Just my 2 cents about the game... Please consider this as just my opinion, as it may vary from you guys here...
The drunk Jess:
Oh this could have been used to such a good potential! While I get the urination kink, it looked forcefully added as a scene. You could rather have had set up the scene in a way to show Danny getting cuts in his hands while prepping food for Jess (too many renders, I know) and since Danny was unable to use his hands to pee, this scene would have had made more sense!
Then during midnight, you could have shown a horny Jess trying to go back to Danny's room when she checks out his weiner's outline through the blanket, and tries to question her taboo as she gets hornier and touches herself. Then later on, before sleeping, she ends up sending a picture which Danny finds out next morning, but the second picture which Jess sent was found to be deleted. (This sets up a sexual tension between the both)
Doctor's check-up:
In my opinion, the handjob was too forced and unnecessary. Instead you could have shown Jess getting jealous of the doctor as she held Danny's penis.
When the doc mentioned that she needs his penis to be less flaccid, Jess could have secretly teased her tits out behind the doc, only for the doc to think that it was because of her that Danny got hard. *Insert Jess giving a proud smirk*
Yoga:
Since this was just a set up of Yoga part 2, I would just say that I loved how it was set up.
Home cleaning:
This was seriously the best of your works till date. THE BESSSTT! While I don't intend to undermine Cloud's work, this was better than his work. This scene is what makes me want even more of what's going to happen.
Overall, your artwork is a million times better than most of the professionals out there. The way her tight tops struggle to hold her breast, the dynamics was almost near to perfect!
Again, please consider this as a constructive criticism, because I see you pulling this game to a much justified exposure it deserves. Being a beginner yourself, you have managed to outperform most of the creators on this platform. But you would need to work more on the story creation, because this game is all about the sexual tension, the tease and the grind between Jess and Danny.
Cheers man! Keep it up!
And Kudos to
Terminatorgames as well to be keeping the art alive for this game. (My apologies if I missed anyone)