Hi SuperWriter
I truly enjoy this story, as well as your other works, you bring your characters to life. I am not personally a fan of the graphics changes, in general. There are a few things better (brighter lighting helps the characters pop more), but overall they seem more cartoony to me. There are also some strange artifacts around the eyes (yellowish eyeballs and bad mascara). I know others love the changes, and the important thing is that you love your work and are inspired to write more.
And that's where I have to get a bit critical. There are a lot of really easy grammar mistakes to fix in the first part of the story. The images are enchanting, before AND after, but the story is what matters most, and so it seems to me that by adding an extra 1/10 of the time and effort needed to re-do images, you could polish up the writing and story. Many VNs that I read end up getting some text improvements throughout, after each release. That is a great way to make sure the final product is amazing, but also gets people to re-read the story on each release, and to provide new feedback
Again, though - great story and artwork, you are one of the best out there right now
I truly enjoy this story, as well as your other works, you bring your characters to life. I am not personally a fan of the graphics changes, in general. There are a few things better (brighter lighting helps the characters pop more), but overall they seem more cartoony to me. There are also some strange artifacts around the eyes (yellowish eyeballs and bad mascara). I know others love the changes, and the important thing is that you love your work and are inspired to write more.
And that's where I have to get a bit critical. There are a lot of really easy grammar mistakes to fix in the first part of the story. The images are enchanting, before AND after, but the story is what matters most, and so it seems to me that by adding an extra 1/10 of the time and effort needed to re-do images, you could polish up the writing and story. Many VNs that I read end up getting some text improvements throughout, after each release. That is a great way to make sure the final product is amazing, but also gets people to re-read the story on each release, and to provide new feedback
Again, though - great story and artwork, you are one of the best out there right now