VN - Ren'Py - Package Perfect [v0.6] [Lewtopia]

Yet another great futa game, it's good to see that this type of games are getting traction and become better and better.

The story is good, the renders are great and it's clear that the dev put a lot of effort into making this game as nice as possible, which we can only appreciate.

The game deserves support and i hope it will become much popular in the future.

Version: v0.6
Time played: ~1,5 hours

PROS:
- Design of characters. Each character is impressively polished and rendered beautifully. I like that every character has their distinct features and look somewhat realistic. The MC is stunningly beautiful. Facial expressions are genuine and subtle at the same time.
- Detailed story pacing. So far it has been building up to give a rough outline of the trajectory of the story. I see a lot of potential of how the story can diverge and branch, because of all the different characters. I'm also quite interested in the origin story behind the MC being a dick girl. There is also a good ratio between the amount of text and shown images in a conversation to keep the reader captivated.
- Accessibility settings. The game has some extra settings to make the game more accessible for a broader audience, such as changing the cursor style and the colour of character names.

MIXED:
- The amount of characters. This is kind of a tipping point of any adult game. It is either the crown jewel of a game when done properly, or it is the main cause of a game getting stuck in development hell for ever. As seen in the Gallery there are 13 different characters, which is a lot when you really want to try to create an immersive experience. Especially whenever you'd like to flesh out every character and their respective back story. In general it is better to have a couple of really detailed characters, than an army of characters with no interesting story to tell. Time will tell what will be the case for the different characters and their development.

CONS:
- Size of genitalia. This is kind of a personal preference, but I don't really like the hyper inflated size of MC's genitalia. It seems that it does not really fit into the context of the story, because the other characters have rather decent (even more realistic) scaled body parts compared with their build. Typically this (read: inflated body parts) would be a red line throughout an entire game, where you'd see females with balloon breasts and overly muscular males. But this does not seem to be such a VN, so that puts me off a bit. I get that the MC makes a big deal out if it, because in her head it seems to be such a prominent feature of her body. Especially since she is so secretive about it, that it haunts her in this form and shape whenever she dreams. So that's why she might be imagining it as humongous, but in reality it will be more scaled to her own body. I mean, the MC looks really cute, but her dick does not. Don't get me wrong, it can be big. But somehow it just looks like the slider of dick size in the character creation was being pulled out of the boundaries and went into overdrive.

Story:
The VN as I played it seems to be really early in its development. It is mostly an introduction to the MC, but even then you don't really get to know about the back story of the main character. The other characters are a bit generic, whenever you compare it with other adult visual novels. Here is a quick run-down of the characters:

• Mother: Overly protective of her 'special' daughter
• Father: Absent in mind and mostly uninterested in the conversations
• Big sister: Confident and a bit depraved
• Little sister: Quirky and naive
• Grandmother: Clearly the matriarch of the family and trustworthy
• Teacher: Strict and patronizing

Although the layout seems to be a bit generic, it has the potential to create a unique experience henceforth. What will the development of the MC be? Is her state caused by magic or does it have a logical (more realistic) explanation? Is she going to find comfort in other characters suffering from the same condition?

Gameplay:
Nothing too exceptional with the gameplay aspect, since it is a visual novel made in Ren'py. That being said, the addition of cinematic sequences with auto-play and synced audio might be the thing what makes this game unique and compelling.

Language/Grammar:
I have not noticed any typos, so I can tell it is well written. The UI has a clear font, which makes it easy to read along.

Graphics:
The renders of the characters are of high quality, but also the backgrounds and the other assets. The scene where the MC walks with her friend in the street looks particularly good, because it all looked well tailored to the game itself. Often devs of VN's use (default) assets which are not completely compatible with their characters rendering. But this dev puts more than enough effort in the environment so that all fits the scenery. You can clearly see that the dev knows how to implement focus points, scene lighting and so on in the scenes. The animations also look smooth, realisic and impressive.

Sound:
As far as I heard there were multiple background songs being played during the different sequences, which is always a plus. They also set the tone of the type of scene which is coming up. Interactions with the game UI have satisfying clicks and sounds, which seem insignificant but it definitely adds up to the game's experience and quality. Other than that I did not notice any other sounds such as noises of vocals.

Conclusion:
Package Perfect has captivated me during my playthrough. The experience was intriguing, interesting and somehow a bit wholesome as well. The renders look beautiful and the characters likewise. I'm really curious on how the story develops and what the back story is of the MC. The size of MC's genitalia look off to me, but that is a matter of taste. (4/5)

Recommendations:
- Keep the huge dick to situation where the MC imagines it (e.g. in her dreams). It is perfectly fine that an insecure, young adult exaggerates her privates in her mind, but it would be so much more appealing if it scales to her build. Sex scenes will make more sense if she is not going to dislocate jaws, rip labia and puncture ovaries. Imagine having your first intimate interaction with a partner and she rolls out this monster.
- Perhaps add a journal with some background information of the other characters. It does not have to be a growing log as you learn to know the specific character further down the story, but it might be interesting to see some details such as age, measurements, occupation, etc. It gives the characters some depth.

I will definitely keep an eye on this VN and the dev. I'm really keen on discovering what the story will become and how the characters will develop. Keep up the good work, Lewtopia!

This game just looks fantastic, love the people in it so far, decent enough start to the story as well, nothing groundbreaking but I prefer it when it's on the simpler side anyway, sometimes less is more.
One ''issue'' I'd say is how ridiculous the mc's dick looks. I mean holy shit it's basically a third leg. Hopefully it gets toned down to just big or whatever and not a horse cock on viagra.
But yeah can't wait for more updates, so far there isn't really any content in it.

Even though it’s graphically very appealing, both in terms of the models and the backgrounds, it feels like that’s all there is to it. The MC having a “python” longer than the dialogues within the game somewhat dispels any emotional interest I had in her struggle to live like that.


I can’t really comment on the story, as it’s practically nonexistent so far. However, there isn’t much to suggest it’s going in any direction other than a linear path involving two romantically pursuable characters and a few choice-dependent incidents with familiar characters, such as the glory hole or public changing room scenes.

I don’t see much promise at this stage, so I might give it another try further into development, but for now, it doesn’t seem very worth playing.

Content is limited so far, but the groundwork is there. Graphics look phenomenal and the art style is gorgeous. There's already a good variety of characters, even if there aren't many interactions yet. Even the small stuff, like the music and menus, are expertly done. This game has the makings of something superb, I'm sure.

(written during 0.6 release)

Promising and... that's all we can say for now!
Game looks good. Models, renders and animations are pretty high quality.
But there isn't much more to talk about. This is just a premice, not even an introduction.

We're introduced to our MC, we get a quick overview of her situation, family and friends... and that's it, then the game ends.

From there the game can evolve into anything from a masterpiece to disaster. Story hints that it wants to explore some deep and/or serious subjects, but again there's just not enough matter to judge.

Anyway, the people making this game seem to have everything needed to make one of the greatest games: good competence, good taste, good models, good set-up, good ideas, good ambitions. All that remains to be done is to make a good game out of all of this!

Renders are high quality, story is good and music is ok and I had blast with. I can't wait for more content, but what's already here is really great. Realisticly I would probably give it 4 stars, but I think this genre is niche and not often something this good appears, so it deserves a little more comendation.

Keep up the good work!

From what little there is so far this game is incredibly promising! The character designs are incredible, really nice looking models,. They each have very distinct personalities and so far they're all likable. The little sister is on the edge of being annoying but in a very sisterly way which honestly just adds to the family dynamic which is a huge plus. Looking forward to future updates!

This game really surprised me in the best way. The graphics are high quality, and the overall visual style is super polished. But what truly stands out is the story — it's not just NSFW for the sake of it. There's actual depth here.

You follow a dickgirl raised in a conservative society, and the narrative explores identity, connection, and self-discovery in a way that's both emotional and sexy. It's rare to find adult games that take storytelling seriously, but this one absolutely does.

I'm genuinely excited to see how the game develops further. There's a ton of potential here, both in terms of gameplay and narrative.

This game is excellent.
The character design is out of this world. I enjoy the family dynamic a lot.
The MC is also very relatable. After playing this game for 15 minutes, i knew i had to support the dev for their hard work.

The quality of the renders and models is extremely good, might be the best looking VN I've played. The current version is pretty short, only got some jerking scenes. I have a feeling this game will just tease you for a long time, hope I'm wrong with that tho. I personally find the setup so dumb. Her sisters and friends don't know that she is a futa, there are so many other games just like it. There is to little content to really review the story tho. Looking forward to the final release in 2035! Good luck to the devs

So far it seems like an animated Eruption Imminent.
I loved that game, so this game will probably be great too.
It does seem like it will be more porn focused than Eruption though, so if you're in it for the story, then I wouldn't get your hopes up. They didn't really set up the setting at all beyond character exposition, so who knows about that Conservative society in the overview. The only conservative seeming thing was how they acted with forced respect towards the teacher.

The two scenes are pretty well animated too.
Unlike Eruption Imminent it does not seem like the MC has a vagina, so it might be a different preference.

The developer's technical skills for rendering and animations are excellent, the gameplay is fluid, linear and pleasant, so far the story is also good, generating accumulation and tension, but it's still early for a definitive judgment (the game is in its initial stage). We'll see how it evolves and if the update timing will allow us to follow it.

Great renders with good-looking LIs, but that's about all this has going for it as of 0.6. As others have stated, there's barely any content so the versioning is a bit misleading, and while the characters look good, they're a bit too shallow and quickly fall into very common VN tropes. On top of that, the story has to lean on porn logic way too much, in no small part due to the MC having classic futa horse dick, and yet somehow only having issues once she's 18 to not fall afoul of the rules. It just makes no sense, and that creeps into the choices that you are allowed to make and their consequences. A shame as I'm all for hot redheads, but it's a pass on this one and probably best to wait a few years and just check out the gallery for the scenes.

While still early in development in terms of story length, the visuals and characters are top tier and just downright eye candy. The MC is packing and I can't wait for her to rail her friends and family given the current tone of the story.

In addition, the animations are just outstanding and while there are only a handful, I can't wait to see how things play out. I'm going to be following and excitedly looking for updates for this project, and may even support it.

Hopefully the MC has a pussy, as Futa games where there is only a dick and balls might as well just be shemale which is clearly inferior as less parts less fun possibilities.

As of 0.6, this game is simply not that good.

The visuals are impressive and instantly eye-catching. The animations are smooth and bordering on stunning. Yet the other elements of the game—story, choices, relationships, character building, etc—are neonatal at best and a hot mess at worst.

For those who are looking for a more playable game, this game's versioning is deceptive, if not outright misleading. You would expect a game that's more than halfway to completion as of 0.6, but as of right now, this is barely a demo. It's barely a prologue. It's more a proof of concept.

The game is developed by someone who clearly understands how to render. The lighting, framing, focusing hold up against any game on this site. If visuals are your thing, it's worth giving this game a look, but be prepared to come out disappointed with everything else at this infantile stage of the game.

To put into perspective how little content there is in the game at present, there is one scene at school, effectively one scene as a family at home, two brief solo scenes, zero lewd scenes involving anyone else outside of one wardrobe malfunction revealing one breast. The entirety of the game takes place in less than 24 in game hours (including sleeping). You can get through it in about 15 minutes. It's that short. Yet it's an 0.6 release.

The premise in this game is cliched and super flawed, and yet wholly dependent upon its conceit. The MC is a dickgirl trying to hide a cock that's as big as her leg and supposedly gets hard a dozen times a day. Yet she's able to walk around town in a short dress. It makes zero sense. Somehow, no one in her own family outside of her parents know, even though they're clearly a very sexually-liberated group. They don't mind changing in front of each other, nor does the mom mind if her daughter catches her with her boobs out. Wait, just where is the conservatism?

The developer sets up that the MC is raised in "a conservative society" yet none of the visuals back it up. People are wearing plunging necklines, strapless tube tops, barely there crops, exposed cleavage, and casually barge in on each other while changing or naked. Are they acting like this is a world where trans people simply don't exist, or are so beyond comprehension that they can't reveal MC's grand secret to even members of her own family? Because Isaac is certainly rendered like someone who is not a cisgender male. Even the MC, who's supposed to be hiding this gargantuan (literally) secret, walks around in tight-fitting clothes as if a Bad Dragon would be easy to hide in a pencil skirt. The entire concept is pretty ridiculous off rip.

The characters aren't wholly much better. Hazel is the annoying little sister. Ivy is the quirky older sister. You have a sexpot for a mom and a world-traveling, probably lesbian grandma who have bimbo proportions. You have two best friends, a tomboy who obviously has the hots for MC and the aforementioned Isaac. The characters might have more depth, but given how little we see from them, it's all unrealized potential. We barely get to know these characters from the tiny glimpses we get of them, and what's there is mostly porn tropes.

For now, most of them are just excessively horny and over the top sexual. She's surrounded by these hot women who shove their cleavage in her face or literally straddle her in bed and we're supposed to believe that she only just awakened an attraction for them today? Like it's a suddenly new development?

We get a lot of dialogue choices, most of which are about whether or not the MC stands up for herself or is a total doormat, and yet none of it is really referenced at any point in the game so far. Just to make sure I didn't miss anything, I unpacked the scripts to see if there were any major branching paths I missed. There aren't. The choices thus far as entirely cosmetic.

The MC makes approximately one salient point in this entire demo of a prologue (that not all of her problems needs to be because of her dick, even if the developer insists on only showing the ones that are), and yet she has to apologize for standing her ground? Never once is she allowed to question why she has to keep everything a secret, even from the supposedly-conservative-but-totally-liberal women in her own family? Or that said family members have never seen her at the beach or in a swimsuit or simply walking around with this massive bulge in her pants? And if not all of her problems are related to her dick, why doesn't the developer make even a half-hearted attempt at showing some?

Most of the writing is ham-fisted and forced, and the conflicts are mostly self-inflicted. The MC is so sure that her family and her best friend wouldn't accept her if she reveals her big secret, even though nothing as written in the story suggests that they wouldn't. They don't ostracize her. They don't view her as weird or shuttered. They aren't pressuring her or trying to use her for social standing or clout. They're natural, playful, and seemingly genuinely interested in her. What indications does the developer give to suggest that the MC isn't overthinking this? The vast majority of the conflict is just the MC's incessant worrying and whining. It makes for a super shallow central conflict that's excessively drawn out.

At this point, the game is early enough in development, despite its deceptive versioning, that these things can be addressed. The visuals are beautiful and the premise, while ridiculous, can be managed if it's the only narrative faux pas. But it's currently extremely short, superficial, and lacks interesting characterization or meaningful choice-making.

Play it if you love the renders. But, as a game, it needs a lot more time in the oven.

Game with great potential!

10/10 Characters (Beautiful characters)
10/10 Story (Basic)
10/10 Quality (Excellent images/videos)
10/10 Gameplay mechanics
10/10 Translation (All games should have this wide choice of language, AI is there to make it easier)
10/10 Big dick (it's huge)

VERSION:. 0.6
SUMMARY: A good looking game that is just not there yet...
RATINGS: (out of 5):

NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context.

1. Model Visuals........................... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
2. General Visuals......................... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
3. Animation Quality....................... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
4. Character (Persona)..................... : ⭐⭐⭐
5. Story Quality & Pacing.................. : ⭐⭐⭐
6. Writing Quality & Dialogue.............. : ⭐⭐⭐
7. UI & Game-play Mechanics................ : ⭐⭐⭐
8. Playtime & General Quality.............. : ⭐⭐⭐
9. Sounds & Music...........................: ⭐⭐⭐
10. H-Content & Fetishes.................... : ⭐⭐⭐

Average: 36 of 50 possible points giving a 72% rating i.e. 3-4 stars.

PROS:

1. Very well done visually, the renders are very nice.
2. Animations are very good and high quality, smooth and shows effort.
3. Dialogue is not bad, structured, reads and flows well.
4. Sounds are decent, music, some additional sounds like phone, heels on floor are nice touches, but...(see cons)

CONS:

1. Regarding sounds, I am a fan of more sounds, more ambient, but particularly more lewd scene sounds, moans, gasps, those kinds of things that are sexy and push immersion just that bit further, particularly when the visual quality is so good.
2. Story...this is probably the biggest reason I didn't give the game the 4 stars, its just a bit too much bullshit for my liking and the plot just has too much porn logic. I will share my opinions below.
3. Short, not enough content to really enjoy it and development time may suffer due to the high quality renders.
4. More tags, I would also like to see more tags or future tags. This game has much potential and should also include at least pregnancy like games such as Milf Breeder and particularly Instinct Unleashed. (would have loved if IU looked like this game, it has a great plot and dialogue)

FINAL REMARKS, OPINIONS & SUGGESTIONS:

NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer.

• Regarding the plot and my gripe about it, the following tie into the plot issues:
  • The MC has a cock the size of her size of her arm, no joke, the same with balls being the size of her head or near enough. Now while this is all fantasy, I am sorry, you CANNOT HIDE THAT. Unless the MC folds it and shoves it into her ass, which wont work either im sure. Point is that I am not a fan of the cartoon physics where you can pull a car out of a top hat...
  • The MC acts like she has never seen her mothers tits or any female body parts, its as if she turned 18 (so we meet the minimum age requirements) and the next day (when we start playing) the MC discovers her infatuation with the female physique. The MC is horny for her family and its like its a new thing. News flash! puberty happens around 12ish years old, so you start dealing with those feelings early on, the MC should be aware of this, if anything the player should get more back story of when these feelings of desires, lust etc started, particularly for the family.
  • The next part is that the character is a FUTA, now lets believe its all true, you get futas, ok, but how is it, that in the MCs life of 18 years now, the siblings never saw that massive cock the MC is sporting? How is it that everyone, save the mother who gave birth to her is aware of that giant dick between the MCs legs? This is just a bit too unbelievable.
  • Per above points, the game should ease the player into the MCs frame of mind, concerns, dreams, fears and importantly, desires and they need to make sense as things that have been coming for a while.
  • The MC family and close friends being completely unaware of the MCs physical condition i.e. 3rd leg, is too unbelievable to simply accept, and again, more story, or even phobias could be introduced as excuse to the family and friends as to why the MC is aloof, has baggy clothes, needs constant privacy, is never seen in a bathing suit (poor MC never been in pool, never had a sleep over with girl friends) <-- see why its unbelievable? Again, introduce this in a better way, with story as the MC now has had enough and wants to get out the "closet" so to speak, then this starts to become more believable and thus more kinky, more sexy and fun for the player IMO.
• While I do believe in quality of quantity, I am a little worried that the VN will take a long time to really progress and have a good amount of content simply because the content in the updates are so limited. No doubt due to trying to keep to high quality, but players will lose interest as there is not a decent amount and progression happening per update IMO.

TLDR:

If you can look past the above mentioned porn logic bullshit, this is for all intents and purposes a very good VN, simply because it will get your juices flowing on its high fidelity renders and animations alone. It would do better with decent lewd sounds for that extra immersion and this game deserves that kind of quality for it high visual fidelity. The only real draw back is the story/plot and how it simply disregards what I believe is too obvious to ignore, placing this game into a fapper category and not a more balanced one where the story is actually good and even daresay, plausible.

This game will get 4 stars easily and I may just give it that at a later stage when I update this review. Till then I will wait and see, I doubt it will change much, but if updates at least provide more good content then I can potentially move to 4 stars. Still great VN so far, well done.

I really wanted to give this more stars, but calling this version 0.6 is super deceptive. There is barely any content at all, and for lewd content there is only 2 scenes of the MC jerking off. It would make more sense for this to be a .01 demo.

The renders are really good, and the animations for those 2 jerking scenes are very smooth. I suspect when this gets to real lewd scenes they'll be excellent.

Unfortunately my recommendation would be to not use your time on this game until it gets many versions later so that there is actual progression and content.

Really beautiful characters and the story pacing is good so far. The auto play scene seemed a little unnecessary maybe, but I didn't mind it too much. I like the huge cock, hopefully we can see some self sucking eventually