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*On not inDamn y r these new literary critics doin in a "porn site"
*On not inDamn y r these new literary critics doin in a "porn site"
SerHawkes has some weird obsession/hate for Jeremy, it's not even funny to see it anymore.But I want Seymour to be an evil mastermind trying to test and corrupt much younger girl. Axel to be a toxic, aggressive and dominant bf/ex. I want Jeremy to be a walking BBC fetish. Stan to be a creepy loser perv...
I'm not even judging those who want more from this game. But come on, it's fucking porn after all. It just has a few extra steps of context and imagination
And an equally weird obsession with Ivy. Who, by the way, is every bit as one-note as Jeremy, but apparently that's okay in her case because she's his type or something. I don't know, man.SerHawkes has some weird obsession/hate for Jeremy, it's not even funny to see it anymore.
One genuine criticism I have for ORS and GGGB is that the dialogues can be pretty stiff and bland at times. There are moments when I play them and keep thinking "EK could've paraphrase this," "Character X wouldn't talk like that," "Word X would've fitted this situation better than Word F," etc.SerHawkes has some weird obsession/hate for Jeremy, it's not even funny to see it anymore.
Anyway, I don't think the characters are the issue; some people, like you pointed out, want to see Jeremy be the BBC fetish and Axel being the dominant male. It's what the game is about. If you don't want for Jeremy to be the guy who fucks your girlfriends then just don't play the game that way.
It's a multip-choice, multi-path game; literally the whole point of the game is the freedom of choices.
I like my porn to be on the high-brow side, too, dude, but it's too early to make the judgements you're making. I imagine if your in-game choices put Ian and Lena together on a "pure love" path and then have Lena fuck Jeremy and others, there will be "punishment," or what I prefer to call consequences. Same for Ian and Cindy, etc. But if those consequences come too early in the story, their effects are weakened.Lets see: A set of antagonists that aren't all that thrilling and bland. You have Seymour, who wants to control Lena and make her a sex slave. How is that interesting? You have Axel, who is also obsessed with Lena and can't take a fucking hint and is apparently involved every fucking where. Do we really need Axel to be at a gay bar next? Jeremy is just a BBC kink and has no depth to him at all whatsoeer. Stan is... Stan. And yet the revolving drama each chapter is: Will Lena be able to afford anything while slutting it up or not? Will Ian not get cucked and become the writer he wants to be? Will Stan die in a fiery crash and be replaced?
And sure, I'm bitter and jaded as fuck about Ivy-Ian, yet the writer in me screams 'Eva could do better'. Less kink/fetish crap, more character building. Make Jeremy a decent guy instead of being the Tyrone-lite and wanna be player. Add some depth and delve into characters and their relationships such as Jeremy and Louise and have Lena try to mediate that rathr than gloss over it and reward Jeremy over and over again without little to no punishment.
You might be missing the point here my friend.both Ian and Lena are pretty boring characters, i would like as a main to be Mike (his job as a DJ looks rly cool) and of course Ivy, she is better version of Lena
Agree that. Dialouge could be better in spots, among other things naturally. But apparently criticing that is frowned on a porn thread, so I've learned from certain simpletons here. Funny that.One genuine criticism I have for ORS and GGGB is that the dialogues can be pretty stiff and bland at times. There are moments when I play them and keep thinking "EK could've paraphrase this," "Character X wouldn't talk like that," "Word X would've fitted this situation better than Word F," etc.
I thought the long delay was caused she hired a better wordsmith and had to rewrite tons of dialogues, and I couldn't be more wrong.
You already do in a fashion.If we do get a Lena cucking Ian path which i really hope we do i hope we get choices and it's not just really extreme
For example my Ian would totally watch Lena have sex with another dude but i don't want to eat a creampie or wear a cage lol
I like loving cuckold stuff not extreme cuck stuff.
I'm sorry but that's literally that jjj you serious meme.The Story is average, if not below average.
What can I say, I like well written stories in porn games that interest me and have some actual sense of a story.I'm sorry but that's literally that jjj you serious meme.
You seem to have very optimistic idea of what constitutes as average for story in porn games.
Sure, i think everyone prefers good than bad, when given choice. But if you truly feel one of better executed porn games is "average or below average" compared to its competitors, then i can only envy you, because it seems you've only experienced the cream of the crop, or managed to successfully block memories of anything that wasn't.What can I say, I like well written stories in porn games that interest me and have some actual sense of a story.
I would say I'm picky. Half the games here, while visually stunning, or have content I am interested, I don't play because either the story uninterests me or the characters are poorly crafted, or their is a literal fuckton of typos... -shivers-.Sure, i think everyone prefers good than bad, when given choice. But if you truly feel one of better executed porn games is "average or below average" compared to its competitors, then i can only envy you, because it seems you've only experienced the cream of the crop, or managed to successfully block memories of anything that wasn't.
Or, and I'm just throwing a wild thought here, people just disagree with your criticism, or at the very least find it overblown because of your harsh choice of words.But apparently criticing that is frowned on a porn thread, so I've learned from certain simpletons here.
This sums it up well (and congrats to your butt on the Poohlitzer). It's good enough, which in itself sets it apart from almost every other similar game. The same applies for the other skills needed to make a game like this: create some kind of art; have the ability to also write scenes that are sexy; some basic coding; more administrative tasks like delegating smaller jobs, setting up platforms to distribute the game, communicating with the followers. It's a weird mix of skills, and most people are probably shit at one or more of them (I definitely am), but I'd say Eva is somewhere between decent and good at most or all. Some characters are a bit one dimensional, some illustrations look less good than others, some paths are less well structured than others. But overall the result is still good (and compared to the average of other porn games, I'd say exceptional).Agreed. Eva's no poet and no award-winning writer by a long shot. But we're talking games here. Not just games. Porn games. My butt poops out better dialogue and more stimulating narrative than 95% of games on this site. Eva's writing: Good enough, considering the competition. (TBF, my butt has won a Poohlitzer).
An option would be nice. Though I can also understand if she cuts certain corners for the route and forces us into something once we've already decided on the cuck route just for the sake of time and making less work for herself. Though ig an easier way would be for only one or 2 scenes having the option to do something a little more extreme or not do it. At least you don't have to worry about any sissification or gay stuff in that route bc I doubt Eva would go thereIf we do get a Lena cucking Ian path which i really hope we do i hope we get choices and it's not just really extreme
For example my Ian would totally watch Lena have sex with another dude but i don't want to eat a creampie or wear a cage lol
I like loving cuckold stuff not extreme cuck stuff.
I feel like I've played a different game if these are peoples complaints. I have a route where Jeremy is a total bro. Not mean at all. And Seymour and Axel, despite obviously being villains, are interesting enough for me. Especially in the (sadly deleted) scene where Axel and Ian were quite friendly at the bar. Also, in most games like this Seymour would've been totally different. You all know the type of character trope I'm talking about. But he's not. All things considered you wouldn't even know he was a bad guy at first glancechanging Jeremy to be "nicer" or Seymour and Axel to be more "complex and interesting"
A game could have the hottest characters and fetishes in existence but nothing kills my boner faster than having to decipher what's being saidliteral fuckton of typos