VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[L621]

Wait, so what exactly is new content in this Beta compared to ch. 11 prologue? If there even is any to begin with, since I saw nothing new.

 

[fishbrain]

I have edited a text line of game/scripts/story/chapter11_prologue.rpy and it seems to be working for me without errors, so idk. For what's worth i have left original .rpa files intact, just unpacked the scripts elsewhere, made the edit and dropped the altered copy in the game's folder.

See what error(s) you're getting in tracebacks.txt file. It could be something simple, like your text editor dropping a tab character instead of spaces, which Renpy/Python doesn't like at all.

Thanks, I'll check when I get home but it kept throwing the same 4 errors.

 

[cheesetriangles]

Wait, so what exactly is new content in this Beta compared to ch. 11 prologue? If there even is any to begin with, since I saw nothing new.

This is still the prologue with bug fixes and the thread is poorly named.

 

[ffive]

Wait, so what exactly is new content in this Beta compared to ch. 11 prologue? If there even is any to begin with, since I saw nothing new.

It's beta version of the Ch.11 prologue. The update is mostly bug fixes, with a minor addition of extra dialogue branch for Lena who has slept with Holly, for their talk about Holly's love life.

 

[mommysboiii]

I get the opinion that Cidny would cheat on Wade with or without Ian. I felt a little bit Guilty for Ian to cheat with his Friends GF, but after learning how shitty of person cidny is, I wouldn't doubt that either axel or some other guy would have banged her.

Oh dont worry buddy Iam sure that axel or some wildcats guy will still bang her even if together with ian she always wants to be in the middle and want attention than the potential competition with ivy maybe it will be like good girl gone bad were cindy and ivy are both at a photo/video shoot and they compete with each other and be rivals and she get more and more pushed to act like ivy keep the guys interested in her otherwise she lose to ivy she will prob be her rival(I guess there will be alot of huge catfights between them)

and than there is also old grandpa that looks for new toys he will prob have an eye on cindy too if she gets bigger

 

[mommysboiii]

By the way, is anyone going to try the Gillian route or even make it the main one? Cause my man Ian is about to send a cheating bitch back to San Diego shithole she crawled out of.

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no dude you can fix her look at her face its perfection I think she prob will be a fan favorit for a lot and than cry later because you cant fix her she prob is a nympho/sex addict or something but I already love her

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

no dude you can fix her look at her face its perfection I think she prob will be a fan favorit for a lot and than cry later because you cant fix her she prob is a nympho/sex addict or something but I already love her

Fix her? Sorry, but this is not a Disney universe.
I can always see how Ian from parallel universe saving Gillian using the gallery unlocker.

 

[Ir0n Ma1den]

I feel we soon get some Ivy and Ian action, which is long overdue.

I really want bully Ian to dominate her ass, Ian kinda off looks like Toby and he looks silly when he tries to be dominent.

 

[Ir0n Ma1den]

Need to find my Bully Ian photos

 

[Winchester Quincy]

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Hey man, when will you release walkthrough for chapter 10

 

[dundun]

So Gillian left her hometown to find work at Baluart, then she returned to her hometown again. Presumably, Ian found out about her affair after she's already back at her hometown.

Is that correct?

I quoted the original lines from the game. That is all the information I got.

I don't think Lena cares about Ian's girlfriend or Mike's ex, regardless of whether they're the same person or not. But with the strong emotions both Ian and Lena have about the cheating they've experienced, I definitely think Gillian being Mike's girlfriend would add another layer to it all, which Eva could use in a number of ways.

Lena is good at justifying it to herself when she does something she knows she shouldn't do, like cheating on Ian with Mike. But if Gillian turns out to be Mike's girlfriend, it would make it impossible to ignore that what Lena's doing is comically identical to what Gillian did. And she knows how much and how long he has struggled because of that. If she still continues the affair with Mike, how would it play out? Lena's already thashtalking Mike's girlfriend to spice things up in the bedroom—would Ian get the same role? After all, they now have "proof" that he's so inferior to Mike that no less than two of his girlfriends have cheated with him.

And maybe Ian wouldn't care about who his girlfriends cheat with if he was completely rational and confident in himself, but he's not. Let's say Gillian is Mike's girlfriend; that Lena and Ian are in a relationship; that Lena gave Mike a blowjob at Ivy's birthday party; and that Ian and Gillian have a talk in chapter 11 about what happened between them. In that scenario Ian is bound to find out who Mike is sooner or later … and maybe also remember him as the same guy Lena came out from the club with, after Ian had left her horny on the dance floor. I think that's more than enough to make Ian's mind start to wander. (Does Lena know him too? If so, how? Did she dance with him like she did with me moments before? Has she ever had sex with him, now or in the past? Should I ask her about all of this the next time she's giving me a handjob?)

Ian's already stressing himself out (or turning himself on) by comparing himself to other guys and worrying about falling short. Jeremy is easy-going and doesn't make a big deal about anything relating to women, and he's also got a monster cock. Axel is the übermensch ex-boyfriend he for obvious reasons feels inferior to. There's also the "threat" that the Stalkfap horndogs represent. Hell, he's even worried about the useless piece of shit that is Robert. It could be similar with Mike even if Gillian isn't his girlfriend, but it would add significantly more fuel to it if it was the case.

That is all so vague and wide fetched. Look, as far as I know Ian doesn't know with whom Gillian cheated. So let's talk interesting. What if it was Jeremy? Or Axel? Or Wade? Or, for that matter, Cherry or Alison? Hell, even Robert would be better because Ian already knows and despises him.

Lena might potentially care that her dream guy turns out to be someone who has harmed her friend. Much like she can potentially care that Jeremy is being a shit "boyfriend" to her friend Louise. The identity of Mike's girlfriend isn't the focus here, but discovering new aspect of Mike's personality is.


I disagree; it's in human nature to look for patterns and find significance in them, so learning that not one but two of his girlfriends both cheated on him and/or left him for the same guy can compound already high emotions of learning the person you've trusted betrayed this trust.

What makes you believe Lena cares about Mike's personality? She is thinking about something else entirely whenever she calls him late at night. She'll also completely ignore Jeremy being a shit boyfriend if she is interested in him.
Finally either Ian is just an acquaintance to her so why would she care so much about Mike being together with his ex or she has been cheating on Ian with Mike all the time. Mike's personality should be her least concern

 

[ffive]

By the way, is anyone going to try the Gillian route or even make it the main one? Cause my man Ian is about to send a cheating bitch back to San Diego shithole she crawled out of.

Ian in my playthrough left the pictures, and while i intend to at least try to eventually get him to move on, i'm also hoping i can get it messy instead of quick and easy, not unlike what i have going with Lena.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

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Ian in my playthrough left the pictures, and while i intend to at least try to eventually get him to move on, i'm also hoping i can get it messy instead of quick and easy, not unlike what i have going with Lena.

I understand, I also left pictures for more drama in one of the runs.
And you turned a blue-haired beauty into a redhead... I love redheads, but that's not her style.

But here's something, Gillian is definitely inspired by Mary Jane's looks.

 

[ffive]

What makes you believe Lena cares about Mike's personality? She is thinking about something else entirely whenever she calls him late at night.

Because she devotes some internal monologues to his personality and not just 100% of the time to how great it feels when he fucks her silly. And what she thinks about when she calls him late at night isn't the same she thinks when she begs him to stay the night with her. Let's not oversimplify Lena's thought process so quickly, her relationship with Mike isn't just a single note story, and it can evolve in different ways.

She'll also completely ignore Jeremy being a shit boyfriend if she is interested in him.

That's why i said potentially. But having a jackass for a hookup can be a different thing from having a jackass as potential life partner. It can affect one's priorities quite a bit.

 

[fishbrain]

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Ian in my playthrough left the pictures, and while i intend to at least try to eventually get him to move on, i'm also hoping i can get it messy instead of quick and easy, not unlike what i have going with Lena.

That's Zoey, and I just realized how much she looks like Jill.. lol

Thanks for your help! I had used unren last night, but couldn't find the right files to edit.

 

[Blurpee69]

You all mock him but Perry effortlessly raises his relationship with all models in the game -- Cherry, Lena, Ivy... just wait till Cindy becomes a model, too. No one can resist that stutter, in the end Perry will have the last laugh.

My boy Perry is on a quest to slay all the hotest chicks in the city. AND HE IS KILLING IT! In my head cannon route he doesn't go to the clubs because he's tired of bringing the bitches home.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

In recent days, I've been reading a lot of interesting theories about what Episode 11 will be like, a lot of talk about Jillian and the "ex-return" plotline, even ideas for a whole flashback episode, jokes and comparisons to BaDIK (guilty as charged ).

Lads, we need to change the scene a bit and remember the main goal of Episode 11. Something that so many of us have been waiting for three years.
It's a hell of a long wait and Eva Kiss, do it finally! Just do ut:


My manwhore Ian must do this, because he is inevitability itself!


You may have noticed that for some girls there was not enough space on this pedestal of inevitability. Don't worry, they're fine. They are here:

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[ffive]

The danger of Thanos memes is, at the end of the day there is going to be Iron Man with Axel face taking that glove for himself.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

The danger of Thanos memes is, at the end of the day there is going to be Iron Man with Axel face taking that glove for himself.

Let's not forget that this probability is only one in 14 millions.

 

[Turret]

The danger of Thanos memes is, at the end of the day there is going to be Iron Man with Axel face taking that glove for himself.

Let's not forget that this probability is only one in 14 millions.

Well, even Iron man Axel would have problems with this fellow:
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