VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Patio City [Demo] [SmexyLab]

  1. 3.00 star(s)

    ut1stgear

    Giving it a 3 because as the dev said it's a demo. The renders are good but the story and writing needs a lot of work. It's a good beginning but needs to have the logic flow reworked because it jumps around a lot, seems choppy moving from place to place. I can see some thought has been put into this. As the dev said it's a demo but bears watching as it develops. Good luck.