VN - Ren'Py - Package Perfect [Demo] [Lewtopia]

Looks like a very promising game. Great graphics, interesting writing, and a plot that definitely invites you to keep reading. Interesting characters, definitely a project worth following. Let's hope it's not a slow-burn game, other than that I have no particular concerns.

Gorgeous, I just wanna see more!
The renders are beautifully done, the concept engaging.
As far as I could see, the storytelling could get deep and that's a rarity.
I really like it. Hope we get a release in the not so distant future.

Package perfect [Demo]

This one got a great start. Beautiful visual and beautifully crafted characters. Writing is nicely done. All the characters are beautiful. And the family in this game really felt like a family. Mc got a big dick so she will dominant in future. Like all other games mc also got big dick problem she got great libido. But she ain't creeping on her family nor other characters. I like pace of this. All characters nicely written they all got their own charms. Glad it's a slowburn. From the planned tags I'm glad cause this one gonna be kinky in the future. But keep the character developments too.

Can clearly see dev put lot of efforts for this one in visual and writing department

Overall i enjoyed this one. Keep up the good work dev looking forward to next updates.

A very high quality demo and a promising start with a lot planned it seems.

Reviewing as of Demo

Pros:

• The MC is very attractive and well made
• I don't mind the absurdly large dick tbh
• There is a gallery
• Around 15-30 minutes to complete
• The animation is extremely high quality
• The plot is meaningful, you can tell the MC is struggling trying to fit in

Cons:

• Choices right now don't seem to matter much, I know it's a demo
• No SFX in the H-scene

Conclusion:

Wait for a substantial update or two to get a good grasp on this game, but if you got 15 minutes to burn I highly recommend checking this out.

Stellar character designs, renders, and animations. The relationship setup is clear without being overly wordy or unrealistic. a lot of devs don't seem to understand how to write subtext or even basic relationship dynamics into character conversations and instead have to state every relationship and conflict outright in an opening monologue. Not here. So well done so far in a genre we don't see done well too often. Looking forward to see how the story proper opens up. The real source of the MC's shame over her condition would help too. It is unclear why it is so shameful in her mind.

I understand that the relationships presented aren't unique but popular archetypes exist for a reason and putting your own spin on those is great imo. Just make sure each character has a unique value brought to the table. If ppl struggle to differentiate characters, its a problem.

DEMO is good and while the story is a bit cliche, i dont mind because a lot of avn focus more in the sex rather in the story. well it is still in demo so cant say a lot about the story.

the render are not like the usuall daz, it didnt have the downside (or not depending who you ask) of having masculine female head and rather cute. SO A PLUS for me who dislike the usual masculine female head in Daz based avn.

the animation suprisingly extremely well done and smooth, i am amaze by it.

i look forward for the release.

Only a demo, but good so far. Renders are good, writing is decent, music is fine, pacing seems strong. It seems very sleek and professionally put together. Looking forward to the next update. Please don't abandon this like a lot of other futa games.

For a demo version it is perfect. Nice animations, models and the plot is well developed, making you empathize with MC. Also it seems like as a player you will be able to choose MC's personality through all the decisions taken during the game.
If you are interested in this game tags, you really should play it

First of all thank you for uploading the game and i wish the best of luck.
The demo was about the showcase of chars and mc and i have to say i like what i saw.Only problem for me was the MC's dicksize.Its just too big man you need a licence to carry that around jezz.Other than that everything looks great i look forward to play more of this game.

Congratulations to Lewtopia, for a demo it is quite impressive

VISUALS:

The Great

• Character design is absolutely amazing. All of them look great, and feel distinct
• The animations caught me by surprise, I was not expecting any, let alone them being done so well
• The color palette is very well chosen

The Good

• The game does not suffer much from the “bare white wall” disease, which is good because there is a LOT of that out here.
• For a demo, the settings look good and alive, though I’m sure the school will have more than five students by the time the official release comes by

The OK
Framing and blocking needs improvement. For instance, the frame shouldn’t cut the chest in two

The Bad (and I mean really bad)
Please excuse the filmmaker in me, I just can't help it. Lewtopia, if you read this, I beg you, don’t break the line. Visual story telling has rules for a reason, the line is broken so often that it is disorienting, thus breaking the flow of most scenes.

STORYTELLING

I have to agree with @ArmoredRacoon, the writing is very rushed, and I found it “meh”.

I mean let’s deal with the elephant in the room here, the dick size is just ridiculous.

The overall tone is one of realism (as in not fantastical), but as soon as the dick comes out any sense of logic within the script flies out the window. I mean, how is she supposed to hide this thing? Her sisters don’t know, after all this time? What, they never swam in a pool, or went on vacation together? The whole angle about her keeping it a secret just doesn’t make sense, and it can easily raise loads of questions, thus distracting from the experience.

As well, there’s quite the tonal clash. The struggles she faces are shallow (for now), but at least they feel real. Again though, any sense is flushed down the toilet when for instance she claims to shoot her load all the way to the ceiling.

It almost feels like there are types of story in one game. Problem is, there can be only one.

At the end of the day, perhaps the script will setup the world-building where the above makes sense, and I certainly want to give the dev the benefit of the doubt, we’ll see.

It’s certainly not overt, but I sense hints of identity politics that were peppered here and there. We are bombarded by this lunacy day in, and day out, can adult VN be free of that? Can’t we have a damn break? Again, if the dev is reading, I suggest you tell a story that’s spicy, light, and fun, and let’s leave any sense of politics out the door.

CHARACTERS
Although the models for the characters are great, their personalities don’t follow their looks. Let's see:

• The introvert sister
• The chatty sister
• The mom who uses terms of endearments with every phrase
• The bullies
• The girl boss friend.

We've all seen these countless times before, it's not exactly compelling.

One good thing about the script is teasing at the undercurrent of domination/submission theme, especially through Carol, and Blaire. That’s a good hook.

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I may sound pretty harsh here, but I understand the one-man team can’t be proficient at all aspects of their games, something gotta give, and in this case it is the writing and the world-building. I don’t believe there is any shame in utilizing tools like NovelAI to help in that regard. It’s not expensive, but can make a world of difference, not to mention lightening the workload.


Music, UI, both are fine

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I 'm blunt here, but I believe the dev can handle it. The potential is clearly there, so I don't see the point in being complacent. As it is there are flaws, but it is promising. I’m certainly looking forward to meeting Laura, and Maggie, my oh my.

Impressive demo about a young woman who was born, or perhaps cursed, with a massive cock. The characters are cute and the game has an excellent animation system.

The only downside for me would be the writing, which seemed a little stale to me. Overall it is quite impressive, and if the game develops as well as the protagonists cock, things will certainly be looking up for the future of this game.

10/10 art and animations. MC is very beautiful and feminine yet has a big cock, not super common in futa games. You'll want to try it if that's the kind of futa you like best like I do. Excited to see where the story goes.

Giving it a respectable 4-stars based on it showing some good promise. Will likely be updated once the swing of things gets going.
I'm down for comically oversized dickgirl dongers in my futa/dickgirl games since I can suspend the disbelief in the fun/fiction of it. Plus, I'm sure the ladies in the game will love it!

The character selection looks solid so far too, and I love my futa wincest.
My main futa/dickgirl preference is futa-on-female, which seems to be the bulk of the focus here. So that's looking good.
Some of the future tags also intrigue my devious side. Urination is just urination, or watersports?

While it does show promise and has solid characters, I'm still a bit hesitant to jump in the deep end just yet. Going to need a better idea on what the lewd content will be like. Will likely need to see the first main release to get a better grasp unless the dev give some more explanations beforehand.

The game has great potential, great animations and great models, could replace Futagenesis (if it stays abandoned) in the big 3 of futa protagonist games. Overall this demo shows off greatly the models and opens up the imagination for very sexy scenarios that can be new and improved representations of other scenarios that are seen in other games like this. Wishing my best luck to the dev and hope to see this game and his/her vision completed.

I don't post a lot of reviews so this may come a bit crude.

Renders are promising. Animations are great. Story for now is not something we haven't seen but writing is OK.

Kinetic Story is a big plus for me. I hate overtly grindy sandbox titles.

The only problems I have is with the shape of Lunas "package" and her hand position during masturbation...

The thinner at base and near the head but the bulge in the middle... A bit, disproportionate, as if it's deformed. Maybe a bit of work on that to make it more... Realistic looking? (Is that the phrase that I would be appropriate?).

Also, hand position during the masturbation scenes are a bit off, at least IMHO. Hand should be at the upper part of the penis.

Overall, can't wait for Luna to have fun with GILF and Hazel...

you can clearly see from this demo alone that dev but a lot of thought and work into the game. makeing sure the renders look good and setting up interessting character.
he obvioulsy has some idea about story telling, trying to implement background info without going into blatend info dumbs and giving clear hints at to what kind of game this is setting out to be.
if this demo is a sign of what´s to come and the dev is serious about this he could have something big on his hands

It's a futa protag game (which is already cool) with big package (which I really enjoy), that has great renders and solid UI. Models are not usual overused ones, and even interiors are unfamiliar (I still expect to see that park though). Overall, it is obvious that author is competent in technical questions. It's too soon to say anything about story, but so far it looks like girl in the closet gradually goes wild. Characters also don't look one-dimensional. Even resident bully seems to try to teach a life lesson to the weak guy, besides being a dickhead. And no sandbox time waste! If development will continue - solid personal GOTY contender.

I have couple of technical notes. It would be great to have option to disable any confirmation during save override for us save-junkies. Also, I'm slightly concerned that game will become really big really fast - maybe there is a way to compress images a bit more.

Reviewed version: Demo.

Really rough, omniscient like writing that feels rushed and forced. MC with a huge dick that makes no sense story wise about a girl trying to hide it. Nothing but the character sitting there, crying and complaining for 95% of the demo for being different. The writing is definitely the weakest part.

On the flip side, all the female characters are damn hot and the one solo masturbation animation is animated so well, it may be some of the best animating for a visual novel like this I have ever seen.

Increase the writing quality and this game could be amazing.

Is this really a demo???
Premise is good, characters are stunningly made and rendered. Animation looks great and writing is on par. Everything about this screams quality, now and in the future.

Seriously! Can't wait to see more!!!

H********ly s*it. The renders are quite good, among the best. But man, the foreskin animation! Slap me across the face and call me kitty if that aint a 10/10 bitchbreaker.

Might this be the quintessential futa-dom game? We can only hope - the potential is there.

And HELLO?? The GILF!?