waoo what a game!! Netorase Phone has some competition here! i like the character plot twist, it makes it more exiting knowing whats going on behind the MS's back.
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To be fair, grammar in texting is far less important. If this was a more traditional narrative experience, then yes, I would suggest the dev consider farming their community for misspellings and grammar corrections.
To the dev, there are affordable, if not free grammar/spelling checking software you can check out if you feel that texting needs to look more formal, you'd simply put anything written or said by the characters in there and see what it suggests.
Another thing you can try, as an aspiring writer myself who hopes to publish a book one day, giving characters more unique 'voices' that can flesh out their nuances. Again, not all that important since people tend to use more shorthand than not when texting.
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Hello! Thank you for your advice! I have now found an assistant editor, who is a native English speaker. I think this should help me make the texts better and more believable. However, thank you for your tips, I'll take them into account!
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Hello, there is no such document yet. I will quickly put the question in my patreon and clarify with subscribers how much such a document is needed
You know one ntr phone game you know all of them. Is there a website all of these dev copy the story cuz all of them are the same. Your girlfriend goes to a party and make out with some other dude and her best friend sending you a text about it.... -.- ALWAYS THE SAME. I dont even need to play new content to know what will happen next.
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Hello, thank you for your feedback.
Lisa didn't make out with other men in the bar.
Your claim to the genre itself. Due to the limitations of the information delivery engine, namely just phone correspondence, there are not many options for what you can tell through this. And in general, in NTR games, the plot with the bar is a hackneyed cliche.
I do not know what kind of experience you have playing NTR games,I have played ALL the games that are on this site and not the RPGM engine. I can say with confidence that all the storylines have already been somewhere. Some are more common, some are less common.
The value of each plot is precisely in how appropriate or inappropriate certain lines are embedded in it.
Moreover, as someone aptly said on this forum, people have complaints about the monotony of 10 NTR phone games, but there is no claim to the monotony of 1000 harem games.
Consider that there are lots of options in the dialogue, and when you reach the first checkpoint with the lust points there are already so many answer to check that going over all of them to check the other paths require too much time, so having a walkthrough or a feature that tells you how many lust point each choice is may be a big time saver, like this players don't need to go over the whole skipping again from the start trying to find the right combination of answers.
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Kind of ignoring the stats since its early, but I like the options being granted and the thoughts to understand the consequences of those choices which is often missing in these games until you see it later. A decent start to this, considering I am just getting into the Kira content.
In my opinion, this game has huge expectations. The way the game is going, it has choice bases like NTR path, Hot wife path or cuckold. Altough the game might come to a similar ending but the conversations are totally different. Netorase Phone doesnt have that.
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this game needs a walkthrough or stats screen. I used an urm file to see what each choice makes, and it has lust, freedom and another point system. But to anyone playing without this context you'd won't know what path your headed towards. how much points you need and what points in particular. the urm file doesn't work great on this either because the screen is like a phone, so the majority of the screen is cut off. I get this is a phone sim like game but plz just make the screen full plz as an option at least. i think the whole project is great but all these things hold it back.
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Hello, so there is a button with statistics at the top
However, yes, I will make difficulty modes in the new version that will allow you to see the number of points when choosing an easy level to complete.
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This is a bug that will be fixed in the next update. Roll back to previous choices and make different ones.
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Yes, go back and make different choices. It's not a bug.
Both freedom and lust have to be less than 60 to get "answer me".
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Hello! I'm really sorry that this happened. Instead of meaning "or" I set the value "and". This will be fixed in a future version. https://f95zone.to/threads/phone-story-v0-3-taptus.236390/post-15881716Now you can either replace this value in the skin yourself, or change the number of points.