VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.2 Full] [Eva Kiss]

4.60 star(s) 336 Votes
Discussion Reviews (336)
N

niek07

Newbie
Jul 23, 2019
52
51
frellipsm said:
Damn that's a rough critique. Maybe Ian's corruption could be cashing in on that sweet sweet merch and franchising when tries to recreate Star Wars instead of Star Trek.
I hope, speculatively, that the success of his novel also takes into account how well the player uses Ian's stats more so than the combination of genres, including charm or even lust if he's willing to essentially sell-out.
Click to expand...
It would make sense that the level of Ian's Wits is important for how successful the book is going to become.
 
  • Like
Reactions: John Doe Jr. and Mark17
fortuna95

fortuna95

Lezz kiss for peace!
Donor
Feb 7, 2018
3,804
18,788
You must be registered to see the links

Next outfit to be revealed

You voted for the Lust outfit to be revealed first, no surprise there! I have to say, however, it's not 100% new, but an improvement over an existing outfit Lena has wore in the past. It's still super hot, or so I think :p
You can take a look at the outfit in our
You must be registered to see the links
, under the Sneak Peeks tab.



Which outfit do you want to see next?

Anmerkung 2021-01-02 222012.png
 
  • Like
Reactions: f9597, John Doe Jr., Lord Nux and 9 others
Mark17

Mark17

Well-Known Member
May 15, 2017
1,133
2,656
dundun said:
EvaKiss answered that in her last Q&A.
The book mini-game tests Ian to find good combinations of plot devices that work with the
genre he's choosing to write. The resulting book's quality will depend on that!
Click to expand...
manscout said:
Yes, the combinations will probably decide how well Ian's book does.

For the time being it is mostly speculative, but you can get feedback from the game for at least the first 2 choices if Ian goes on the date with Lena and Holly instead of hanging out with Alison, these are the winning combinations:
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Click to expand...
I choose Sci-fi/Call of duty/Moralistic/Antihero/Doom. Something in the lines with my favorite book: Starship Troopers.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Deleted member 53157 and frellipsm
P

portrapoodle

Member
Jul 9, 2017
317
244
fortuna95 said:
You must be registered to see the links

Next outfit to be revealed

You voted for the Lust outfit to be revealed first, no surprise there! I have to say, however, it's not 100% new, but an improvement over an existing outfit Lena has wore in the past. It's still super hot, or so I think :p
You can take a look at the outfit in our
You must be registered to see the links
, under the Sneak Peeks tab.



Which outfit do you want to see next?

View attachment 968280
Click to expand...
I think that section is reserved for patrons. Could you share the image? Thanks!
 
  • Like
Reactions: Albaduldür and fatpussy123
D

Deleted member 53157

Engaged Member
Jun 3, 2017
2,264
5,844
DatBoit said:
Sneak peek of the lust outfit. To me, it looks exactly the same as the outfit Lena wore in Episode 5. I also don't know why I can still see it as I cancelled my pledge before this month, but hey, there you are.
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Click to expand...
It is the exact same one but with stockings
 
  • Like
Reactions: Pizzapockets, Mark17 and Deleted member 2741684
I

Infinite9

Member
Oct 5, 2017
186
359
thong + fishnet stockings :oops:

Lena is a scavenger. She is yet to buy any clothes. Im sure that fishnet stocking comes from bunny outfit :D
 
D

Deleted member 53157

Engaged Member
Jun 3, 2017
2,264
5,844
cecece123 said:
thong + fishnet stockings :oops:

Lena is a scavenger. She is yet to buy any clothes. Im sure that fishnet stocking comes from bunny outfit :D
Click to expand...
Lol exactly. That is my opinion. This is not sexy at all. She looks like she combined whatever she had at hand and ended up with a weird style. I get that Eva cannot just draw special renders for every occasion, but this is just low effort.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Pizzapockets, Nice_Guy69 and TamaMountain
Idontknowme

Idontknowme

Member
Game Developer
Nov 12, 2016
434
801
Ceesko said:
Lol exactly. That is my opinion. This is not sexy at all. She looks like she combined whatever she had at hand and ended up with a weird style. I get that Eva cannot just draw special renders for every occasion, but this is just low effort.
Click to expand...
I think Lena looks quite attractive for the look she is going for. Also, salvaging clothing items from other outfits fits Lena's financial situation. It would be weird if she went on a shopping spree everytime she made a bit of money.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Pizzapockets, N7Pi3, John Doe Jr. and 2 others
D

doctor13

Member
Oct 13, 2018
271
782
BloodyMares said:
My main problem is with stockings-shorts combo. It looks tasteless and screams "cheap hooker" to me. I have yet to see any girls that sport that look. Usually, it's skirts/dresses with stockings or shorts with pantyhose. Not this.
Click to expand...
The outfits are always exaggerated. Look at some of the stuff Ashley was wearing in GGGB. I hope some other characters get new outfits. Maybe Ian can start ordering Minerva to wear revealing stuff : D
 
  • Like
Reactions: LaPein, John Doe Jr., Pizzapockets and 6 others
BloodyMares

BloodyMares

Well-Known Member
Dec 4, 2017
1,464
7,032
doctor13 said:
The outfits are always exaggerated. Look at some of the stuff Ashley was wearing in GGGB. I hope some other characters get new outfits. Maybe Ian can start ordering Minerva to wear revealing stuff : D
Click to expand...
I know, Thug Ashley had the stupidest outfits. I just like ORS being more subtle than that, but old habits die hard, I guess.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Eldar, Deleted member 2577953, dogedoge and 5 others
You must log in or register to reply here.
Top Bottom
4.60 star(s) 336 Votes