring that Ian is dating her and only wants Holly for herself. The scene where Lena kisses Holly in her room while Holly is dating Ian would actually make sense.

This is something i noticed too in saves where they never fuck and they are rude to each other but i guess EK cant really break the "red string" that connects the two MCs and thats why they are going to be at minimum neutral with each other.
It would be cool to have a save where the MCs hate each other through

 

[Turret]

This is something i noticed too in saves where they never fuck and they are rude to each other but i guess EK cant really break the "red string" that connects the two MCs and thats why they are going to be at minimum neutral with each other.
It would be cool to have a save where the MCs hate each other through

That would be very much self-defeating! This "red string" theory which is actually around under other names as well, is based on a deep connection, which cannot really be cut.