VN - Ren'Py - Por(n)tals [v0.2] [OneHend]

Very solid start to the game. 0.2 Improved the render quality by a good bit, which was my only real concern after the first version. Aside from that, the story developed and it's coming along pretty well, I'd say. There are some issues with grammar and spelling at some points but for the most part the game is very solid, and I look forward to seeing more of it.

Very good game sex scenes were a bit rushed, the plot hasn't really started yet and the renders are quite average however I loved the characters and the humour. The plot we have seen is original enough to be it's own thing bit it is not completely unique. The game appears to be going on a harem route however it does force you into picking between girls on certain choices with different scenes locked behind different play routes this does rpomote replayability but goes against the harem idea of the game. Overall the game was a very enjoyable experierence and at the end of the day that's what matter most. Looking forward to the next update.

All in all a very unpleasant experience.
The story is a generic move-to-colleagues-house plot, but it is overall good enough.
The humor us fine,.
The graphics are outdated but usually I like this style, so I'd give it a pass.
Some of the already shown LIs are enjoyable and unique. Some others are not, but as far as I got, I had always a choice to avoid someone, so all good there.
Of course there is the dildo that ruins the virgin, but I got to accept that it is unavoidable.
The MC is insufferable and forces his porn opinions on a frequent basis onto the player, but he has his bright moments and at least some damage can be prevented by choices.
And he is overall not that bad looking.
Then the overused idiot "friend" appears and continues ro ruin about 50% of every scene.
I tried very hard to endure its monologues and brainfree dialogues, but it is just way to much.
Of course the Mc agrees with it and soon he gets the "best friend" label.
Eventually I started skipping to get to idiot-free scenes, just to being forced to roll back because MC has to answer.
Then we come to free time events.
That are enabled by your past decisions.
Which you get told right before the free rime event starts.
I considered to reload and try to find the decisions I made that gave me no points.
Than I remembered Chad.
And I deleted it.
Never understood why devs ruin their work with these insufferable characters, but in the end it was not worth it to endure.
A vast reduction of screen time of Chad (or complete removal...), a leading explanation of the free time mechanic at the beginning of the game, and maybe this will be a pleasant experience.

Hey! This is good!! Mhm! This VN has identity! it's pretty well written too, I wasn't bored and my attention wasn't slipping whole time I was reading/"playing" and I had quite few good laughs.
I wasn't expecting much, but this is helluva nice surprise. Nice looking models, decent and enjoyable story, sympathetic characters with distinct personalities, good and pretty cohesive writing with some roughness here and there. Plus, some subjective things. Like, why do you have to choose from four outcomes? Just make them unlockable successive scenes that you can see (Alice > Kate > Chad) and if you don't have enough points, then you'll just miss these. Unneeded feature as it is, in my opinion.
Tho, all in all this is a good VN.

You really should check this one out. Oh, and don't forget too follow/support dev, if you liked it. (ofc, if your IRL situation lets you)

Great first showing overall. Some praise and 1 small criticism.

Girls look great
Comedy is pretty funny

There are some grammar issues but nothing atrocious. The sentences make sense, just some simple issue's where (as an example), it should be I am, not I'm.
(Some random person) "Are you going to the store?"
(You) "Yep, I am" as compared to "Yep, I'm"

Like I said, Nothing major or anything like that, and overall great first showing from a new dev!
Definitely going to be following along this one, keep up the good work

Really good 1st release.

Yes, the initial plot is not that original with many tropes already seen (but hey, what has not already been done today ?), and even tho we do not have a lot to go by atm, I still got hooked really quick.

Game is really funny (and that is something we don't get enough), LIs are all really nice (mb it's just me but, I really, really like HS2 models), and music are really well used. Story, even tho not original, still seems really interesting so, we'll see where this goes.

2 problems for me so far : A lot of missing words (mostly only prepositions so dialogues are still understandable) and, there's something weird with the arms/hands sometimes when the character lift it it just looks too long/big, mb it's just me but it felt really weird.

One original thing : MC design looks really great, another thing we don't see enough.

Anyway, a really good first release and I hope to see more soon.