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Really looking forward to next update, this is hands down my most favorite game on the site.
But that is his role in the story, to pull Ian into being a chad. Any subtleties would be a hindrance of this role. They may (hopefully) come later in the story when he has fulfilled this role.the 'big black cock that could belong to any black guy' stereotype he's being compared to?
The reason is obvious, he talks about it all the time. He wanted to get laid. A lot.but we don't know the reason why
The last status report was Monday Oct 4th, although they are not regularly posted on a weekly basis.Did I miss the weekly update?
Hmm interesting take. My comment was more or less made in response to the comments above me, which were something along the lines of Jeremy being too "bland" of a character to be the guy cucking Ian.We must be thinking about different Jeremy's, because the Jeremy in ORS has shit-all personality. What does he talk about or have an opinion about that in any way tells us about or fleshes out his unique personality? Even when he attempts to have morals with the 'don't bang a mate's girl' thing, he's all too ready to disregard that if/when Ian gets with Alison, so this again just adds to his complete lack of personality. How is that different to the 'big black cock that could belong to any black guy' stereotype he's being compared to?
And yes, we hear that once upon a time he was a major nerd that, for whatever reason decided to get jacked and become a chad... but we don't know the reason why, Jeremy never talks about that time, nor refers to it retrospectively, and most importantly, we don't see even the tiniest strains of that former 'major nerd' in the guy he is now. Yes, people can change pretty drastically over time, but doing a complete 180 without any indication whatsoever of who that person once was in only a handful of years is simply unrealistic. Realistically you would see some sort of indication or a 'slip up' betraying his former nerd-self. THAT would make him interesting, at least as a start - showing how much he's tried to run from his former image only to fall back into it at times.
Example: it could when he's just hanging out with Ian, Perry and Wade (or at least just Ian) where he can let down his guard, that we get to see glimpses of another side of him that he wouldn't dare show the ladies; and the indication that him being a chad is still something of an act for him and isn't him 'by nature'. Maybe being something he isn't naturally can even get a bit tiring at times (despite the obvious perks, which is why he does it), and he's still retaining some self doubt from the former nerdy him. Maybe he even misses some of the things he used to do as a nerd, or how he could just relax back then, and only ever confides in Ian about it because he's paranoid about his image. So he runs from himself, but deep down, sort of misses it.
That would actually make him a little more interesting - give him some actual dimension. Hell, If Ian became a major chad and his relationship with Jeremy was bad, he could even use his knowledge of Jeremy's background/who he is underneath against him in a few different ways.
Anyway, backstory is meant to give an insight into how a character became the way that they are, or why they are the way that they are, but Jeremy's backstory means absolutely nothing. You could get rid of it or have never read it and it wouldn't make even the tiniest difference to our understanding of Jeremy, because there's nothing to understand. Literally every main character in the entire story has more personality then he does.
Funnily enough, if you did get rid of that backstory, you'd be getting rid of the only interesting and unique thing attached to his bland-ass stereotypical character. Something that isn't even being used. It's kinda sad.
It'll all lead to a Holly/Cindy ending if you don't go for them with either mainI want more Holly and Cindy content. I'm kinda annoyed that some of their scenes are conflicting.
New Cindy outfit, Alison minor redesign, and some new locations.Have any teaser images been released for the next update?
oO some arts were posted?New Cindy outfit, Alison minor redesign, and some new locations.
I'm really glad we don't. I pay Eva because I like the female POV content and the concise weave with which the narrative between Lena and Ian is stitched together.I wish we could take multiple POVs with guys like Jeremy/Wade/Axel to see their scenes with girls other than Lena. A Jeremy/Cindy scene would be awesome!
Ya I won't be getting this scene.You must be registered to see the links
Chapter 9 weekly status report (8)
Hey there,
not much new to report about Chapter 9 other than I'm hacking away at the last bits of writing, I still have one major scene to finish and a few other exposition sequences to fill in the gaps. I'll try to finish as much as possible this week, hopefully leaving only the testing and some small visual tasks to complete.
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I'm getting there, I hate to reiterate but thanks for your patience and be sure that the episode will come out before the end of the month, that much I can guarantee. Meanwhile, let me know what pairings are you hoping to see in this chapter and which scenes are your most anticipated ones.
So, is this going to be the moment when I'm going to make Lena shatter this presumptuous old man's ambition to corrupt her? Can not waitYou must be registered to see the links
Chapter 9 weekly status report (8)
Hey there,
not much new to report about Chapter 9 other than I'm hacking away at the last bits of writing, I still have one major scene to finish and a few other exposition sequences to fill in the gaps. I'll try to finish as much as possible this week, hopefully leaving only the testing and some small visual tasks to complete.
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I'm getting there, I hate to reiterate but thanks for your patience and be sure that the episode will come out before the end of the month, that much I can guarantee. Meanwhile, let me know what pairings are you hoping to see in this chapter and which scenes are your most anticipated ones.