VN Ren'Py Phone Story [v0.5] [Taptus]

[rhune]

I actually I really love your game I follow the path of love and I really appreciate you give the choice

 

[KenneX]

I have 2 saves, one focusing on lust (40 FREE, 133 LUST, 144 LOVE), the other one focusing on freedom (145 FREE, 76 LUST, 88 LOVE). I really hope I won't be locked out of some corresponding paths in the future due to 1 wrong choice (like masturbating in the shower) or excessive requirements (like >150 freedom when I have 145). Also hope for a route that has open relationship only on her side .

 

[StrawberryCheese83]

Yeah, weird cliffhanger at the end! Moreover, the ending for all paths is the same, but we know from the words of the Taptus that this is not Lisa!
Moreover, MC somehow had to react to Karl’s car, he should know what kind of car he drives, if after all Lisa and Karl are in the car, then judging by their pose, there can’t be any excuses, but its not her... right?
We'll have to wait a month to find out, unfortunately.
If you play one path, then the update really turned out to be small, but if you take the fact that there are three paths in the game and many different options to choose from, then it is clear that much more work has been done, but still i wanted more!

The question is why Kira sent messages to Lisa just photos of sex with Karl that happened a month ago, but there was no conversation between them, just photos - is this how it should be?

I am with you, but lets see what the next Update bring to light. For me in the Car this is neither Lisa nor Karl. If you go back to point where Lisa sens a Selfie to MC out of Karls Car, you can clearly see that he isn t wearing a necklace and even the clothes doesn t fit. Are you also on the Love path??? Taptus wouldn t be so cruel and would make Lisa to give a BJ to Karl in his Car (on the Lovepath). This wouldn t make sense. As for Kira, i kicked her as soon as possible to the side. I hate Characters in every VN who are trying to manipulate a Wife/Girlfriend/Boyfriend/Husband or whatever. Kira and Karl are deadly poison and both are imho disgusting Characters and i want them out of the way..for good. I know such ppl irl and believe me...you don t want any of those around you or your loved ones. These ppl doesn t care about a "good" or "exciting" feeling for life and they don t want "freedom" in a relationship. These are just sloppy excuses for ruining healthy friendships or relationships. Their only main goal is to plant a seed of destruction/trouble/lies/doubts and watching them grow. If they can t make any trouble, they are unhappy. I hate those ppl.

 

[Taptus]

One of the photos from the gym has two belly buttons. I'm not picky because it's a small thing, but it's worth polishing later.

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That's why I said above that it's better to focus on the author's replies or patreon/boosty. AI could well have generated a similar, albeit soapy, model that differs from the author's text and idea. I wouldn’t get hung up on such a small and soapy piece of a picture.

Oh, thank you for pointing this out, I'll definitely fix it in the upcoming additions!

 

[Luc77]

good but too short

 

[Taptus]

I have 2 saves, one focusing on lust (40 FREE, 133 LUST, 144 LOVE), the other one focusing on freedom (145 FREE, 76 LUST, 88 LOVE). I really hope I won't be locked out of some corresponding paths in the future due to 1 wrong choice (like masturbating in the shower) or excessive requirements (like >150 freedom when I have 145). Also hope for a route that has open relationship only on her side .

Hello! There are no incorrect passages in the game, there are passages with different focuses of attention and different emphasis on points, they are all correct. The game is done so that the player would try different ways because they are all played differently

 

[trypphouston]

Beyond the donation limit this month. But the link for 0.6 is so desired.

 

[O1duvai]

Oh, thank you for pointing this out, I'll definitely fix it in the upcoming additions!

I can find the ones that catch my eye and send them, for example, here in a personal message. If you want, I don't know, maybe paid subscribers have already done this.

good but too short

Dude. I've seen games that are two years old and they have way less content. There are 14 gallery pages, not to mention the text.
Don't play games with ctrl. In Valhalla you'll be left without beer for that.

 

[Taptus]

I can find the ones that catch my eye and send them, for example, here in a personal message. If you want, I don't know, maybe paid subscribers have already done this.

Yes please write to me in the BOS on this site all the bugs that you found

 

[ukthrowaway69]

NTR phone slop with AI art is becoming the Isekai genre of porn games, Jesus

 

[ItsNotUs]

Hello, this is not a bug, at this moment Kira and Lisa are in the same room and Lisa just asked to send Kira these photos in the messenger, and the discussion of this action takes place behind the scenes

Description behind the scene? I played the Love Path and the NTR, i didn’t see such a description there, only the fact that Kira mentioned to MC that she knows Karl - i think it was necessary to add at least some text, personally i didn’t understand, i thought there was some kind of bug, because Kira sent only photos without any greetings.
I mean it's hard to understand Kira photo scene.

 

[ItsNotUs]

I am with you, but lets see what the next Update bring to light. For me in the Car this is neither Lisa nor Karl. If you go back to point where Lisa sens a Selfie to MC out of Karls Car, you can clearly see that he isn t wearing a necklace and even the clothes doesn t fit. Are you also on the Love path??? Taptus wouldn t be so cruel and would make Lisa to give a BJ to Karl in his Car (on the Lovepath). This wouldn t make sense. As for Kira, i kicked her as soon as possible to the side. I hate Characters in every VN who are trying to manipulate a Wife/Girlfriend/Boyfriend/Husband or whatever. Kira and Karl are deadly poison and both are imho disgusting Characters and i want them out of the way..for good. I know such ppl irl and believe me...you don t want any of those around you or your loved ones. These ppl doesn t care about a "good" or "exciting" feeling for life and they don t want "freedom" in a relationship. These are just sloppy excuses for ruining healthy friendships or relationships. Their only main goal is to plant a seed of destruction/trouble/lies/doubts and watching them grow. If they can t make any trouble, they are unhappy. I hate those ppl.

Don't pay so much attention to the details, these are AI images, they may differ!
I started playing this game only because the dev gave the choice to go along three paths, yes, i play first the Love Path and then the NTR path and compare, NTS i don’t like it at all!

It seems to me that this is Karl and Lisa in the car, you just know, the dev can give an explanation in two ways in the Love Path, she is fill very drunk and this is just such an angle, although why does Karl have such a pose? And on the NTR path she gives him a blowjob.
Lisa didn’t drink much, MC warned her, the bartender said that she ordered light drinks. Why did she get drunk then? Karl druging her?
When MC wrote messages to Lisa, it’s clear why she didn’t answer, but Karl answered him, he said that he would take "good care" of Lisa and then stopped answering!
Yes, probably the simplest solution will be that it is not Karl and Lisa in the car, but we will find out only in a month, unfortunately!

Some one wrote above that he don’t like MC because he’s so cynical and rude towards people, to Karl for example.
Yes, i also think so that this is very bad behavior to use people like that, but this update showed that Karl is no better than his friend, he asks him to keep his wife company so that she doesn’t get bored, and Karl, through deception and manipulation, is trying to get out information about the project and, of course, fuck Lisa! Well, you know they deserve each other./ Apparently this is the kind of friendship the corporats have, they just use each other!

 

[Hotcoupleeasy]

Amazing game . Really great.

 

[redoubt27]

Brilliant adding the Gallery, genius adding the hints...

One small error: F24 in the gallery, the hint is not English...
And my translation skills are lacking.

 

[Agglutinant]

Like the game, but can't wait to finally enter in the NTS route.

It's so annoying to have the MC freak-out like an idiot when you willingly push Lisa and Karl together lol

 

[O1duvai]

Brilliant adding the Gallery, genius adding the hints...

One small error: F24 in the gallery, the hint is not English...
And my translation skills are lacking.

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But pointing out that the hint is not meaningful would be a useful comment.
For example, i miss this because the image opened without any additional conditions, during the passage.

 

[redoubt27]

But pointing out that the hint is not meaningful would be a useful comment.
For example, i miss this because the image opened without any additional conditions, during the passage.

My apologies, I thought...

One small error:

was sufficient to express the error (and by extension the hint) is not meaningful...
And as you say, the image opens by just playing, therefore a "small error".

 

[noxcha]

I have mixed feelings. It's a good game, but the update is too short. Moreover, it ends on a cliffhanger, which is lame. If it weren’t for the cliffhanger and the short update, I would pay for version 0.6 right away, but I might as well wait until it's free.

 

[redoubt27]

A couple more small errors...
F173 - the chat image is for the "one or two drink" choice, but shows up in the "let her drink" convo with Karl.
F174 - is vice versa, the image is for the "let her drink" choice, but shows up in the "one or two drink" convo with Karl.

Not a big deal, but seemed inconsistent in context of the Karl & Lisa conversation.