Well written, and most importantly, understands what choices should be. This game doesn't make the player feel they should constantly "roll back" to change their choices. Each choice is fleshed out enough that there doesn't seem to be the "correct" path so to speak.
As a nice inclusion, the game contains a glossary in case some of the ancient Greek terminology (names for clothing and such) is lost on the reader. Transformation options can be avoided pretty easily.
Formatting could use some work. Spoken parts are in quotes but they tend to blend in with the rest of the paragraph. Typical formatting (new line for a new speaker, indented speech lines) would help the readability a ton. Not a major problem by any means, but worth mentioning. Further, using line breaks to separate paths when describing a room would ease understanding as well.
A few readability complaints aside, this is a strong and sexy game, with enough content to justify a couple playthroughs or more.
As a nice inclusion, the game contains a glossary in case some of the ancient Greek terminology (names for clothing and such) is lost on the reader. Transformation options can be avoided pretty easily.
Formatting could use some work. Spoken parts are in quotes but they tend to blend in with the rest of the paragraph. Typical formatting (new line for a new speaker, indented speech lines) would help the readability a ton. Not a major problem by any means, but worth mentioning. Further, using line breaks to separate paths when describing a room would ease understanding as well.
A few readability complaints aside, this is a strong and sexy game, with enough content to justify a couple playthroughs or more.