VN - Ren'Py - Pale Carnations [Ch.4 Up.6 Public] [Mutt & Jeff]

  1. 5.00 star(s)

    cloudmoon

    review for chapter 1:

    It's late so I'm not going to go into to much detail.

    This is an amazingly polished first entry for a game. The production value is rock solid. The renders are all top quality. Though there wasn't really any animation, the variation of the still shots were done so well that I never felt like anything was missing.

    I like pretty much all the girls, even the one muscly girl who I initially thought I wouldn't.

    The writing is really good. Perfect English and compelling scenes. Good build of tension and even a few times where I found myself laughing along with the characters on screen.

    I can see the subject mater being a bit hard for some people to read simply because this is not the type of game for people who want a harem where you're the only one who gets to touch a girl. Usually that's the type of game I like to play, but what I've seen here is enough to pull me out of my comfort zone and still enjoy it.

    The gameplay is interesting. I'm not sure how much the opening traits you pick in the story will actually influence the flow of the novel, but it does grant you different choices you can/cannot make. And it seems as if the choices you do make in story aren't trivial... though it's uncertain at this point if it's possible to completely lock yourself out of a route with a girl or not.

    All in all, this is one of the most polished western VNs I have ever played. From the renders to the UI everything looks like a finished product, instead of a first chapter place holder.

    The only reason you should not play this game is if you absolutely cannot stomach the idea of girls that the protagonist might sleep with sleeping with someone else. (Note: this is not NTR. The protagonist isn't in a relationship with these girls either.) Also if you hate BDSM, then probably not the game for you. (Though so far they've focused on the humiliation part of things more than causing pain. I don't know if that will continue).

    If none of that is a deal breaker, absolutely play this game. If you're on the fence, try it anyways.
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    SsakaSsraka

    Such a good start! There is a lot of content in first chapter. Dialogs are interesting such as story. Yes, the plot is very promising, can't wait for second chapter. Renders are quality made. Abilty to watch a characters profile is a good idea. 5 out of 5!
  3. 5.00 star(s)

    DSTORQUE

    Fantastic first build with lots of content, great models, and solid writing. I'm not a fan of BDSM and domination, but there seems to still be plenty of other content and more loving paths to take. I hope there will be a good balance so that fans of both styles can get what they want out of the game. So far you are striking a great balance. Can't wait to see the next release. You've got yourself a patron!
  4. 5.00 star(s)

    TheDisgracedOne

    Review for the first release (chapter 1)

    it's really incredible ! i never saw a first release with all this content !

    the story is good, the renders too, the content is enjoyable and diverse, you have vanilla, bdsm, light femdom.

    i recommend this game, and i hope we will get a lot more content.