FearLs

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Nov 15, 2020
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Well Alice in Wonderland was a nightmare for me when i was a kid. The weirdness surrounding it.....loved it. The game seems very interesting, graphics are really good. The animations might need a bit more work, from what i saw with the dildo and the pig guy. Keep up the good work, love to see how this goes.
 

deaddog

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May 16, 2017
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It looks promising, but the original post doesn't have much information. What type of game is it? What type of action will there be? I can appreciate a coy "wait and see" thing, but with the massive bulk of games, it's nice to have a better heads up before spending time installing and playing.
 

zeraligator

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May 25, 2018
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Hello to you too, dev of early unity erotic work.

The description is kind of vague, as it says nothing about the actual game, story or gameplay other than the common and largely meaningless phrase of your choices matter. You might want to move some lines from the dev notes to it or at least paraphrase some, though that also doesn't really say whether the game is (going to be) a survival RPG, a walking simulator or whatever else is possible.

Also the Alice model's hair looks weird in the previews, might be the low-res shadows or a placeholder texture but it look kindof like hay.
 

TheOldGuard

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Jan 20, 2020
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I'm guessing its vague since its like the first upload and if you read dev notes i think they talk about the physics for hair etc. I'm guessing future updates

A tag did show adventure so maybe its gonna be mostly story based.
 
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Important!! you should meet with CAT first when you wake, his roll is to be the driving force forward for Alice's adventures, most Important!! so the porn part as of now is like the worst.... I'd almost say scrap the porn and try to make a Madness clone, unless its going to be Madness but with porn.(oh PLZ be) the pig dude was scary looking(I likes it)you teased me, thought there was going to be some Vorpal blade action(will there?) its a good start the game mechs seem to work as they should its got the WTF is going on look down.
 

MoreNow

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Nov 25, 2017
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i feel like you did the best thing ever by really taking AWESOME story/narrative, using a great game engine to make something that CAN become something beautiful, and have the courage to post this crazy early test/demo here for feedback.


But let's cut straight to the chase:

1.
The Motion Blur is insanely terrible. I have all the settings maxed out. The motion blur really looks like shes on all of the drugs and everything is fuzzy/blury, while walking around/running.

2. I think you need to any development you are doing on the world/animations and get your characted polished and animated to an extremely satisfying degree. Take reference from WILD LIFE and SECTOR 7 for animation / character polish https://f95zone.to/threads/section-7-project-unknown-101-test-version-update-mr-matthew.58610/ and https://f95zone.to/threads/wild-life-build-23-06-2021-10-patreon-adeptus-steve.3810/ youve probably already played both, a lot, but still - I personally find these two games to have excellent character models/animations. I would also add PARALOGUE / Fallen Doll: Operation Lovecraft to that list: https://f95zone.to/threads/fallen-doll-operation-lovecraft-v0-34-cracked-project-helius.33403/

3. Even in such a crazy early test/demo, your ideas look like this concept can be wildly fun and extremely addicting to play lol. Having the character use an object solo, only to be surprised and attacked, and perhaps resulting in great fun, is really wonderful. Wasn't expecting that at all - I thought it was going to be a super boring scene - the surprise REALLY made me want to explore more, play more, and see what else I can find or reveal.

4. Please don't get distracted by making some overly ambitious world. The quality of the character polish, the quality of the animations, and HOW THE ANIMATIONS CHANGE FROM POSITION TO POSITION, IS 10,000% MORE IMPORTANT THAN A BIG COLORFUL MAP! That being said, I love how absurd the world looks, and the night with the lights is fucking awesome.

5. THE SCALE! I love the scale so fucking much and im actually surprised I like it so much. Her barely being able to look over the top of the dining table is awesome - the perspective feels super spot on.

A few other notes:
Definitely start the journey with the Cat driving the story, as others have said.
I do like that the character can interact with the mouse click - instead of having to have both hands busy.
I think the dialogue/interaction UI needs to be changed - it just feels awkward and I want to be able to "skip" ahead, or even go back, or click at my own pace to speed up or slow down the text/dialogue/story advancement etc.

Really excited to see where you take this..... Great idea!!!
 

TheStruggler

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Mar 30, 2019
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So basically i run until i find someone and they basically just tell me to fuck off and that seems to be the entirety of the content?
 

P4RASITIC

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Aug 15, 2018
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Alice has a bunch of pixilated shadows on her, I tried to play with all the settings but idk what's causing it. Any help?