Don't know what to do with all this funds? There is some major priorities that has to be made going forward.
My biggest dislike of this game is the randomization of the girls via the images and gifs. Like looking at Laura which she is a red head, but one of the gifs is Remy Lacroix a brunette porn star. There is enough porn/amateur/many vids/only fans and similar content floating around the web to be able to make complete characters without needing to weave in totally different people for the images/videos.
To save on file size you may want to try out having the images as only webp, and the videos as only webm.
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For some player feedback.
Ease of player navigation would be helpful. What I meant by this is the players having to scroll and click for every action can be a bit heavy on wrists, so a fix for this is to use number keys to quick choose. If you could use the numbers about the letters or the numpad to go through options it would save on scrolling, especially during repeat events. Also making the text that you can click stand out a bit more would be great, whether it is a glow, or anything to differentiate from the MC's talking color. A game that does this that you might be able to get the code from is "College Daze" another good game to check out is probably "Incubus City" since it has a partially similar extreme content structure. Honestly I would suggest playing most of the HTML games and borrowing or riffing on their good stuff.
Allowing player to decide talking colors of the characters would be nice. Also having their names or minor portraits when they speak so players can keep who they are straight.
MC seems to have more energy than is mentioned in the day, since his 5th can go beyond "night" then it just goes blank.
The jump in states is a bit jarring. Like the Luna bored and grinding on a pillow thing can then instantly go into Luna crying when you visit her room. Maybe put a day between things that are so jarring. Similar would be doing both tutor and punishment in the same day.
Some of the "New Texts" seem to be empty, when clicked it shows absolutely nothing except "return" but the "New Text!" doesn't go away.
The cheerleaders image in college walking around is a bit large since it makes you have to scroll right to see it.
When Ella asks to be MC's GF, MC answers in her color. Similar happens with Luna when she is bored. Same when Luna takes you outside.
All the game text needs to be put through something like grammarly.
Make save files not use the text as their name, so it doesn't stretch the menu.
The hints page should be whatever is left for the player to find rather than general stuff. Especially to know when you have finished all the content.
Would be nice if the RNG on an event would would prevent it from being chosen again, (AKA sampling without replacement good info on RNG
A removal of "likes you more" once they cross the threshold or even a change up in the text since talking to people where they act like it is early in the relationship is a bit weird once you are far past that.
It would be nice if player could decide on where to cum, or how to refer to the girls.
To save on file size you may want to try out having the images as only webp, and the videos as only webm.
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For some player feedback.
Ease of player navigation would be helpful. What I meant by this is the players having to scroll and click for every action can be a bit heavy on wrists, so a fix for this is to use number keys to quick choose. If you could use the numbers about the letters or the numpad to go through options it would save on scrolling, especially during repeat events. Also making the text that you can click stand out a bit more would be great, whether it is a glow, or anything to differentiate from the MC's talking color. A game that does this that you might be able to get the code from is "College Daze" another good game to check out is probably "Incubus City" since it has a partially similar extreme content structure. Honestly I would suggest playing most of the HTML games and borrowing or riffing on their good stuff.
Allowing player to decide talking colors of the characters would be nice. Also having their names or minor portraits when they speak so players can keep who they are straight.
MC seems to have more energy than is mentioned in the day, since his 5th can go beyond "night" then it just goes blank.
The jump in states is a bit jarring. Like the Luna bored and grinding on a pillow thing can then instantly go into Luna crying when you visit her room. Maybe put a day between things that are so jarring. Similar would be doing both tutor and punishment in the same day.
Some of the "New Texts" seem to be empty, when clicked it shows absolutely nothing except "return" but the "New Text!" doesn't go away.
The cheerleaders image in college walking around is a bit large since it makes you have to scroll right to see it.
When Ella asks to be MC's GF, MC answers in her color. Similar happens with Luna when she is bored. Same when Luna takes you outside.
All the game text needs to be put through something like grammarly.
Make save files not use the text as their name, so it doesn't stretch the menu.
The hints page should be whatever is left for the player to find rather than general stuff. Especially to know when you have finished all the content.
Would be nice if the RNG on an event would would prevent it from being chosen again, (AKA sampling without replacement good info on RNG
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(specifically for 13 minutes in)A removal of "likes you more" once they cross the threshold or even a change up in the text since talking to people where they act like it is early in the relationship is a bit weird once you are far past that.
It would be nice if player could decide on where to cum, or how to refer to the girls.
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Thanks for the feedback! I agree with a lot of your critiques, many of them stem from them simply not being a priority - not from lack of wanting to implement them. This goes for some of the presentation issues that you mentioned, that could probably be fixed - but not without extensive research on my part, since I'm a novice when it comes to working with Twine. Some of the presentation issues are code typos and the like, and some of those are already fixed in my current wip build. I've also rescaled images to reduce scrolling, as well as fixed the text bug.
I agree with your point about RNG. It's something I've thought a lot about myself, and I might adress it in the future, but again - this is something I need more scripting knowledge to be able to implement. In regards to using webm I've been thinking about it, and I might test it out in an upcoming version - my main concern is that it doesn't seem to loop by default like gifs do. I'd have to look into it more.
To make a long story short: I want to do many of the things you suggest, but in the interest of producing a better game experience each version I'm prioritizing content over presentation until I at the very least can fill out the empty areas of the game.
Hi guys, im download and playing on xiaomi redmi note 10, when im completed download and play but not loading image, someone help pls 
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If your phone has a browser it supports html. I'm not sure if your os can preserve and access the map structure properly. Img-folder should be in the same folder as the game.Hi guys, im download and playing on xiaomi redmi note 10, when im completed download and play but not loading image, someone help pls
Huge disclaimer that I haven't tried running a html game on a phone.
can u drop first version of the game with ur mod?cuz on 1.1 some things arent working
UPD: it doesn't matter, I figured it out
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yeah that sound like making a game
.. though how does ur mod work ... i mean ...u added this and that... pics, girls... but it is just a .html file without multimedia... where does visual content come from ... never seen that sort of thing before....
All the pics are linked to internet pages. Which is why you need to be online to play it.
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Most are taken from gif-sharing sites like tumblr, redgifs, some subreddits etc. You can always try reverse image searching. But the short answer is: I don't have the sauce.
What are the Lexi quests? How do I fuck her? I've managed to get the text but don't know where to go from there.
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The 19th.
Use "Make plans" in the phone menu once she has texted you.
Hey my dude beautiful game so far.
I would suggest creating a discord as well. Much easier for us to track the updates of your game and for you to connect with your playerbase.
I would suggest creating a discord as well. Much easier for us to track the updates of your game and for you to connect with your playerbase.