RPGM WIP Paradise Succubus Demo / パラダイス・サキュバス

xiixoz

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To keep things brief, the link to the translated beta will be located down below. It's getting late and I've got to go after I upload this, so I won't be around if there are any issues, however, if you encounter a bug, post it here and I'll work on it this weekend. I'll also include a list of issues that I'm aware of, you might want to read through it to be aware of some of the current issues. I play-tested it again just to make sure everything worked and realized how terrible the text cutoff is for skills, so this weekend I'll probably work on that along with whatever bugs people report.

Also, as a quick question, which do people prefer when referencing the various species in the game?
1. Creation Species, Destruction Species, Chaos Species
2. Souseishu, Hakaishu, and Kontonshu

I went with the second option for the translation so far, but now I'm leaning towards the first option as it would easily convey the thematic natures of the various species to the reader. I kind of wanted to keep the Japanese flair, but I've come across a lot of strange Welsh, Japanese, and Egyptian words, and I don't want add even more unfamiliar words that people will probably not easily understand.

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another bug i noticed, the miniboss succubus in the 2nd zone hakai succubus (the one that summons flames / matches) cant summon minions, she keeps trying every turn but they just dont come out, gonna check soon if the robots one has the same problem
 
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qwedsa78

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To keep things brief, the link to the translated beta will be located down below. It's getting late and I've got to go after I upload this, so I won't be around if there are any issues, however, if you encounter a bug, post it here and I'll work on it this weekend. I'll also include a list of issues that I'm aware of, you might want to read through it to be aware of some of the current issues. I play-tested it again just to make sure everything worked and realized how terrible the text cutoff is for skills, so this weekend I'll probably work on that along with whatever bugs people report.

Also, as a quick question, which do people prefer when referencing the various species in the game?
1. Creation Species, Destruction Species, Chaos Species
2. Souseishu, Hakaishu, and Kontonshu

I went with the second option for the translation so far, but now I'm leaning towards the first option as it would easily convey the thematic natures of the various species to the reader. I kind of wanted to keep the Japanese flair, but I've come across a lot of strange Welsh, Japanese, and Egyptian words, and I don't want add even more unfamiliar words that people will probably not easily understand.

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A lot of the h-attacks seem broken, the most basic destruction succubus I was getting text for the attack succeeding and it would just do nothing, I think this was the case for the creation area sarcophagus
The Strong fire succubus never summons familiars.
I had the judas costume in the first playthrough, the water enemy's h-attack was missing the image layer for Arthur -but that might just not be implemented yet, I can't recall.
Image overlay was also broken for Mina in the first half of her grab attack.

Of note in consistencies, when Violette goes over the basic "classes" they don't match up at all.

Thanks as always for your work.
 
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AceCyclone

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Thank you for this! :) In regards to the question, I will second the poster before me. I think the english version works better as in terms of design there isn't really any japanese in the game I feel. So a "western" translation would fit better. As you said it seems to be a sort of fantasy medieval setting set in something like europe.

EDIT: Okay, I encountered a bug already real early. It seems like some enemies lewd attacks don't seem to do anything. Like there is no animation, no damage, anything. So far this has been the case for Hakai Succubus and first boss.
another bug i noticed, the miniboss succubus in the 2nd zone hakai succubus (the one that summons flames / matches) cant summon minions, she keeps trying every turn but they just dont come out, gonna check soon if the robots one has the same problem
A lot of the h-attacks seem broken, the most basic destruction succubus I was getting text for the attack succeeding and it would just do nothing, I think this was the case for the creation area sarcophagus
The Strong fire succubus never summons familiars.
I had the judas costume in the first playthrough, the water enemy's h-attack was missing the image layer for Arthur -but that might just not be implemented yet, I can't recall.
Image overlay was also broken for Mina in the first half of her grab attack.

Of note in consistencies, when Violette goes over the basic "classes" they don't match up at all.

Thanks as always for your work.
Thanks for reporting the bugs, I've detected 454 lines related to various events that need to be corrected, though I want to look through it a bit more before making any changes. Overall, it's just a lot of simple word replacement fixes, nothing major. As for the image issue, I honestly don't know what might be causing the image to not show, I'll check out Mina's and her event to see what they have in common, it's probably related to something that shouldn't have been translated that's causing the issue. I'll boot up the Japanese version to see if the scene is fully implemented when I get to checking it out.

Again, thanks for reporting the issues, it really speeds up with identifying the problems. I want to get the worst bugs fixed before Myosotis comes out later this month.
 
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For those of you wondering, she is the annoying quiz Goblin succubus from the previous game, all grown up, in this game she serves as a merchant of sorts for cross dressing materials.
You can activate something new at the start of the game that will grant you a ticket.
I encountered her and she joined up with the other 2 Goblins I had met but she didn't offer any kind of shop, has anyone been able to get her shop for cross dressing materials or is that not implemented yet?
 

BILIBILIMST

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To keep things brief, the link to the translated beta will be located down below. It's getting late and I've got to go after I upload this, so I won't be around if there are any issues, however, if you encounter a bug, post it here and I'll work on it this weekend. I'll also include a list of issues that I'm aware of, you might want to read through it to be aware of some of the current issues. I play-tested it again just to make sure everything worked and realized how terrible the text cutoff is for skills, so this weekend I'll probably work on that along with whatever bugs people report.

Also, as a quick question, which do people prefer when referencing the various species in the game?
1. Creation Species, Destruction Species, Chaos Species
2. Souseishu, Hakaishu, and Kontonshu

I went with the second option for the translation so far, but now I'm leaning towards the first option as it would easily convey the thematic natures of the various species to the reader. I kind of wanted to keep the Japanese flair, but I've come across a lot of strange Welsh, Japanese, and Egyptian words, and I don't want add even more unfamiliar words that people will probably not easily understand.

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If it's just the name of the species, I personally prefer the first one, as the original text tends to be more colloquial in expression
 

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Thanks for reporting the bugs, I've detected 454 lines related to various events that need to be corrected, though I want to look through it a bit more before making any changes. Overall, it's just a lot of simple word replacement fixes, nothing major. As for the image issue, I honestly don't know what might be causing the image to not show, I'll check out Mina's and her event to see what they have in common, it's probably related to something that shouldn't have been translated that's causing the issue. I'll boot up the Japanese version to see if the scene is fully implemented when I get to checking it out.

Again, thanks for reporting the issues, it really speeds up with identifying the problems. I want to get the worst bugs fixed before Myosotis comes out later this month.
Sorry to pile on the bug reports, but it seems that

- The second boss succubus in the first area only ever uses her 'Power up' ability after falling below half health.

- It is impossible to visit areas besides the "High Succubus". Even after being unlocked they don't show up on the map

This is just me messing around by myself so I can't verify that it isn't just on my end, of course.
 
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AceCyclone

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Alright, this patch should fix the issues with the enemy attacks, I tested it out on a handful of enemies along with some bosses in the recollection room and the h-attacks and attack patterns seem to function as intended. I also noticed some other images that I didn't translate, so I'll include them in the next patch as I look into some other issues. If you suspect you've encountered any bugs or issues, please leave a comment here as it helps speed up the progress in me locating them.

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Edit: The file names in the patch were incorrect, so they weren't overwriting the old files when applied. I re-uploaded them with their proper file names, so that should be fixed now.

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whateverAme

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After playing, there does not seem to be any visual difference between the different species on the initial selection screen.
I am referring to how they would be colour coded in the JP version, allowing you to decide what species to fight
 
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Some enemies don't have their erotic attacks mid fight, at least the pink machines in the purple/femboy route don't function, even when you intentionally let them land a hit, dodge, or fail to dodge, they do a bit of damage and nothing else, no interactions and such. Glad to see you back Ace, thanks for the update to the update lol. Translations are really appreciated.
 

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Some enemies don't have their erotic attacks mid fight, at least the pink machines in the purple/femboy route don't function, even when you intentionally let them land a hit, dodge, or fail to dodge, they do a bit of damage and nothing else, no interactions and such. Glad to see you back Ace, thanks for the update to the update lol. Translations are really appreciated.
Thanks for reporting the bug, you're correct with certain skills not working, most if not all enemy skill names with an apostrophe are effected at the moment. It's been fixed and will be included in the patch tomorrow. I've been working on the stuff people have been reporting, along with fixing cutoff text mainly.
 
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Thanks for reporting the bug, you're correct with certain skills not working, most if not all enemy skill names with an apostrophe are effected at the moment. It's been fixed and will be included in the patch tomorrow. I've been working on the stuff people have been reporting, along with fixing cutoff text mainly.
Thanks, looking forward to seeing the finished product. You planning on moving over to any projects once the full game is released (hopefully in a couple months) and you finish the translation?
 

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Here is another patch that fixes some of the things people have reported, along with some other fixes. I'll include the list of fixes down below, and thanks again to everyone that has reported bugs they've ran into. I want to primarily fix the variable text insertions within passages, cutoff text for skills, and some untranslated synergy stuff in the menu for the next patch. I think once those issues are fixed, I'll then move on to an in-depth proofreading / playtesting of the game.

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Thanks, looking forward to seeing the finished product. You planning on moving over to any projects once the full game is released (hopefully in a couple months) and you finish the translation?
I plan on translating the following two games:
1.
2.

I think Myosotis will be coming out the soonest, with it coming out at end of this month or early next month, so I will be switching over to work on that when it releases.
 
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Here is another patch that fixes some of the things people have reported, along with some other fixes. I'll include the list of fixes down below, and thanks again to everyone that has reported bugs they've ran into. I want to primarily fix the variable text insertions within passages, cutoff text for skills, and some untranslated synergy stuff in the menu for the next patch. I think once those issues are fixed, I'll then move on to an in-depth proofreading / playtesting of the game.

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I plan on translating the following two games:
1.
2.

I think Myosotis will be coming out the soonest, with it coming out at end of this month or early next month, so I will be switching over to work on that when it releases.
Thanks, you make the games significantly more enjoyable than just a regular machine translator would. :)
 
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To keep things brief, the link to the translated beta will be located down below. It's getting late and I've got to go after I upload this, so I won't be around if there are any issues, however, if you encounter a bug, post it here and I'll work on it this weekend. I'll also include a list of issues that I'm aware of, you might want to read through it to be aware of some of the current issues. I play-tested it again just to make sure everything worked and realized how terrible the text cutoff is for skills, so this weekend I'll probably work on that along with whatever bugs people report.

Also, as a quick question, which do people prefer when referencing the various species in the game?
1. Creation Species, Destruction Species, Chaos Species
2. Souseishu, Hakaishu, and Kontonshu

I went with the second option for the translation so far, but now I'm leaning towards the first option as it would easily convey the thematic natures of the various species to the reader. I kind of wanted to keep the Japanese flair, but I've come across a lot of strange Welsh, Japanese, and Egyptian words, and I don't want add even more unfamiliar words that people will probably not easily understand.

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*I'm aware of the enemies' skills being broken, I'll have a fix out sometime later today if all goes well.

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Thank you so much for making this translation!