Giving it 4 stars purely for interesting themes so I'd like to encourage the creator to continue. But beyond that here isn't much to do/read here yet, basically just an intro, so not really much to rate.
promising start , the story seems interesting and the world building too. there is a few bugs for now but the overall gameplay is good.
as for things to improve i would sugest to make the UI a bit more modern and maybe leave a bit more space to images.