VN - Ren'Py - Package Perfect [v0.6] [Lewtopia]

The quality of the renders and models is extremely good, might be the best looking VN I've played. The current version is pretty short, only got some jerking scenes. I have a feeling this game will just tease you for a long time, hope I'm wrong with that tho. I personally find the setup so dumb. Her sisters and friends don't know that she is a futa, there are so many other games just like it. There is to little content to really review the story tho. Looking forward to the final release in 2035! Good luck to the devs

So far it seems like an animated Eruption Imminent.
I loved that game, so this game will probably be great too.
It does seem like it will be more porn focused than Eruption though, so if you're in it for the story, then I wouldn't get your hopes up. They didn't really set up the setting at all beyond character exposition, so who knows about that Conservative society in the overview. The only conservative seeming thing was how they acted with forced respect towards the teacher.

The two scenes are pretty well animated too.
Unlike Eruption Imminent it does not seem like the MC has a vagina, so it might be a different preference.

The developer's technical skills for rendering and animations are excellent, the gameplay is fluid, linear and pleasant, so far the story is also good, generating accumulation and tension, but it's still early for a definitive judgment (the game is in its initial stage). We'll see how it evolves and if the update timing will allow us to follow it.

Great renders with good-looking LIs, but that's about all this has going for it as of 0.6. As others have stated, there's barely any content so the versioning is a bit misleading, and while the characters look good, they're a bit too shallow and quickly fall into very common VN tropes. On top of that, the story has to lean on porn logic way too much, in no small part due to the MC having classic futa horse dick, and yet somehow only having issues once she's 18 to not fall afoul of the rules. It just makes no sense, and that creeps into the choices that you are allowed to make and their consequences. A shame as I'm all for hot redheads, but it's a pass on this one and probably best to wait a few years and just check out the gallery for the scenes.

While still early in development in terms of story length, the visuals and characters are top tier and just downright eye candy. The MC is packing and I can't wait for her to rail her friends and family given the current tone of the story.

In addition, the animations are just outstanding and while there are only a handful, I can't wait to see how things play out. I'm going to be following and excitedly looking for updates for this project, and may even support it.

Hopefully the MC has a pussy, as Futa games where there is only a dick and balls might as well just be shemale which is clearly inferior as less parts less fun possibilities.

As of 0.6, this game is simply not that good.

The visuals are impressive and instantly eye-catching. The animations are smooth and bordering on stunning. Yet the other elements of the game—story, choices, relationships, character building, etc—are neonatal at best and a hot mess at worst.

For those who are looking for a more playable game, this game's versioning is deceptive, if not outright misleading. You would expect a game that's more than halfway to completion as of 0.6, but as of right now, this is barely a demo. It's barely a prologue. It's more a proof of concept.

The game is developed by someone who clearly understands how to render. The lighting, framing, focusing hold up against any game on this site. If visuals are your thing, it's worth giving this game a look, but be prepared to come out disappointed with everything else at this infantile stage of the game.

To put into perspective how little content there is in the game at present, there is one scene at school, effectively one scene as a family at home, two brief solo scenes, zero lewd scenes involving anyone else outside of one wardrobe malfunction revealing one breast. The entirety of the game takes place in less than 24 in game hours (including sleeping). You can get through it in about 15 minutes. It's that short. Yet it's an 0.6 release.

The premise in this game is cliched and super flawed, and yet wholly dependent upon its conceit. The MC is a dickgirl trying to hide a cock that's as big as her leg and supposedly gets hard a dozen times a day. Yet she's able to walk around town in a short dress. It makes zero sense. Somehow, no one in her own family outside of her parents know, even though they're clearly a very sexually-liberated group. They don't mind changing in front of each other, nor does the mom mind if her daughter catches her with her boobs out. Wait, just where is the conservatism?

The developer sets up that the MC is raised in "a conservative society" yet none of the visuals back it up. People are wearing plunging necklines, strapless tube tops, barely there crops, exposed cleavage, and casually barge in on each other while changing or naked. Are they acting like this is a world where trans people simply don't exist, or are so beyond comprehension that they can't reveal MC's grand secret to even members of her own family? Because Isaac is certainly rendered like someone who is not a cisgender male. Even the MC, who's supposed to be hiding this gargantuan (literally) secret, walks around in tight-fitting clothes as if a Bad Dragon would be easy to hide in a pencil skirt. The entire concept is pretty ridiculous off rip.

The characters aren't wholly much better. Hazel is the annoying little sister. Ivy is the quirky older sister. You have a sexpot for a mom and a world-traveling, probably lesbian grandma who have bimbo proportions. You have two best friends, a tomboy who obviously has the hots for MC and the aforementioned Isaac. The characters might have more depth, but given how little we see from them, it's all unrealized potential. We barely get to know these characters from the tiny glimpses we get of them, and what's there is mostly porn tropes.

For now, most of them are just excessively horny and over the top sexual. She's surrounded by these hot women who shove their cleavage in her face or literally straddle her in bed and we're supposed to believe that she only just awakened an attraction for them today? Like it's a suddenly new development?

We get a lot of dialogue choices, most of which are about whether or not the MC stands up for herself or is a total doormat, and yet none of it is really referenced at any point in the game so far. Just to make sure I didn't miss anything, I unpacked the scripts to see if there were any major branching paths I missed. There aren't. The choices thus far as entirely cosmetic.

The MC makes approximately one salient point in this entire demo of a prologue (that not all of her problems needs to be because of her dick, even if the developer insists on only showing the ones that are), and yet she has to apologize for standing her ground? Never once is she allowed to question why she has to keep everything a secret, even from the supposedly-conservative-but-totally-liberal women in her own family? Or that said family members have never seen her at the beach or in a swimsuit or simply walking around with this massive bulge in her pants? And if not all of her problems are related to her dick, why doesn't the developer make even a half-hearted attempt at showing some?

Most of the writing is ham-fisted and forced, and the conflicts are mostly self-inflicted. The MC is so sure that her family and her best friend wouldn't accept her if she reveals her big secret, even though nothing as written in the story suggests that they wouldn't. They don't ostracize her. They don't view her as weird or shuttered. They aren't pressuring her or trying to use her for social standing or clout. They're natural, playful, and seemingly genuinely interested in her. What indications does the developer give to suggest that the MC isn't overthinking this? The vast majority of the conflict is just the MC's incessant worrying and whining. It makes for a super shallow central conflict that's excessively drawn out.

At this point, the game is early enough in development, despite its deceptive versioning, that these things can be addressed. The visuals are beautiful and the premise, while ridiculous, can be managed if it's the only narrative faux pas. But it's currently extremely short, superficial, and lacks interesting characterization or meaningful choice-making.

Play it if you love the renders. But, as a game, it needs a lot more time in the oven.

Game with great potential!

10/10 Characters (Beautiful characters)
10/10 Story (Basic)
10/10 Quality (Excellent images/videos)
10/10 Gameplay mechanics
10/10 Translation (All games should have this wide choice of language, AI is there to make it easier)
10/10 Big dick (it's huge)

VERSION:. 0.6
SUMMARY: A good looking game that is just not there yet...
RATINGS: (out of 5):

NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context.

1. Model Visuals........................... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
2. General Visuals......................... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
3. Animation Quality....................... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
4. Character (Persona)..................... : ⭐⭐⭐
5. Story Quality & Pacing.................. : ⭐⭐⭐
6. Writing Quality & Dialogue.............. : ⭐⭐⭐
7. UI & Game-play Mechanics................ : ⭐⭐⭐
8. Playtime & General Quality.............. : ⭐⭐⭐
9. Sounds & Music...........................: ⭐⭐⭐
10. H-Content & Fetishes.................... : ⭐⭐⭐

Average: 36 of 50 possible points giving a 72% rating i.e. 3-4 stars.

PROS:

1. Very well done visually, the renders are very nice.
2. Animations are very good and high quality, smooth and shows effort.
3. Dialogue is not bad, structured, reads and flows well.
4. Sounds are decent, music, some additional sounds like phone, heels on floor are nice touches, but...(see cons)

CONS:

1. Regarding sounds, I am a fan of more sounds, more ambient, but particularly more lewd scene sounds, moans, gasps, those kinds of things that are sexy and push immersion just that bit further, particularly when the visual quality is so good.
2. Story...this is probably the biggest reason I didn't give the game the 4 stars, its just a bit too much bullshit for my liking and the plot just has too much porn logic. I will share my opinions below.
3. Short, not enough content to really enjoy it and development time may suffer due to the high quality renders.
4. More tags, I would also like to see more tags or future tags. This game has much potential and should also include at least pregnancy like games such as Milf Breeder and particularly Instinct Unleashed. (would have loved if IU looked like this game, it has a great plot and dialogue)

FINAL REMARKS, OPINIONS & SUGGESTIONS:

NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer.

• Regarding the plot and my gripe about it, the following tie into the plot issues:
  • The MC has a cock the size of her size of her arm, no joke, the same with balls being the size of her head or near enough. Now while this is all fantasy, I am sorry, you CANNOT HIDE THAT. Unless the MC folds it and shoves it into her ass, which wont work either im sure. Point is that I am not a fan of the cartoon physics where you can pull a car out of a top hat...
  • The MC acts like she has never seen her mothers tits or any female body parts, its as if she turned 18 (so we meet the minimum age requirements) and the next day (when we start playing) the MC discovers her infatuation with the female physique. The MC is horny for her family and its like its a new thing. News flash! puberty happens around 12ish years old, so you start dealing with those feelings early on, the MC should be aware of this, if anything the player should get more back story of when these feelings of desires, lust etc started, particularly for the family.
  • The next part is that the character is a FUTA, now lets believe its all true, you get futas, ok, but how is it, that in the MCs life of 18 years now, the siblings never saw that massive cock the MC is sporting? How is it that everyone, save the mother who gave birth to her is aware of that giant dick between the MCs legs? This is just a bit too unbelievable.
  • Per above points, the game should ease the player into the MCs frame of mind, concerns, dreams, fears and importantly, desires and they need to make sense as things that have been coming for a while.
  • The MC family and close friends being completely unaware of the MCs physical condition i.e. 3rd leg, is too unbelievable to simply accept, and again, more story, or even phobias could be introduced as excuse to the family and friends as to why the MC is aloof, has baggy clothes, needs constant privacy, is never seen in a bathing suit (poor MC never been in pool, never had a sleep over with girl friends) <-- see why its unbelievable? Again, introduce this in a better way, with story as the MC now has had enough and wants to get out the "closet" so to speak, then this starts to become more believable and thus more kinky, more sexy and fun for the player IMO.
• While I do believe in quality of quantity, I am a little worried that the VN will take a long time to really progress and have a good amount of content simply because the content in the updates are so limited. No doubt due to trying to keep to high quality, but players will lose interest as there is not a decent amount and progression happening per update IMO.

TLDR:

If you can look past the above mentioned porn logic bullshit, this is for all intents and purposes a very good VN, simply because it will get your juices flowing on its high fidelity renders and animations alone. It would do better with decent lewd sounds for that extra immersion and this game deserves that kind of quality for it high visual fidelity. The only real draw back is the story/plot and how it simply disregards what I believe is too obvious to ignore, placing this game into a fapper category and not a more balanced one where the story is actually good and even daresay, plausible.

This game will get 4 stars easily and I may just give it that at a later stage when I update this review. Till then I will wait and see, I doubt it will change much, but if updates at least provide more good content then I can potentially move to 4 stars. Still great VN so far, well done.

I really wanted to give this more stars, but calling this version 0.6 is super deceptive. There is barely any content at all, and for lewd content there is only 2 scenes of the MC jerking off. It would make more sense for this to be a .01 demo.

The renders are really good, and the animations for those 2 jerking scenes are very smooth. I suspect when this gets to real lewd scenes they'll be excellent.

Unfortunately my recommendation would be to not use your time on this game until it gets many versions later so that there is actual progression and content.

Really beautiful characters and the story pacing is good so far. The auto play scene seemed a little unnecessary maybe, but I didn't mind it too much. I like the huge cock, hopefully we can see some self sucking eventually

Perfect in every way so far, but lacking in real content since it's so new. All female characters and especially the main character are very beautiful with attractive bodies. She has a relatable personality and the story has a healthy amount of suspense. It has great sound, animations and character models

Ok, this is very hot, great incest/futa coontent.
The models are absolutely hot, the MC is very cute and sexy. And the renders are magnificient.
The dialogs and the story service the sexyness so I can't ask for more.

I'm just surprised this is a 0.6 build and there is like 15/20 mns of content, the current status wouldn't even match a prologue. So I am not sure how the devs wants to approach this and if the build numbers are suposed to match progress (will 1.0 be the end?)

I'm giving a 5/5 even if there is not much content, because the content there is completely to my liking. Nothing to complain about there.
Good luck dev!
PS: I am also subbing on subscribestar as encouragement.

One of the best games I've played in a long time. The renders are fantastic and I like the writing so far. I think her horse dick could be toned down some, but I'd play and enjoy the game either way. Too much other good stuff. I can't wait to see more of this game.

Review of version: v0.6

Package Perfect has just jumped to the top the list of futa protag games for me. Obviously it's a great looking game with high quality renders, beautifully crafted unique characters and smooth animations. But those are just the superficial aspects of the game. There are plenty of good looking games out there nowadays that fall flat when it comes to the story or writing making them a glorified ctrl simulator until you get to the saucy bits. I'm glad to report that is not the case here.

The story, writing and character interactions are by far my favorite thing about the game. Every character so far has a unique personality and feels lively when they interact instead of the flat lifeless ones you might find elsewhere. Sure the characters are a bit tropey with them fitting into their archetypes like the; Tomboy bestfriend, cool older sister, overprotective mom, annoying little sister etc, but they are written exceptionally well in those roles. They don't feel like just those things that's just part of who they are, and that's great!

Another point of praise is the actual family dynamic that just might be the most complete and wholesome one I've ever seen in an AVN before. Like they actually feel like a family instead of just people living together. Also the dad is alive?! And he actually seems to be a good dude that cares for his family's wellbeing and happiness?! In 2025!?

I can't wait to get more of this game! I will be (im)patiently waiting for future update! Good luck and good fortunes Lewtopia!

P.s. Hazel is absoluely perfect! Never seen a better annoying little sister in a game before. Can't wait to snack on that peach

Big fan of the stupidly huge cock, just needs some scenes really using the thing. renders are great characters aren't the most original in the world, but they look good enough that I don't really care. And it's crazy well animated.

[DEMO]

Promising. The premise is simple, the renders are gorgeous.
Lets just hope for raunchy scenes, spicy situations and whatnot.

That massive dong is a little too much, but let's see, maybe it becomes a plot point.

It may just be a demo but damn, it's already off to a good start. The characters are entertaining and believable, if a bit cliche at times but nothing wrong with that. But they do seem like genuine people. I already have some theories about the whole family dynamic... but I'd rather not get ahead of myself. All this in just five/six months? That's impressive. The graphics are just astounding and I don't say that lightly.
Now that I've praised the hell out of it, I do have one issue with it, apart from it being too short for how entertaining it was. And that issue is with the size of the ding-dong... it's a bit too big. Not horribly but still... maybe half or at least two-thirds of the size that ding-dong is now, along with the dangling chestnuts, would make it much better. But even with that, it's not a detriment considerable enough to make me not like the demo. Particularly when the characters look so good.

So far pretty good story and characters. You don't see this kind of game very often especially now with this combination of tags. And when you do, it is probably sandbox.

Art looked great, sound sounds great. I will however echo what other people have said also. I would tone down that dick a lot. If you see this review, please at least consider asking your subs if they would like that. EDIT: I would do so while the game is still in the early stages. Fewer possible renders to redo. But again that would depend on your subs and their taste.

All in all, definitely worth checking out, for sure.

Not a fan of the stupidly big cock, but the A+++++ quality animations make up for it. Just a demo so far but I think this game has a massive (no pun intended) potential. The models are gorgeous looking as well.

This demo is honestly pretty amazing. While it's too early to say whether this is good or not I'll go ahead and say this game is PERFECT for me in not just the saucy stuff but also the story and premise.
I've been hoping for a good futa vn with an interesting story for a while now and this might just scratch the itch for me, so dev I hope you the best in the future and don't abandon this please!