The art is great. But my god the writing is genuinely terrible - the main character is pretty insufferabley douchey and the girls are such doormats when he's being openly pervy - even for a town that is supposedly 5:1 female to male. At least have a small amount of lead up into it - a bit of casual flirting goes a long way into making things at least a little believeable. Making 3 game of thrones references to 3 different characters within a 5 minute demo experience is also pretty cringe. Especially since he literally acts like he doesn't know what the book is to the librarian.