VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[BlandChili]

Nothing surprising to it. Turtleneck like the outline suggested, it's all black with the same pants, no other features.

Bland like the others. (Like my name!)
Not getting any of them I don't think. I might get the lust outfit on select playthroughs just for the tech-mogul meme.

 

[doctor13]

Yeah, nothing lusty about it. I think my earlier suggestion of a doucheneck t-shirt would have been more manwhore like and certainly no more difficult to draw than a turtleneck (possibly even easier).

 

[slightchance]

If you have the time and feel inspired, I'd love to see your edit of the charisma outfit - that seems like the biggest challenge of the three. The suggestion of the black leather jacket over a sort of muted striped shirt would be cool to see on him.

Thanks. The charisma outfit is indeed difficult. I know someone who is a really charismatic guy and wears a similar style. Although he's modelled in the past wearing more expensive clothes, you need to see him in action for his charisma to shine through.



And a smile

 

[scor099]

Can someone please post the lust outfit?

 

[Ninja of Death]

Can someone please post the lust outfit?

It looks pretty much the same as the other 3.

 

[magicuser007]

Ian's new look: Lust
The final outfit in the new set for Ian, the one tied to the Lust stat. This is the perfect look for Ian to go to a bar or the park and pick up some girls, invite them to join him for a drink while citing some Bukowski quotes from the book he's reading, or sweet talk them into coming over to his flat for a night full of passion and then never text them again.
Coming up with a Lust outfit for Ian wasn't as straight up as with Lena (for some reason I don't see him sporting a fishnet t-shirt and fingerless gloves) and I thought this look was quite fitting.

With this the four new looks are completed. At first glance they look pretty similar due to the color scheme, since the idea was to make four variations of a single outfit depending on Ian's stats, rather than to create four completely different styles, tying them together with thematic variations.

Do you feel these designs are fitting for each stat? Which one is your favourite ?

 

[scor099]

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Ian's new look: Lust
The final outfit in the new set for Ian, the one tied to the Lust stat. This is the perfect look for Ian to go to a bar or the park and pick up some girls, invite them to join him for a drink while citing some Bukowski quotes from the book he's reading, or sweet talk them into coming over to his flat for a night full of passion and then never text them again.
Coming up with a Lust outfit for Ian wasn't as straight up as with Lena (for some reason I don't see him sporting a fishnet t-shirt and fingerless gloves) and I thought this look was quite fitting.

Well shit.

 

[albul]

Nothing screams lust like a turtleneck.

 

[n0cn1l]

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Ian's new look: Lust
The final outfit in the new set for Ian, the one tied to the Lust stat. This is the perfect look for Ian to go to a bar or the park and pick up some girls, invite them to join him for a drink while citing some Bukowski quotes from the book he's reading, or sweet talk them into coming over to his flat for a night full of passion and then never text them again.
Coming up with a Lust outfit for Ian wasn't as straight up as with Lena (for some reason I don't see him sporting a fishnet t-shirt and fingerless gloves) and I thought this look was quite fitting.

I can see a female ovary wither....look at those guns. Rrrrrr....

 

[fatpussy123]

 

[LoneVoyage]

That lust outfit looks like spy outfit. İ was expecting something like show more skin.

Spoiler: Lust outfith

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[TamaMountain]

At this rate I'm convinced Eva thought process for Ian's outfit was "black, black, black and more black".

Welp red shirt here we go again.

 

[Zedire]

That lust outfit looks like spy outfit. İ was expecting something like show more skin.

Spoiler: Lust outfith

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EXACTLY. I mean god, considering that Ian has a good body and we're talking about lust, why the hell wouldn't you use this outfit to show it off a bit. he doesn't need to look like a fucking jiggalo to convey the message, just give us a bit of confidence and spice.
EDIT: Also that guy in the striped shirt is hot af.
EDIT2: I had my doubts but this pretty much confirms it - Ian doesn't have the face to pull off a turtleneck top as 'lust'. Very few guys would. His wits outfit is closer to a lust outfit then this ensemble.

 

[godoff95]

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Ian's new look: Lust
The final outfit in the new set for Ian, the one tied to the Lust stat. This is the perfect look for Ian to go to a bar or the park and pick up some girls, invite them to join him for a drink while citing some Bukowski quotes from the book he's reading, or sweet talk them into coming over to his flat for a night full of passion and then never text them again.
Coming up with a Lust outfit for Ian wasn't as straight up as with Lena (for some reason I don't see him sporting a fishnet t-shirt and fingerless gloves) and I thought this look was quite fitting.

With this the four new looks are completed. At first glance they look pretty similar due to the color scheme, since the idea was to make four variations of a single outfit depending on Ian's stats, rather than to create four completely different styles, tying them together with thematic variations.

Do you feel these designs are fitting for each stat? Which one is your favourite ?

I guess this is sexy from a woman's perspective.

 

[BlandChili]

I guess this is sexy from a woman's perspective.

I don't really find it sexy, but that's specific to Ian more so than turtlenecks. I think tight-fitting turtlenecks can look good on a man but Ian doesn't really complete the style. Pants should be tighter too, there should be an accessory like the charisma necklace to make it less vacant and I think he could do with a haircut too. At least set it somewhat, rather than just look like you just rinsed off shampoo.

 

[☆Jonathan Wick♤]

Well a little disappointed with Ian's customization options, I would even dare to say that I prefer both his old redshirt as well as his old shirt and t-shirt.

As for this new outfit for Ian based on lust, the only thing that I dislike is the fact that it is a shirt with a turtleneck, if it were only a simple and tight shirt or sweater it would not look so bad at least for me of course. Taking into account Eva's description of this outfit, it gives me a feeling of this more related to wits than to lust.

 

[Zedire]

I guess this is sexy from a woman's perspective.

Hell no. Just speaking for myself tho.

 

[Redgy]

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Ian's new look: Lust
The final outfit in the new set for Ian, the one tied to the Lust stat. This is the perfect look for Ian to go to a bar or the park and pick up some girls, invite them to join him for a drink while citing some Bukowski quotes from the book he's reading, or sweet talk them into coming over to his flat for a night full of passion and then never text them again.
Coming up with a Lust outfit for Ian wasn't as straight up as with Lena (for some reason I don't see him sporting a fishnet t-shirt and fingerless gloves) and I thought this look was quite fitting.

With this the four new looks are completed. At first glance they look pretty similar due to the color scheme, since the idea was to make four variations of a single outfit depending on Ian's stats, rather than to create four completely different styles, tying them together with thematic variations.

Do you feel these designs are fitting for each stat? Which one is your favourite ?

Eva, I love you but what the fuck. I mean, maybe she was ispired by archer or something?

 

[Tierra_Azul]

Hmm.. Nothing wrong with a turtleneck, guys can look really sharp in them (Unless unfit and a belly going on.). But not what I would view a "lust" outfit. At this point open some buttons on the wits outfit and swap them. Add a blazer on top of that turtleneck and you'd have a nice "wits" look going.)

 

[mehGusta]

i guess i finally understand what evakiss was getting at, by trying to make these outfits.
the athletics is pretty self explanatory. the best fitting outfit actually. (though i agree, there should have been made something with the pants. jeans with a sporty look don't mix well)
the wits is supposed to look like Ian means business. he is not there for fun or jokes, just business. and going by ward's impressions, you have to have wits to make serious business.
the charisma is meant to look like he is a fly guy, supposed to let him appear nothing could phase him. like "there is a group of girls ahead of him? and Axel dares him to try his luck with them. no problem for our Ian." that's why his jacket is open and he wears a lose shirt underneath. it's not like the rest of the outfits, as they are all skin-tight.
but well the lust outfit he just looks like steve jobs. or maybe she has a thing for young dwayne johnson

Spoiler: turtleneck

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i don't know. however if i have to guess, it's supposed to be simple and plainly outline his physique without being a dark copy of the red shirt. wits has buttons, charisma has a jacket and a necklet, and athletic has lines and a color pattern. lust has just pure darkness, nothing to distract from his body. and now comes the biggest stretch i can make: long sleeves and the turtleneck hide most of his skin. you could think he is hiding something underneath, like tattoos. and that could give him a mysterious air around him. (also it looks kinda velvet, so maybe "soft to touch but hard underneath" if you catch my meaning)

but even if that was really her intentions, Ian just isn't cut out for these looks. typical male MC problem. for god knows why i'm not allowed play a defined character instead of an average joe, which obviously makes him need to look average as well. so wits looks like a waiter, charisma looks like a wimp, athletics like a try-hard and lust... well i already gave some options who he looks like.

i guess that is the problem when you try to have an Ian that can be a total loser or an absolute chad and also look that part.