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Of course, its not just to point that I do that feedback. I'm well aware good things takes time to become better !
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As I'm not a dev, I'm not sure how much trouble it would be to make it an option players can toggle, but that might be one approach.
That said, I still think the wording of the choices needs a look-over.
- Jun 7, 2018
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I don't know if I'm tripping or what, but how the *fuuuck* do you get F95.png to appear in the game (the one where she's kneeling in a bathroom stall)? Wanted to know the story context for that, but I've tried every conversation option from a bit before that part to a bit after, and could not get it to show up.
Also, I'll keep pounding the same drum as I do with all the other NTR phone games. I personally enjoy their (narrative) context, I never focus enough on details to notice missing or surplus fingers or whatever, and the wives/girlfriends themselves are always hot, so that puts this game on my watchlist as well. The only niggle is - as always - that the dialogue could be written a to flow a bit more naturally. The conversational context is always pretty easy to understand, so you could even just try and get people from this forum to help with proofreading and tightening up the writing a bit (if you haven't already).
Beyond that, good work so far, and there's a good bit of content already, though I did only find/notice this game today, when it's already on version 0.3 (so I jumped in with all the content it has to offer all at once), but it's got a good build-up so far. I especially love how Lisa keeps going back and forth between her "desires" and wanting to be faithful. There's also a good bit of actual consequence to dialogue options, where you can miss out on entire series of pictures if you pick the "wrong" option, which I think is good!
Also, I'll keep pounding the same drum as I do with all the other NTR phone games. I personally enjoy their (narrative) context, I never focus enough on details to notice missing or surplus fingers or whatever, and the wives/girlfriends themselves are always hot, so that puts this game on my watchlist as well. The only niggle is - as always - that the dialogue could be written a to flow a bit more naturally. The conversational context is always pretty easy to understand, so you could even just try and get people from this forum to help with proofreading and tightening up the writing a bit (if you haven't already).
Beyond that, good work so far, and there's a good bit of content already, though I did only find/notice this game today, when it's already on version 0.3 (so I jumped in with all the content it has to offer all at once), but it's got a good build-up so far. I especially love how Lisa keeps going back and forth between her "desires" and wanting to be faithful. There's also a good bit of actual consequence to dialogue options, where you can miss out on entire series of pictures if you pick the "wrong" option, which I think is good!
Also Our Chat Group, NtrGram, NTR Phone, NTR Mobile, Chat Noir, Our Frozen Hearts (and probably some more I'm forgetting); and then there's all the innumerable phone games with 3D art (which I personally don't like, so I usually don't even try them), plus some others that don't fully exist as phone apps, but make extensive use of phone messages to deliver a lot of the story, like My New Girlfriend, Shadows of Ambition, Wife Promotion etc.
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- Jun 7, 2018
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Hello! Thank you so much for such a detailed review!
As for how to get f95, I will write you in private messages, so as not to spoil it to other participants and leave them interested in finding it on their own.
As for dialogs. I am not a native native speaker of English, which can lead to posts with expressions and allegories. What sounds normal in my language may be strange to an English speaker.
I would be happy to give the texts for proofreading and editing, but I do not know where and to whom to contact. Please tell me where I should write, there is a special thread on this site?
- Mar 2, 2018
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You can, presumably, post a thread for it here, in the Recruitment & Services subforum. I'm pretty sure that's where I've seen similar threads before in the past. I'll pre-emptively say that due to liking the game enough, I'd be willing to help out with proofreading and correcting writing (which is kind of what spurred me to mention the writing in the first place), so I can definitely offer a helping hand if you do choose to go down that avenue, but up to you, of course!
- Jun 30, 2024
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I am very glad you are also thinking about the business side of things. You are receiving a lot of good feedback in this thread, and you are probably also looking at what the competition is doing, but not every suggestion might be worth the development time and money. Trust in yourself to make sound choices.
I like your idea of a Gallery as an item in the Main menu would be a good compromise, even if we both agree it wouldn't be perfect for immersion.
Renaming the MC isn't that important, especially if the characters mostly refer to you as something other than your name, like buddy, friend, boyfriend, dude, etc. But with your engine rewrite it would at least be possible. You will consider your time and money.
I am playing the last update right, and I'm VERY impressed with how you've remade the engine to now present real text and individual images, instead of a slide show. I was very impressed that now I could scroll up and down the conversation, and click on images to zoom in, and how the Load/Save and Options screens are adapted to the phone format! This is very good! Regardless of anything else said in this thread, NOW you have the TOOLS to make the game and tell the story you want! I am very excited for you.
One final suggestion. The little dark box to show MC's thoughts is a unique story telling device I haven't seen in most other phone games. It might be unique in this phone genre! I agree that it should NOT be at the top of the screen, because that's where the 'New message'-box shows up. But perhaps it's not good that it hides the very words at the bottom that the MC is thinking about. Maybe the dark thought-box could be somewhere closer to the middle?
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Hello! Thank you for your very detailed feedback!
As for the gallery, as I wrote earlier, I will make a survey and based on its results I will make a decision on the necessity, or lack thereof, of introducing a gallery into the game and in what form.
I am very pleased that you devoted a whole block to the fact that the difference between the old style of the game and the new engine is noticeable. This is very important to me, since it tells me that I did not waste my time and I am grateful to you that you noticed and emphasized this. As well as the details with the save menu and settings. Thank you for paying attention to this, I really tried to do the best for the players. Let me still be a noob in game programming, but I am trying to gain experience and make the game better.
As for changing the name of MC, I am still thinking about it, as in everything that I doubt, I rely on the opinion of the community, so one of the Mondays I will make a survey on this topic too
As for the dark frame about MC's thoughts. Version 0.3 is essentially a pilot version with this feature. Perhaps you are right and it is worth changing its location. This is the first comment about the need for such a replacement, I will continue to collect data. And if this becomes a system comment, then, as always, I will conduct a survey Well, and then based on its results, I will make a decision. Thank you very much for your interest in my game, support and feedback!
- Jun 7, 2018
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Oh, man, you're right! This is my mistake! There should have been "or"
Thank you for pointing this out!
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No thanks)) I would also like to draw attention to the wife's clothes. At the bar she has a blouse with buttons, then with a cutout, then with long sleeves, then with short ones))). It just really catches the eye - as if these are different characters. Well, I would like to wish good luck to the project and advise not to rush the events too quickly (many games of this kind make a broken whore out of the wife in a week, and a cuckold out of the husband, and a dead end comes - no intrigue, no game. This disappoints everyone)
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fThe game gives three paths of development Netorare, Netorase and the path of love. Of the three stats (Love, Lust, Freedom) which one (or combination) should be stressed for each route? Thank!