Just horrible. Another time when I've got scummed by positive reviews.
Writing catastrophically idiotic. Character dialogs and interactions feels like they were writen by AI, but I think that even AI would have done a better job. Approximately 70% of text is straight empty bs which doesnt have any value in story, char development etc. Even my diploma had less empty fillers in it. MC and others repeat multiple times the same things in the same scene and in general they speak like basement dwellers which have their first interaction in years with people irl.
Example, mc goes to sign membership at the gym and owner goes with him through all of the gym facility (gym area, locker rooms, showers) explaining mundane stuff and talking about absolutely insignifant things, like marble in the showers, whole game stretch scenes and dialogs the same way.
MC is absolute moronic idiot. Story explain his behavior by having anxiety problems or smth, but he actually have 8-10yo mentality at best. His conversations, behavior and conclusions are irritating and stupid af.
Scenes is pure dissapointment. People write here about greatly done scenes, but in reality... Terrible angles, girl sucks mc but one angle shows her HAIR in pov, other one her back and no angle with actual visiblility of her chocking on his cock. Second bj scene was the same level. Pussy licking scene clipping with black screen and half of it part was done by reversing backwards of the first part. Lighting is weird, sometimes body parts which should by hidden in shadow have lighting on them etc. So where is great scenes?
Horribly wasted time.
