Ren'Py - Abandoned - Porn King [v0.1.0] [DarkBasic]

It's short but definitely worth your time I'd highly recommend. Its good that there are a few fetishes on offer, can't wait to see more content in future updates. The puzzles are simple and the hints make them impossible to fail at (Which is a good thing).

This one (version 0.0.9) is a very bad beginning for a game. The story has very little interest and has very low quality renders and animations. Even though the premise could have given place to a quality story and an interesting one, I don't think they've managed to achieve that. Maybe it'll be worth a try down the line with tons of updates, but I think it is not the case now.

Not a bad start. I suggest aging the character just a bit, it can be a turn off for those who do not like Shota. I like the humor, suggest you keep that up. The English is not the best, but still mostly understandable except for the occasional, that I assume to Russian, words. Game has promise

v0.0.4
Definitively not a bad way to start a game the first time...
- The renders need more polish, but they are ok
- the story itself looks promising, but i never rate a game based on what COULD be, more what' in there RIGHT NOW
- The gameplay itself is not that bad...
BUT:
BIG MINUS = puzzles
There is no need in such kind of VN at all to have puzzles for the story. Puzzles might be ok to get some bonus rewards like renders.
Being forced to play puzzles to continue is just a "turn off" for me.
Right now, this game is on "deleted" list, but i will not hesitate to give em a second try once it has more content, and once the puzzles are gone (or modded out)

v0.0.4

Definitely needs more work, mainly getting rid of pointless "minigames" that only pads the runtime,.
Imo no need to stretch out the game with something that doesn't even reward the player with lewds, if dev feels like they need to have something besides the mainplot then introduce hidden bonus pics or something like that.

Writing is so-so, nothing to write home about but not blatantly bad.
Dialogue is brief and blunt.

Renders needs polish, and a bit more work imo.
Characters are nice enough but nothing great, although I wished we could have seen more of the neighbor lady with the headscarf (she looks nice)

I want to say it looks promising but Dev needs to just get better as I'm sure they will if they keep improving the game as loads of other devs have shown earlier.

I rate this russian/10

I give this VN 3 stars
PROS
Story is ok
Renders are ok
CONS
Puzzles
Overall
I'm not a fan of puzzles in VNs. For me they distract from the story. I came across the first combo puzzle. I entered the combo, and nothing. If there weren't any puzzles, I might enjoy it. Good luck to the dev with this project