VN Ren'Py Phone Story [v0.2] [Taptus]

[Taptus]

I suggest writing your own synopsis or editing this AI made one, this reads like amazon erotic books for women. Completely wrong demographic and way too much purple prose.

Do you intend to make it netorare with hidden sex? aka is the mc not knowing that ntr is happening and it's only hinted by the interactions she send?

Thank you so much for the feedback, yes, I did use AI for that description. I rewrote it, now it's all about game

 

[Taptus]

I wish there were some non NTR phone/sexting games. the premise could be super hot.

The game has a branch in which you can prevent the corruption of your wife and keep your marriage traditional.

 

[ftlv261]

Good start.

 

[Sengokus]

AI CG, Phone Netorare

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks

 

[Ashoolar1989]

enjoyed the start of this game looking forward to seeing more

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[linus.quotes]

Yeah another one, let's go! =D

 

[theonlyondgreat]

So many of these Phone NTR games seem to pop up, but still I seem to try them all

 

[MixQQ]

So many of these Phone NTR games seem to pop up, but still I seem to try them all

yea, they quickly become popular, good money maker. Just like AI NTS avns. We will see how long this trend will continue

 

[desertoo]

Very good game for now. I just would like to have a walkthrough because i noticed that there is a scene that i unlocked with

Spoiler: Sex scene

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but with other choices more ntr obvious you do not unlock. I had to play 3 times to find the good combination

 

[Firaxius]

Okay, first things first, the beginning was pretty annoying, the bitching about problems, god I almost wanted to stop the game because it, but then it started getting better, weirdly not sure how to feel about the wife, one side she sounded like a bitch and then suddenly she sounded like "I want only you girl" and when Kira in the picture she sounded like "I need more then you" girl. To much personaly change in a short period.

About the messages, they miss date stamps which could least indicate when it another day and if it morning, noon, afternoon, evening and night.

Now about the concept, somewhat already covered several times, some hacker help bf spy on his woman, best friend of woman help corrupt her, not sure that will make this VN more interesting then the others. Also the pictures aren't always the same girl, least not in the beginning.

Overall it wasn't to bad, the idea of using ren'py is interesting, so will keep an eye out on future update, just hope it won't become a repeat of the others already out there, because that would make this VN somewhat less unique.

 

[CrysusPariah]

Looking forward to how this game develops. Great start for a first try!

 

[Taptus]

Very good game for now. I just would like to have a walkthrough because i noticed that there is a scene that i unlocked with

Spoiler: Sex scene

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but with other choices more ntr obvious you do not unlock. I had to play 3 times to find the good combination

Thank you for your feedback! In the future there will be a point system that allows you to better control the choice of an answer

 

[Taptus]

Okay, first things first, the beginning was pretty annoying, the bitching about problems, god I almost wanted to stop the game because it, but then it started getting better, weirdly not sure how to feel about the wife, one side she sounded like a bitch and then suddenly she sounded like "I want only you girl" and when Kira in the picture she sounded like "I need more then you" girl. To much personaly change in a short period.

About the messages, they miss date stamps which could least indicate when it another day and if it morning, noon, afternoon, evening and night.

Now about the concept, somewhat already covered several times, some hacker help bf spy on his woman, best friend of woman help corrupt her, not sure that will make this VN more interesting then the others. Also the pictures aren't always the same girl, least not in the beginning.

Overall it wasn't to bad, the idea of using ren'py is interesting, so will keep an eye out on future update, just hope it won't become a repeat of the others already out there, because that would make this VN somewhat less unique.

Hello! Thank you for your feedback! Yes, the beginning of the game is deliberately made as "ordinary" as possible with everyday problems such as fixing a crane and other things. Depraved girlfriend and hacker are really very popular ways of "lazy" corruption of the main character's girlfriend, but I will try to create alternative branches of corruption in this game, but they will be a longer achievable effect. The task of this part of the game was to throw fishing rods at various branches of development and create a common beginning, from which the game will develop

 

[Taptus]

initially a very promising game, maybe a little slow, but the story and the plot seemed convincing, then the ruin of the story, the blackmailer, the threats, so from a couple game, a blackmail tragedy, failed for me

I thought that someone would not like this hackneyed cliche with a hacker. Initially, I thought to make an alternative branch of communication with him, where the main character sends him to fuck and then this character does not appear in the game, but since I did not plan his appearance in the prologue, I did not make such a branch here. However, this option will definitely be available in the future.

 

[Taptus]

initially a very promising game, maybe a little slow, but the story and the plot seemed convincing, then the ruin of the story, the blackmailer, the threats, so from a couple game, a blackmail tragedy, failed for me

You gave 2 points to my game, saddened that the game did not suit you. However, in the future there will be changes that will make this game for your taste too. If you don't mind changing the rating or deleting it, please.

 

[Benutzername]

Yes....

 

[Taptus]

Another Phone game that the dev doesn't care to make a mobile version to play on a smartphone. Sigh...

Hello! An android version has been added. All new versions will be released with it, I figured it out, it's easy to convert there

 

[davidgamer311]

Very good game for now. I just would like to have a walkthrough because i noticed that there is a scene that i unlocked with

Spoiler: Sex scene

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but with other choices more ntr obvious you do not unlock. I had to play 3 times to find the good combination

how do you get that scene ?