VN - Ren'Py - Phone Story [v0.83] [Taptus]

Art is a strongest point of this game. Wife is georgeus. Thats it.
Pacing is bad. Not like slow burn pacing, more like The Walking Dead season 2 TV series pacing. Everyone keep having same dialogue over and over again without moving the plot forward. Dialogue feels forced and railroaded. Reminded me of famous "Anyway, how is your sex life" line. And repetitive. Let me elaborate more why this is badly written story in my opinion.
MC`s or the husband`s personality is incosistent, he switches between edgy master manipulator and insecure shy schoolgirl.
There is different routes like NTR\NTS or even love route(dont know, didn try), which is a plus.
There are better written games in this genre, my recomndation is to try them first and if this is your jam and you want more than this game may be able to satisfy an itch or tide you over until update to another game. Writing is just too bad, which is a pity because art is good.

The AI generated artwork stands out, and the story is serviceable, but it doesn’t do much to distinguish itself from similar games in the Phone NTR games. While the premise shows potential, the current lack of meaningful choice detracts from the experience. Most decisions seem to have minimal impact on the story or the content, with dialogue changes feeling more cosmetic than consequential.
Hopefully things get better in future updates.

This game is very exciting, I love the art, I know it's AI but it was a lot of work to implement it with this game, I'm waiting for the updates.
I hope that in the future there will be flashbacks from Lisa's point of view and how the conversations were or if there were more interactions with the male characters that have appeared, and I want to see how it develops with the unknown number.

The Best of the Mobile NTR Genre

I’ve tried many NTR games, and this one stands out as one of the best in the genre. Let’s break it down:

• Art: The visuals are well-done. I’d rate them a solid 4/5.
• Meaningful Choices: The branching paths and impactful decisions are impressive, earning a 4.5/5.
• Writing: This is where the game truly shines. The writing is incredible, with nuanced storytelling and compelling dialogue. For me, writing is the most critical element in this type of game, and here it deserves a flawless 5/5.

Overall, this game combines all the key elements needed to create a standout NTR experience, and the writing elevates it to the next level. If you’re a fan of the genre, it’s a must-play

The art is really nice, AI? So what?

AI art too can be both trash or not trash, this is probably not trash, instead it probably can turn out to be gold if it's not already, at least in my eyes

Story is also going up nicely, eagerly waiting for the updates

Keep it in mind, praises are coming from someone who's doesn't generally like NTR genre

I love the graphics, they are beautiful. The story is showing lots of promise and I hope both cheating and sharing happens. The wife is wonderfully rendered and the style is very nice. I hold great hopes for the Trainer and the Colleague, but also hoping for random encounters.

The AI artwork is good, and the story is functional. There's just not a lot different from any of the other 'Phone NTR' games out there right now.
The choices don't seem to currently matter much, in terms of where the story goes or what content you see. The dialogue after each choice changes slightly, but it feels more like a placebo choice than anything substantial.
I'm optimistic though. It feels like a demo, and the demo isn't bad. The character development is better than average, and the progression of the story doesn't feel overly rushed. Hopefully in a few patches, choices will be more impactful, and the story will get better.

Re Reviewing after the rework, really love everything atm with the game, first is nice to have the stats there to check the direction of the game and do what u want, art is beautiful and writing is good! lets hope the dev keeps on this track for the future.

DAMN! this game is a hot start

the model is great. the story is good so far.

only complaints are nitpicks. few too many photos and maybe a bit wordy. overall though im sure this will get sharpened up as time goes on.

really hot the way it progresses so far. im really hoping this game gets the attention it deserves

This is a really promising prologue - with the pace of the story, the graphics used for the lady characters. The NTR phone genre is growing on F95, but I'd dare say this one is quite special. Looking forward for more

A great game in the genre of the phone. There are as many as three routes for the development of the story, which is good on the one hand, but on the other hand it will increase the time for updates to be released. I really love Netorase, so I am very happy to play in this genre.