VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Pleasureville - Maddy's Diary [Ep. 2] [Juicyful]

It's a shame that the game is discontinued. It's a very good story that changes (the parent part on one side and brother/sister on the other is very well found). In any case, this is an excellent start to the story.

Cant rate it higher cause its too damn short. But it has nice renders, decent hotness, and decent sex scenes. Some are cut too short, i mean some kissing anc cumming its kind of way too short in my opinion.

Also the ages need to be customized in order to avoid some cringe, but that doesnt stop the fact that balancing them accordingly maybe will make it worst, specially that muppet, its a hard pill to swallow.

Maybe in the future, if dev decides to improve scene length a bit, work on the lighting, cause some scene in the dark are (in my monitor at least) hard to watch unless i mess with settings and make the image ugly.

And if it doesnt take like 1 year to release one episode that has like 5 minutes of gameplay...

Maybe in the future it will reach 4 or 5, in my opinion i dont see it reaching 5 (i may be wrong, i wish to, cause i like the basic things i seek in a game and this has them), cause i see a pretty specific fixation on one theme, and im not foreseeing a good future in that aspect. And also because of that male "adult boy".

I don't understand how this have only five star reviews. This is supposed to be loli, but daughter and her friend both from their face looks to be slightly above middle aged.

Facial expressions are below average to bad, animations are sparse and with a few frames when they do happen.

5 Stars because, for a change, this dev knows what is doing: a porn game. He´s not trying to do "art", and not bore the players telling an amazing (in their head) story. He´s not lecturing the player about his political agenda, what he thinks is morally correct, or whatever. He´s not repeating the clichés of lame TV shows, movies or postmodern mass media and pop culture. He don´t resort to pathetic narrative tricks like "superpowers", "hypnotism", "magic", "mind control" in order of getting that an even more pathetic MC gets laid... or any other of the things that most of the devs (maybe 80-90%?) do when trying to do a porn game, or whatever they think they are doing.

This dev makes a porn game. Period. And it´s a really good one. The story is naughty (in a good way), sexy and taboo. It is well narrated since almost every single scene is exciting, and none of them are boring. 3D models are great, there are variety of kinks... An excellent porn game. Nothing more, nothing else.

I cannot say anything bad about this one. Everything is spot on. The writing is good, the renders and animation are good, the models are terrific, the story is sexy and tugs at the heart watching these two young girls wake up to their sexuality and innocently explore their desires. The parents are a bit pervy but it works.

This is a very interesting start! (Ep.1)

I love the theme of this game! For the first time I see an incest story from the daughters perspective and it is awesome!
In most stories a perverted brother or father will be the MC and corrupt his innocent family, but this time the innocent daughter is the MC and starts to learn about sex and become corrupted. This is an interesting twist and a welcome change!

The art is good and the writing is grounded and believable, even though a little too fast paced.
I set high hopes into this game and already wait for the next chapter.

So far (ep.1) the game surprised me with intelligent dialogue and story and very nice "directing" - both the angles and when and how to change camera are right-on.

There's nothing like unnecessary dragging or pointless dialogue. I almost never read the texts in these games, this time I read everything.

It also has a nice paste - not wasting time while not giving too much.

Great job so far!

Hate to review things so early into it, but I just have to. I don't I've seen a hotter start to an AVN before.

Story is starting out amazing -- We will see. Love how the sibling interaction is working. 5/5

Renders -- Not top tier, but close to the next level down. 4.5/5

Animations -- They are limited, but good. 4.5/5

Other -- The biggest thing to me about incest is the dirty talk. While I didn't like the mom/dad dirty talk, the others were great. Brother/sister, Mom/daughter interactions were amazing imo. 5/5

Overall rating -- 5/5 Hopefully this rating is still relevant in the future. I have high hopes.

-- Rannell